FF-Book 2:A TWISTED LOVE-Update 10 sept pg 145 - Page 42

Abhay needs to kill something

very careful description n awesome writing

thnx 4 pm

I am eagerly waiting for the next part just to see our Abhay making a pulp of Jai. Well it looks like even big bro knows about our hero's temper. Poor Maithli she just cannot trust anyone to go as per her plans. First there is the unpredictable Sid who she has to handle and hot tempered Abhay then a very pregnant and emotional Pia and her two stupid wolfy brothers. Just loved the connection between tara and Pia. They seem to understand one another better and the feeling of haivng a best friend to talk toduring such a delicate stage was nicely potrayed. And what will happen to the Misha pia show down looks like Misha will have to wait for some time for that to happen. And Kabir darling first his girl friend is a witch now is he going to get spruced up inbetween the vampire and wolfs. Poor soul too much of excitement I hope he doesn't faint.

And thanks for your regular PM on all the fanfic updates. ITs very nice to see you update regularly and you can keep up the interest of the readers with the good level of excitement and suspense in every chapter. Leaving us hooked to your story.

Bye