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Posted: 14 years ago
liz this ss was totally awesome
loved the update
glad that all the problems and misunderstandings
were cleared and we gotta happy chappy family in the end
man do i love happy endings
adored this story and really enjoyed reading it
it superbly rocked
thanks for the pm!! :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omg that was so so so hot ;)) lived it
Omg so sweet they got back together as everything
Omg you only had 12 parts and it's the end :( I'm sorry I will not allow that...plz continue this is just the start na yaar...no old cont
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: yam29

Good updates...

And very nicely done.

Even so, I think it would have been better if u had stretched the story by just 1 or 2 more parts.

This FF had lot of passion, emotions, angry sex and making love.

Such things can't be ended abruptly. I mean, yeah, you've made a great ending but it feels very compressed.

Like too much chocolate in a banana split, you know? No, no.. Like gas compression in gas cycllinders or syringe, you know.

I hope I'm making sense and I await more of your FFs and pls update more of SMP.

And don't make a hurried ending but you are more than welcome to make many hurried updates. LOL 😆



🤣 1 to 2 more parts . . . Uh I would have nothing to right than LOL

AHAHA I understand, but u noe me gotta end things . . . 😆 I am a fool for taking on more than I can handle 😉

Yes SMP is now my only priority!

Love

Liz
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Posted: 14 years ago

haye tauba...i thought i was only one update behind but yahaan toh...you are on part 12 and you ENDED!? 😲...say what!? chalo...let me read...apparently Maan's a jerk as of part 9...or so my friend who reads your ff tells me...actually...she told me a few times at work this weekend 😆


Chapter 9

that opening scene...Geet clutching her stomach...omg...hardcore!! 👏...😲...😲...😲..OMG!!! W*F!? Rano beating Geet like that!! really...thats horrible...i literally sat staring at the screen for a minute before reading on...that was ridiculous!! ya she's mad and i get it...but to beat your grown daughter like that...hell...to beat anyone like that!? 😡...oh hell no!!! ok...so now im glad i didnt read it when you first posted it cuz i'd go crazy waiting...of course i knew Maan would find them..but that smirk..that smirk scares me

Chapter 10

i cant believe he took anjali like that...how could he?! you know...if i have a talent for making you people cry...you have a serious talent for making ME want to hate maan!!! 🤬 (im cursing at maan, not you 😆) ...geet running and falling...well picturized...👏...ok...i know he's trying to repent and be all apologetic for his actions...but when he said that being a mother isnt any more important than a father...oh hell no...now we've got issues! (i sound like some chick from the ghettos! ...see what you do to me!?) ...being a mother is definitely more important and carries more weight...she carried the child and delivered the child!! dont tell me that doesnt make mothers even more worthy!! 😡...what does this MSK think of himself!? im so tired of is misunderstanding geet and treating her like crap!! 😡..."ill snatch her and youll come running"...i just lost what little respect i had for this version of MSK 🤢

Chapter 11

his reply to geets sexual assault comment...left a horrid taste in my mouth...i swear..i made a face 🤢...how low can this man sink? 😡...so im reading too fast cuz i thought it said "anjali was her gift from hell"...🤣...my bad...

Chapter 12

ok...the fact that Geet let him have his way with her and touch her all over after the things he did and said...im losing respect for her as well ...have control woman!! sigh...good ending...but...i dont know...after all maan did...misunderstanding or not...just...cant get over it...

JAZ

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Posted: 14 years ago
So manipulation will start in july like you planned right?! Or can we expect a surprise soon?!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally another beautiful ff came to an end. loved it 2 da core.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww..i loved it...finally after all the obstacles in their life...Maan and geet are finally together as a married couple...and with another symbol of love on the way..
love the father-daughter relationship Maan and anjlai share...even she sides with her dad all the time...
and Geet's hormones...lolzzz...
i loved it all...it truly was a very special story...
p.s...once again...good luck for ur exams...hope u do well..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it lizzz... if it was in my hand i would never hav let u end this ff... i fall in love wid wateva u write... u r so so good in wateva u write... keep writing... thanx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow absolutely amazing...
well destiny played cruel game with them and then their misunderstandings...
finally everything sorted as their love was stronger and they stayed loving each other...
i cudnt believe that geet's mom wanted to kill the baby...
but geet was strong and made her life out of all these...

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Posted: 14 years ago
You finished it...what a beautiful ending!!! And a sexy one too...happy ending at last! YAY!!!!!!!!!

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