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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: ajenn
tonya u r back!!!
yeah!!! yippie yippie!! am so happy to receive another FF of urs..
I really loved ur previous FF but sadly u left it half way.
Dis is really a different from urs writing. Why so senti senti
But am sure ull b back wif ur funny trademark.. waiting for tat.
Wonder how u goin to plot it. Dis FF sounds vry serious.
Cos serious FF doesnt suit u.. It so not u... 😆
But i must say u proved me wrong. All d parts was mind blowing.
Esp d mandap part n d part Dev will b manhandling Geet.
i loved every line of Geet.
Keep updating. Am loving it.
Thx for d pM

thank you so much for your comments dear.

yes! very soon we will be back to our funny updates

you are right dear. this FF is very serious one with lot of dramatic concepts. really it is going to be a tough job for me to present it in a funny way. but i need not worry... because you all are with me to encourage me with your super duper comments. thanks dear

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Tonya

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: puth
awesome updates tonya...

thanks dear. i'm happy to interact with you after a long time...143

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: naamteeg
Hmmm, Tonya... interesting in many fronts...
- an FF instead of a SS

- a very dramatic start instead of a hilarious one

- long and descriptive updates instead of short and more dialogue ones

It is so different but amazingly good!!

It kept my mind on the edge.. it kept jumping from one conclusion to another. Never coming to the right conclusion😆 Here is how it went...

you: welcome to maan's wedding...in the mandap, maan is sitting next to the bride.

my mind: yes! Maan and Geet's wedding. Tonya is picking it up where she left of in her previous SS. So Geet is the bride!

you: suddenly a girl's face pops into his mind. maan is shocked and opens his eyes with a jerk

my mind: Must be Sameera his previous fiance who left him and ran away with his best friend and broke his heart... You see I have read a few other FFs🤣 So Geet is still the bride!

you: ye mujhe kya horah hai? why her face comes to my mind now? his heart beat quickens and he couldn't figure out what is happening to him.

my mind: hah? "his heart beat quickens"? It is a known fact only Geet can do this to Maan so the girl who popped into maan's mind is Geet! So Geet is not the bride. Then who is the bride??

you:dadima, jugnu mama, dev, anni and staff of Khurana Construtions all are happily enjoying the wedding proceedings.

my mind: If all the family and the KC gang is so happy about the wedding then Geet is the bride!

So this was the state of my mind till I got to part 2 and "Maan, I am your geet"😆

And then another roller coaster of who is telling the truth, why is Maan refusing to recognize her, why Geet so determined to convince everyone that they were married.

WHY? WHY? WHY? And then a big HOW popped into it!

HOW is Tonya going to turn this dramatic FF into a hilarious comedy?? HOW? HOW?

... my poor over heated mind😆 But it was just what it needed tonight.. a much needed distraction!

LOved it TOnya!!

Hi thanks for the awesome comments dear. also thanks for letting me know your state of mind...omg!!!! it got overheated because of maaneet.

acha...now let me post a question to your overheated mind...

if geet is not the Bride and then who is the Bride?

if you don't know the answer, you can seek help from Mr. Maan Singh Khurana who didn't even see the bride's face.

you: suddenly a girl's face pops into his mind. maan is shocked and opens his eyes with a jerk

my mind: Must be Sameera his previous fiance who left him and ran away with his best friend and broke his heart... You see I have read a few other FFs🤣 So Geet is still the bride!

OMG!!! you cracked me up with this Sameera idea and what a justification you gave to this idea of yours!!! i couldn't stop laughing. you are tooo good dear

jokes apart...

dear, i'll try my best to make this FF as funny as possible in few days.

thank you so much for encouraging me as always

143 dear

Tonya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#124

Awesome updates

loved them both loadz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: acjanfeb1
tonya, welcome back and you are back witha bang👏 . loved the update . indeed a great writer ,it is not easy to write romcom so differently with all the spices but you do amazingly ⭐️. your ff gives us fresh air to breathe and tickle our funny bones .great going while going through the updates ,you wrote geet works with NGO,jugnu mama lashed about unfortunate victim and maan confession about the past ,that she had left him . I feel all the dots are linked and geet is helping the maan's wife or lover to bring back in his life or to clear the air .
Am i right or wrong . if right then ,sorry for spilling the beans and wrong then a reader prediction and plz ignore it .

loved it and plz continue soon.

hi thanks for the awesome comments and compliments dear.

i really admire your ability to link various dots. i liked your prediction.

throughout the FF, i'll keep on giving the clues. so there is going to be a lot of work for your master brain. please keep giving such interesting predictions dear. i would love to read them.

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Tonya

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: Saams
wow buddy...I'm sooo happy to see you back with a new ff...And our super commentators Teju,naamteeg,maansee and others...Its gonna be another wonderful journey with everyone here..hehe
Although this one started on a serious note,commentators are doing a great job in making this a hilarious one..

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Saam

happy to see you too back dear.

you are right buddy. our super funny commentators are doing a great job to make this serious FF a hilarious one. you please just wait for few more days... then i too will join the commentators and lets have all the fun. really its gonna be a wonderful journey with all of you.

143 sweetheart

Tonya

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: maansee

hi tonya

143 ... good u r back... omg such a long update... u never typed this in one go... loved it... confusion is still there why maaneet is doing like this ... but this is the name of your ff mustery of mrs. msk... heheheheh... so never mind we will go with it...

about the update ... as always well written... geeting biting his finger and the way trying to avoid his question is good...

chup bilkul chup kehee hui geet mughe bahut pyarri lagti hai...

hi maansee,

thanks for the lovely comments dear. i guess, hearafter maan has to hear lot of CBCs from our sweet geet.

Geet : maan! CBC😡

Maan: CBC??????😕

Geet: CBC= Chup Bilkul Chup🤣

Maan: 😲😲😲

143 dear

Tonya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: teju2292
M:geet! tumne suna nai maine kya kaha? now wake up (OMG...how can one hear while in deep sleep? ufff...MSK and his unlimited attitude..lol)🤣
geet bites his finger. maan screams in pain🤣

M:ouch!!!🤣
G:(says loudly) hey babaji! ye maine kya kardiya? i have bitten the great Maan Singh Khurana's index finger🤣

G:(st)geet! what are you saying? it doesn't make any sense. koi bath nai. now maintain this track and save yourself🤣
G: maan! trust me. really i didn't know that it was your finger. had i known that, at least i would have asked for your permission before biting it🤣

M:(sarcastically) permission?🤣

G:ji

M:to bite my finger?🤣🤣

G: ji
G: she closes her eyes and opens her mouth widely and shows to him all her 36 teeth, as if Maan Singh Khurana is a dentist. 🤣

he pulls her towards him and covers her mouth with his palm. (hey buddies! at this point of story MSK can't use AKs to shut geet's mouth. so be patient n wait for AKs...lol...OMG!!! i'm not sure, in this FF when we will get to see an AK. oh man...is this ff also going to starve off AKs just like our GHSP. don't worry buddies...let's tr y few alternatives like some dream sequences...sounds great...haha...enough of my bak bak... lol)🤣
M: geet! who are you? (OMG!!...what a brilliant question...lol..)🤣

G: geet

M:geet! who are you? (oye MSK...phir se...koi hearing problem hai kya?...lol)🤣🤣

omg tonya who told u its not funny??????🤣🤣🤣🤣

i m laughing like hell dear...🤣🤣🤣

hi teja!

thanks for the highlights dear. actually you have done a remix of this FF. OMG!!!! how you picked all these lines? what a selection by you! when i read these lines one after the other i myself couldn't control my laugh. your remix version of this FF sounds far greater than the original version. you know what... i'm reading this post of yours again and again and killing myself by laughing. thank you so much dear.

Mystery of Mrs. MSK... remix version by Teja... recipient of Oscar Award👏👏👏...ufff kuch jyada hogaya.

as saam said, you people are really doing a great job with your hilarious comments. thanks buddy.

143...Tonya

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tonyahk

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Posted: 14 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: teju2292
M:your arms are slim with small fingers. am i right?🤣
M:geet! now have a look on my arms🤣
G: thoda lamba aur thoda bada🤣

M: very good.

G:thanks🤣

omg he is asking her about arms...🤣
G: i am sorry maan! mujhe nai patata ki ye aapka haath hai🤣🤣
again...
G: teek hai lets add ' geeettt!!!' also. "this is my arm. please don't bite it geeettt!!!". is it ok now?

🤣
wat if maan really write that on his arm??wat if dadi annie dev and all others see it...just imagine...😉🤣
he grasps geet's index finn this world. they are biting like anything. Buddies...Beware of Maaneet...lol..) 🤣🤣
(chalo...electricity production by biting fingers. no need for nuclear power plants..lol) 🤣🤣🤣🤣