MAANEET SS; destiny or faith...Thread One - Page 67

dats really gd...
thnx 2 shivangi...n 2 piya too..
n cngrats silky! :D

PART 12

PART 13

PART 14

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

PART 12

the way u started the ud is really very nice

superb

n followed by laughter was icing on the cake

loved maan when he asked geet to help him regarding living life in a better way..

nice

what happened to maan's mom??

hats off to u for putting roop tera mastana scene here

loved it

overall a very good ud yaar

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

PART 13

started off in a good way

savitri telling maan about her fears as a mom...

n dev acting in a sensible way...nice

this time maan might regret what he has done..

hope he had listened to dev..

bechara dev...totally helpless

loved geet n meera's convo

geet lost n thoughts n doesnt listen to meera...oh no...

desperate to read next part

Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

PART 14

maan...his inner distress...

geet...her restlessness

calling him was a good thought

geet worried n tensed for maan..

it was nicely written...

the way she covered up her confusion...too good..

dont know whats in store for them

desperate to read next part

continue soon if possible

promising precap..loving it...

forgot to mention...the banner was awesome...amazing...

couldnt be better...was the best...

thanks to the makers...😃

well i was waiting for ur comments...!!
glad u liked the update...and now when u have commented ill give another update
thanks u so much...!!
ya the banner makers are awesome loved it the core...!!

Thanku for ur encouragement and support...😃

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PART-15

Geet opens the door and is shocked to see maan. Maan is followed by dev,his mom savitri devi and Mrs. Sharma. On the other hand maan is shocked to see geet. Both of them are in a confused state of mind.

Geet: sir aap yaha ? and noticed dev too

Geet (self thought) inhe to maine pehle kahi dekha hai par kaha??

Maan: geet ye tumhara ghar hai

Savitri interrupts in between.

Savitri: Maan bte aap inhe jaante hai?

Maan: haan ma ye geet hai mere office mein mere saath hi kaam karti hai

Geet touches her feet.

Savitri: khush rahiye bte and hugs her. Badi hi susheel bachi hai

Geet: o main bhi kitni paagal hu aap log bahar kyu khade hai andar aiye na please…..

They all sat in the drawing room… Geet calls her beeji.

Geet: aunty g ab aapki tabiyat kaisi hai??

Savitri: bte aapko kaise mallom ki hum beemar the??

Geet: ji vo main maan sir ke saath Shimla gayi hui thin a project ke silsile mein tab muje sir ne bataya tha

Savitri looking at maan and thinking maan ek ladki ke saath Shimla gaye or unse baatein bhi kari…kya baat hai.

Savitri: vo bte umar ke saath ye sab to chalta hi hai par ab hum bilkul thik hai.

Meanwhile beeji comes and greets the guests….She is tensed about what is going to happen.

Savitri ji to beeji.

Savitri: aapki beti to badi hi susheel hai. Muje to badi pasand aa gayi hai apki geet. Isse milkar aise to laga hi nahin ki hum pehli baar mil rahe hai…aise lagta hai maano kab se hum inhe jaante hai. Ab humse or intezaar nahi hota aap please meera ko bulaiye.

Savitri (pointing towards maan)

Beeji: kyu nahin zaroor……geet puttar ja meera ko leke aa ja

Geet: ji beeji.

Geet is shocked with what all was happening and leaves. Dev is getting more and more frustrated. Maan on the other hand is too tensed. He notices Dev who is very uncomfortable.

Maan: kya baat hai dev tum kafi pareshan lag rahe ho?

Dev (self thought) ab kya bolu apko bro aapne meri baat bhi nahin suni…..muje to kuch bhi samaj nahi aa raha ab kya hoga. Mom to pure mood mein hai ki aaj rishta final karke hi jaengi……mujse ye sab nahin dekha jaega….

Maan: dev main tumse baat kar raha hu?

Dev does not say anything and leaves from the place saying he has some urgent piece of work. Maan is worried for him too now.

Maan(self thought) kuch to gadbad hai. Ye dev iss tarah se kabhi bhi react nahi karta. Par abhi main kya karu. Muje kuch na kuch to zaroor karna padega….main to geet ko pasand…..

Maan was thinking as meera comes in.

She wishes Savitri devi, Mrs Sharma and is told to sit next to maan.

Geet does not like this at all. But she controls herself and serves everyone with snacks with a fake smile on her face.

Maan is noticing Geet's behavior which is bit unusual from normal.

Savitri devi asks meera and maan to talk with each other, but maan and meera are both hesitant in talking. Beeji notices this and finds that something is wrong going on.

Savitri devi tries to get things normal.

Savitri: Mrs. Sharma kehna padega dono betiya sarva gun sampan hai…mann to karta hai dono ko hi apne ghar ki bahu bana lu.

Mrs. Sharma and Beeji smiles

Savitri: waise muje to meera kafi pasand aayi hai,,,,agar meri taraf se pucho to rishta pakka hai..bas ab bache apas mein baat kar le to hum sochte hai aage kya karna hai.

Meera is in tears listening this but she had no other option left with her instead of sitting there quietly. Maan and geet are totally confused. Geet leaves from the place without letting anyone know that she had left but maan had noticed her leaving.

Maan wanted to speak to her but he had no reason for it. Finally he thought of something….he took out his mobile and left the place telling that he had to make some urgent call.

Geet was in her room crying out badly. Geet (self thought): ye mere saath kya ho raha hai. Kyu maan sir ko main kisi or ke saath nahi dekh pa rahi hu. Muje to meera di ke liye kuch karna tha par ye maan sir…babaji please muje koi raasta dikhao. Kyu maan sir ka rishta hote hue main nahin dekh pa rahi hu. Muje meera di se zyada apne liye kyu bura lag raha hai jaise koi anmol cheez mujse chut rahii ho

Maan was searching for geet and he finally found her. He came into her room and locked the door. Geet noticed him and wiped her tears.

Geet: sir aap yaha or apne darwaza kyu band kar dia?

Maan: pehle ye batao tum ro kyu rahi ho

Geet: main kaha ro rahi hu sir…muje to meera di ke liye darr sa lag raha hai

Maan: geet baat to kuch or lag rahi hai, tumhe meera ke liye daar lag raha hai ya kisi or ke liye

Geet is again in tears and hugs maan and starts crying.

Both of them are lost in the hug. Finally Maan breaks the hug, holds her, calms her down and makes her sit on the bed.

Maan: geet muje batao ki baat kya hai?

Geet: kuch nahi bas aise hi vo meera di bilkul bhi khush nahi hai. Or vo jo ladka aapke saath aaya than a….maine use kahi dekha hai

Maan: kaun dev?

Geet: haan vo hi

Maan: par tum use kaha mili ho??

Geet thinks over it and then realizes, haan vo maine meera di ke pass unhi ki photo dekhi thi. Meera di unhi se pyar karti hai

Maan realizes why was Dev so tensed and frustrated…

Maan: dev mujse shayad yahi bolne aaya tha kal bhi or main bi na, kisi ki baat nahi suni apni hi parshani mein raha

Maan: kuch to sochna hi hoga

Geet: par ab kya karenge sir

Maan: tum tension mat lo geet main kuch sochta hu…abhi to muje bhi samaj nai aa raha par dekhna sab theek hoga.

Geet then notices maan's hand,, sir apko to kafi chot ayi hui hai haath pe,,aap apna bilkul bhi dhyaan nahi rakhte

Maan: tum jo ho mera dhyaan rakhne ke lie

Geet and maan eyelock. Maan breaks the eyelock and says tum na har waqt muje apni baton mein uljha leti ho

Geet: par maine kya kia??

Maan: acha tum nahi jaanti tumne kya kia hai…..ab ye batana padega……

He started moving towards Geet but as he approached towards her….

she smiles and leaves from her room

Maan(self thought) geet tum mano ya na mano par maine ye mehsus kar lia hai ki jaise main feel kar raha hi tum bhi waise hi kar rahi ho or jaldi hi kabool bhi karogi ki tumhare mann mein bhi mere liye ehsaas hai….waise usse pehle mujse iss musebat se bahar nikalna ha varna mom to aaj ye rishta pakka kar hi dengi.

So guys what do u think will happen next????

Please come up with ur comments…..ill be waiting….!!!😳😳😳

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awesome update dear so at last some confusion is cleared continue soon

PART 15