FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 38

Part 78: Frisco Update 1: yup! I called it there's bound to be a fiasco…oops…I misread …it's actually frisco…hmmm! Interesting!

This is such a short update….which is fine b/c it's so good, but still….I'm way too greedy! LOL!!

Oh boy…Archie is a fast…drowning in her beauty and massaging her arm…she's so annoyed and he's so dead if Maan comes to know…nice to see he's still a part of the storyline!

Good for Geet for being distant and indifferent b/c he's making a real bad1^st, 2^nd and 3^rd impression…like they say 4^th time is the charm.

OMG! He kissed her and she liked it…oh but it's Maan….WHAT?! he came along…when what was the point of all those departing lines and sorrow…so confused! Okay time to need part 2 to resolve all this confusion!

Part 78 Frisco Update 2: time to continue…YAY!

Secrets, secrets, secrets…when will Maan learn that geet hates it….stupid fella! But so sweet he came along to get her comfy….awww kitna shona hubby hai! And she agrees too….nice!

This place looks so beautiful…I wonder how the story would have been different with a SF environment instead of NY…who knows?! Maybe in a sequel!

Mystical place…nice way to describe it…awww! Grahapravesh…she blushes as he carries her in his arms…I love this and him!

So glad she asked him why he made her cry and create a scene at the airport…good for her…surprises are not Geet's strong suit, but Maan is such a cutie so all forgiven.

She actually asked about the Dev-Naini connection…oh and his reaction…and her guilt…I loved it…you played it out so perfectly. And love her persistent Geet is being that Maan talk to naini…what an awesome bhabhi!

Miscarriage and Naini….no wonder Geet is being so persistent…she's damaged and in pain and needs her big bro. Good for Geet!!

It all ends with a kiss…beautiful, cute and lovely ending.

Part 79: Displacement Update 1: Again 2 parts….WHOA! Wonder who is displaced and who's doing the displacing…or better question what is doing the displacing?! Time to see….

So they finally are separated…what will happen now…hmmm…love how you writing this angle b/c post-marriage there hasn't been a long separation between the two so very interesting to see this story play out.

Poor Geet all along…the use of diction like:"filled her void", "no solace", "aimless walks", "choking anguish"….all excellence descriptions to describe her state.

That phone call was so cute…and so realistic…can totally see myself doing that. Honestly, I feel so bad for her and this is so sad to read…I want her to go back, but this is very important for her too….such a dilemma!!!

his own sense of displacement reverberating in the lone hallway- this is so intense…what an insane ending…left me on the edge of my seat…hoping for the best!

Part 79 Displacement Update 2: still hoping for the best…nothing bad…PLEASE!!!!

Okay…rishabh just pops by…W*F?! ( excuse my French) No offense but this part was so comical..."apparently your family thinks you're missing"…it made me chuckle…the whole scenario…and getting him involved!

HA! I love this….the whole gang in SF…and Maneet playing cupid to RisNi (yes I'm calling them that now)…plus I read others' comments so I def know Geet is preggers soon and Maneet are playing cupid!!! So uber excited!

YIPPEEE! No more displacement…replacement if anything…YES! Maneet re-united now time for RisNi to get their act together!

Part 80 Homecoming: Are we in high school again?! What? Homecoming? Kiska? I know too many questions, but still I wanna know! Your unique style of naming titles is so intriguing!! BTW: I'm listening to Thuli Thuli while reading this part…do you know the song?! It's so good!!!

This rishabh monologue wasn't bad but very phika compared to Maan's…chai kum pani H…need something much better more you to fall in love with R! Which reminds me…can we get more of Maan's monologue…so missing them like crazy!! Pretty pretty pretty pleazzzeee!!!!

Awww! Poor Naini…but I'm really not diggin' this Rishabh guy…he seems so emotionless or maybe I'm just reading into him as much! And all the awkwardness is making me feel awkward!! Arrogant ass indeed…he really comes off like that….like I said so cold…and not sexy cold like Maan.

This one dumb act of his homecoming was breaking her, centrally rifting to pull her apart into pieces- so beautifully written…so poetic and love the way it's describing her pain.

Part 80 Homecoming Update 2: The 2 pre-caps were very nice…can't wait to read about the kiss!!!

Man….everyone is feeling awkward…..how awkward is all I can say! Geet and her ideas…male bonding…fun to see what fits the description! Tai chi?! Sorry I'm so Lucky-Maan inspired…thank god Rishabh is smarter than Lucky!

Awww! Geet the angel…making hearts meet….I can see her plan a mile away….what a babe!!!

RisNi alone at the dinner table…make it happen guys! Actually make it happen Hasini….I want fireworks love!!! Ohhh! Hand touching…so elementary…a notch up please! Stubborn ass…nice…that's too much for me to handle! Okay one more notch!

And whoa…that fight! Such an angry fight, but still comedic in a dark way!

I really thought breakfast would be a wonderful time to clear all misunderstandings…how nave of me! UGH!!! I really want this to stop….and Naini actually came off quite the immature little brat!

Awww! He still cares…the bleeding finger scene…but that anger was so quick too come along! Oh man…stupid RisNi…stop being so childish….I know I'm being so insenstitive but I want Maneet scenes only b/c these 2 are gettingon my nerves! I want Yash-Meer scenes please….wish them! Really hope I warm up to them soon!!!

Hahahahaha!! WWE event…if only! LOLZ!!!!

Promo trailer..…so adequate for sure…..picture abhi bakhi hai!

Part 81: Spooky affair: Hmmm! I love a good scare…super psyched about this!

Alam pana MSK…so chweet! Love the new nickname! Maneet exchange was much needed….so addicted to them…a lack of a cute scene puts me into withdrawals. Thanks so much for them!

Holy mother of peaches….WHOA! Tearing of the anchal off her blouse…and that cutie shields her chest…you think the shyness factor must have evaporated away by now…Oh geet!

Besharam Singh Khurana….honest to god…love his naughty side…can imagine him smirking while saying that like on the show!!

Not making love is not an option –BEST LINE TO DATE!!! Okay maybe I'm exaggerating too bit, but OMFG! I effin' love it….encore to part 67 please….or 69 please!!!!

You foolish woman...it's not the same once you taste sin AND sulky pout- uff! Teri ada…Love you MSK! Thank you for writing this…I'm so gone! I'm gonna have fantastic dreams b/c of you! (big winky face..and I mean a huge ass face)!

KISSING LENGTH!!!!! KYA?! More more more!!!!

He's so sly! She's getting closer and he's totally doing that cheesy arm around shoulder bit!!

No S-E-X for 2 weeks….nice to know that Maan is like all men and that's on his mind too! Zealous and feverish impact of kisses oh boy if only I were in Geet's place…well a girl can dream!

YUP! Agreee….horror movies always work…a full proof successful plan indeed! Such a fun update!

*Edited* 😳

Sorry I was absent for 1 long month due to exams...but I done n I'm here 😊

Ah! finally done with the thread 4...and what should I say??? I'm enthralled...gosh it was something of a whole roller coaster ride...SF...NY..Maan Geet...Rishab and Naini too...the way you've carved each n everything is indeed beautifully...something right out of the pages of life..could feel each n every emotion they were coursing through...you indeed are a very wonderful writer...i won't go in the intricacy of all d posts but in all they all were brilliant and the way u linked up was awesome...u c continuously studying for a month has reduced my words..and I'm falling short of them...

Wonderful read...waiting for the further turn of events...!!!! 😊

Take Care,
Fatima

Hummm, How is Geet going to make it up to Maan now... ☺️

Part 82 Memory lane: Week-end at Catalina…WHOA! Seems like fun! I can't wait…hopefully week-end of good memories and fun….loads and loads of fun!

Cold crisp wind tickled and played their senses reviving every emotion to play out differently...more buoyant on their faces, when their hearts carried a deadweight in wraps.- So utterly beautiful…I love it so much….the use of the words buoyant and deadweight…lovely!

RisNi scene was so cute…the rain in the BG and then her face to face with him! AWWW!!! He has soft brown eyes that dazzle. Wait…that's Abhi….so confused, who's Abhi?!

Wow! Catalina sounds so beautiful…have you been there?! Okay that was just a side thought…the description is really really really nicely written!

she was ingrained inside of him to such depths that he would have passed the moments with the same agony anywhere else.- This one is my personal fav…makes my heart beat a little faster…that's have good it is!

How the love story started was so cute…and he was "bound by her charms"….nice! What a cute beginning and now after all these years…this is where they stand! I demand a happy ending!

Dadi and Geet rock…time for plan B….what's plan B….can't wait! It's gonna be great! Geet is so smart!

Awesome update…time for the next part!

BTW: I'm so inspired by you that I'm going to start writing a Gurti FF!!! I can't wait…I hope you get a chance to read it!