FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13 - Page 36

Despite Maan and Geet being far away...you have continued to write about their nok-jhok..and nautanki ;) I love it!!!.. I love how your writing about their emotion in this long distance relationship! So glad that Naini and Maan talked...sibling love!
So their plan is in action soon?!? I would hate to be in Geet's place if all the fun is miles and miles away! ..But I'm sure she'll make it to NY so she doesn't miss all the fun!
Poor Dadi..she's waiting for the "good news" ...😆
Can't wait for Rishabh to come to NY...this is gonna be interesting..especially since Brother MSK is a part of all this..
Thanks for the lovely updates Hasini!

maan and naini have come a long way...
finally bro and sis are trying to rediscover their relationship and maan trying to be the elder one is also taking the initiative to sort out her entangled relations...
i love geet and maan's rather spicy arguments which tend to make you smile than worry..
awesome part...
will read the second part.
and comment on it...

ohh.. i love this new twist...
that rishabh is shifting in with yash and meera...
this will bring yash and meera back after a long time...
and good news from geet...
oh so loving and longing the future happy moments...
continue soon

awsome. a true story and very much loved one 2.

I just feel really bad for Daadima... how hard it must be for her at the 'Kitty Party'... not be able to get the lime light that she deserves...I can imagine Daadi being the 'jaan' of the Kitty Parties! 😆

Oh! How I miss Geet more then Maan!

How the two hearts ache to be together... they have taken over each others thoughts... though it is hard to be far away in the darkest of night or the lightest of day.. they will be together until the end! :)

Wow... so everyone is conspiring against Naini for her own good. That is really nice.

Finally Yash and Meer are back. I had missed them and am glad they are back.

So daadima still thinks Geet is pregnant. Poor her. With sooo much mention of the love making and Rishab's guilt and one of the reason's for tRishab and Naini's separation, maybe Naini can get pregnant? 😉

Waiting to read more.

Alright please forgive for getting so behind on comments! I've been terribly busy and didn't want to just skim the updates so I waited and waited until to read them leisurely but never thought it would take this long! Anyways enough of my nonsense here goes...

Four States 1

This part was beautiful I was totally confused with the title but once I read it I got it. I am heartbroken by the states of Rishabh and Naini. The latter is truly in dire need of help which only the former may be able to provide. It's not easy to forgive and forget but I hope both of them work together and let each other back in each other's life. As for Maan and Geet I have no words, I love how both compliment each other and wish their relationship continues to grow stronger.

Four states 2

I'm glad Rishabh finally hit realization and must thank Maan a great deal for that. I'm also glad for this man to man talk since it's the foundation for their blooming relationship as one family. And the Maaneet moment at the end was

In Plain Sight

I loved Maan and Naini scene, I'm glad he's forgiven her. And I'm more glad to see that Naini and Rishabh's relationship is moving towards betterment.

Crush the grapes

Loved it since we haven't had only Maaneet in a while. It was absolutely wonderful with Napa Valley as the setting and all the passion and romance. Really enjoyed it.

War and Peace 1

Doesn't surprise me that Naini is back home now. I'm glad that her and Maan are slowly becoming closer again and mending their relationship. And what can I say about Geet, she's adorable and although I'm liking these cute phone calls I'm more so looking forward to her return in NY. And wonder how Rishabh is doing right about now. Great update.

War and Peace 2

I can't believe Rishabh is moving to NY! That was a shocker. And what to do with Dadi, I hope someone clears the misconception soon before she goes as far as to make an announcement. I'm also glad to see Meera and Yash back, I've missed them.

Once again sorry for the lateness! All of them were great and can't wait to read more.

Part 77: Airports, Airplanes and Abhorrence: Hmmm! This seems inspired from a Steve Martin film I've seen….no complaints or judgement…creative actually!!!

he held her tighter. It only brought a fresh course of tears, when her husband thoughtfully tried to draw back the focus from her, given what she had attempted a few seconds ago in front of their family.-OMG!!! This beginning was so beautiful….amazingly written..the kiss, the tears, the sadness….lambi judaai!

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Her soul was stretched apart between her need for him and her dreams to make something of herself.- So poetic…I missed this so much!

A Shakespeare reference…my fav! The curse line was so beautiful….It's like I'm reading Nicolas sparks…my heart keeps melting!

Geet's emotional turmoil was written nicely and it's to

Last of her fingertips slide away from his reach- a total double awww!

How she's going to cope with handsome men?! WHOA! That really caught my attention…I wonder why she needed to ask herself this! My answer to this question…exactly how she does now! LOLZ!!!

And then she meets Archie….oh boy….the drama that will ensue…I hope he a longer cameo than just this part….wonder how Maan will feel! I always fancy a jealous Maan!

Oh boy….did she get annoyed and real quick….I can so picture it too! But you took so much time to describe him…I hope he stays for awhile!

Loved it…a bit sappy, but still ube romantic with all those departing lines and metaphors!! So beautiful!