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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the fact that R is moving to NY. And hope the dust settles soon at their end. Waiting to see how their drama unfolds.
Dadima's assumption on Geet being preg should be a misconception...as I feel the couple needs to communicate( otherwise in some ways it will be an antithesis to the blind fold update) and let each other know their thoughts wrt to kids/going the family way. Also she needs to move back in due course of time.
Anyways l love this story sooo very much- every chapter is so enthralling. I get super excited each time, when I see that you have posted a new update. Thanks!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 90: Rush Update 1

He couldn't believe it was just work that had made her push her travel plans to Saturday morning. It didn't make sense to him when she told him about the cartload of work she had to complete, within three weeks of joining the office. He had suspected it was one of her silly surprises she was planning for him; this being the first time she would be spending time with him at their NY home ever since her move to San Francisco. Although on Thursday night she hadn't come and the chargeback on his credit card for the cancelled tickets had confirmed that she hadn't been joking about it at all.

The original plan was for her to come over on Thursday night and work from home on Friday. And poor him, he had dreamt of spending Friday night on her lap watching television in their bedroom...What bliss it had been to imagine lazing on their bed? Or have her run behind him with their late brunch on a plate. But he was upset and had reserved his cheer over the latter phone conversations that had followed. However, up until the point he was asked to oversee the production move on Saturday for a full 5 hours, he had not recognized the resentment inside. Only after having agreed to taking up the task, the full extent of his disappointment had revealed itself to him.

She had little doubt anything was of the matter, for he passed for being busy ever since the call she had told him about the change of plans. When every minute together was weighed above everything else, giving up one night had seemed too much to ask of her, when Rishabh had called up to ask her to accompany him on his charter. Initially she had held back, but with Naini in mind and Rishabh's vulnerable voice that had sounded pleading, she eventually gave in to his request. Nonetheless, it also seemed like the perfect cover to cancel the tickets and trick him into thinking she was only coming over on Saturday, when she would instead be landing there on Friday evening.

7.00 PM Friday

Originally, he had intended to veg out in front of the television, dedicating his evening drink to Anderson Cooper on CNN. But the empty seat next to him, taunted the palm of his hand that could have rested on her lap. The only solace over turning into a man who was tormented over his wife's absence was that he was still far from portraying the anguish on his face. When the thought threatened to barge its way into the open, as Naini and Daadima casually lounged in the adjacent couch, he got up to leave to the gym.

The hour long run on the treadmill had pounded his heart away into numbness. His feet ached with soreness and when that physical exertion wasn't enough to have his mind takeover his heart, he turned to bench pressing a100 lbs. After what seemed like an eternity he came back to the apartment suite and went straight to the bathroom for a shower.

He had missed the soft yellow glow streaming through the creak of the closed door, as his mind lay occupied elsewhere. Mindlessly letting himself into the room, he marched towards the double sinks and that is when he first caught the wisp of the familiar fragrance that came wafting in the air. Before he could whip his head about instinctively, as his expectant heart skipped a beat, a thudding force of softness grazed the back of his body. There was little doubt in his mind, that by some cosmic play, it felt time itself was stilling around him. Going around his waist and climbing up to clutch his shoulders, were the same pair of hands, he was aching to touch a little while ago. Just as he closed his eyes, a quaint smile eased his features, making him go limp with a strange relief washing over him. He tilted his head and tipped it sideways to lean back on her.

"Don't ever do that..." He whispered as she scrunched up her forehead and completely came to rest on him.

But there was little left to be done by her that was not already done, he thought. In an attempt to correct his previous utterance, he started again.

"I was beginning to think I was slowly going crazy without you...but now I realize I'm already crazy for you", he said softly. Her hold tightened around him unconsciously as she heard that, reveling in the moment of intimacy she had craved for all day.

His hand reached out to rest on hers as he added "You better make up for this..."

She thought he could do better with just three simple words of 'I miss you. However it's Maan, she was talking about and this was his best face forward. So when she couldn't help from keeping her straight response locked inside, she spoke in a rustle.

"I missed you more" She said hushing the rush of angst that coursed through their bodies.


To be continued...
Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
INCREDIBLE...
MAAN AND GEET ARE ONE HELL OF A COUPLE...
I JUST LOVE EVERYTHING THEY DO ...
THE DISAPPOINTMENT...FACED BY HIM...
HIS RIGOROUS EXERCISE TO RELIEVE HIM OF BEREAVEMENT HE WAS FACING...
HIS REACTION ON FEELING HER AND A SUDDEN SENSE OF SATISFACTION...AS THE FIRST RAIN AFTER A LONG PERIOD OF DROUGHT...
THE EXPRESSION IS JUST SUPERB...
I ALWAYS TEND TO READ THE UPDATES MORE THAN ONCE...AND EACH TIME THINK WHAT SHOULD I SAY WHICH SOUNDS DIFFERENT FROM WHAT PEOPLE HAVE NOT SAID EARLIER AND STILL DOES JUSTICE TO YOUR WORK OF FICTION...

JUST AWESOME...
I HAVE A REQUEST...WHENEVER YOU GOT TIME I WOULD REALLY WANT TO SEE NEW YORK TIMES IN FORM OF A BOOK WITH PICTURES...
PLZ IF YOU GET TIME ..CREATE AN E BOOK FOR THIS ONE...

CONTINUE SOON
Edited by libra25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hasini, you did that sweety..I was missing Geet in NY badly.. their coffee oments, subway..window sill romantic moments..


please continue sooon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
I can't believe myself Hasini...I read the last 5 updates at a go...

Finally got time out of my busy schedule... and read them...

each and every part was absolutely fantastic...especially I loved the Crush the Grape part... that was so romantic...and so unusal of Maan do such things...in public...

and also Maan's decision to ask Rishabh to stay in the apartment along with Meera and Yash... that was so unexpected... slowly and steadily Geet is changing this introvert Maan to an extrovert Maan...


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Posted: 14 years ago
R! dedicating Niven: 500 to NYT!

***
She walks in beauty, like the night
Of cloudless climes and starry skies,
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meets in her aspect and her eyes;
Thus mellow'd to that tender light
Which Heaven to gaudy day denies.

One shade the more, one ray the less,
Had half impair'd the nameless grace
Which waves in every raven tress
Or softly lightens o'er her face,
Where thoughts serenely sweet express
How pure, how dear their dwelling-place.

And on that cheek and o'er that brow
So soft, so calm, yet eloquent,
The smiles that win, the tints that glow,
But tell of days in goodness spent,'
A mind at peace with all below,
A heart whose love is innocent.

--L. Byron!
***

Maan heart craves to be with Geet, her mere presence would be a sweet gift to his heart! How our hearts craves for the simplest things, holding hands, a soft kiss on the lips and a sweet hug! 😳 I wish they would be buried in a time capsule somewhere in the deep sea! They are meant to be together, and no matter how you set them free, they will always find a way to be with each other!

Loved the update :D!


Edited by night13 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
"I was beginning to think I was slowly going crazy without you...but now I realize I'm already crazy for you", he said softly
That is sooo cute!!!
You know me I had to pick that line of all in your update to adore😍 My imagination's running wild already and it's not even 10 AM Saturday yet
Going to try hit the books now
Edited by pushpi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
That was just simply superb!!!

His disappointment,his longing for her,his state of mind to make him self calm & occupied with his work & rigorous exercise ...shows how much he is missing her.

The Best line ..." "I was beginning to think I was slowly going crazy without you...but now I realize I'm already crazy for you", he said softly. " ...that was lovely!!!

loved it ...awesome!!!

wonderful update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Atlast She is back. Thank god you relieved Maan from being far away from her.
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful update, waiting to see naini and rishabh's confront along with the love angels.

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