FF: New York times with Maan&Geet Thread 4 09/13

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1051

Hasini,Loved the update. Rishabh and naini are so adorable, so complicated, so needy in a way and now finally on the same wavelength. Love the toe ring part.

Maan is going to make her pay? I guess a lot of teasing is coming up. Looking forward to the updates. Two updates in two days, manna from heaven. Loved them both. Why did you not like the previous one, I don't know? I think it was well written. Aaah writers and their constant self critiquing. I guess we should be glad for it, the end result is superb. Keep the creative juices flowing. Love as always.

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Soapoperasrfun

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1052

Great one H. Stop saying that the previous one was bad. I loved it and see that many others did too. Maan and Geet together can never be bad 😛

Humm, so finally the culprits have been caught. Great. It will be awesome to see how Maan makes Naini and Rishab pay. Lots and lots of teasing I hope 😉

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punjabi.princes

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1053

awesome part!

ahh maan and geet saw them lol

should get interesting to see how maan and geet act around them

con't soon

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princess163

@princess163

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1054

I would Like the next update to be on a new thread!

Can I sapm?😛

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hamini_yash

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1055

wow wow , maan's reaction was awesome, I loved this update thoroughly

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shmhetras

@shmhetras

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1056

I loved reading this update (3), and I did not enjoy the prior one as much ( if it is ok to say so), but I guess it was needed to propel the story . Totally waiting for the next - wonder how they are going to be exposed by Maan /Geet.
Keep it going, and love you for penning NYT:)

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Antares

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1057

Superb! Finally, they are caught! Can't wait for Maan and Geet to teach these brats a lesson...that sounds fun. Abhi-Naini part was so cute...his thought behind the gift and all. It was great!

Do continue soon.

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Hima

@Ramhari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1058

Very sweet part Hasini
Naini was trying to seduce Rishabh unnecessarily as here mere presence was enough to seduce him.
Rishabh was so restless waiting for her and couldnot keep himself from kissing.
So the gift was a toe ring.
Rishabh was so thoughtful in picking a symbol which was very inconspicuous so that they would not be caught.
But finally they were indeed caught by Maaneet.
Our super smart Geet picked the hints at the poker table itself.
But looks like Maan was not ready to believe that his sister was back to her prankster self.
Now that he has witnessed it he sure is going to thoroughly tease her i guess.
After all the teasing they had been through now the time has come for Maan and Geet to return the favors i suppose.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanks for taking time to update