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PART 7

arjun n geet reached college at 9am sharp...but they were late...they managed to get a seat at last corner...geet saw that they were seated in a big auditorium...she could see all the professors coming and taking seats on the dias...she was absorbed in seeing the surroundings n tried to look at familiar faces...if she could any...she found none...her dad was talking to other parents...

geet was watching her dad when a girl tapped her shoulder...she turned to see the same girl she saw during the counselling...she thought...chalo...koi toh jaan pehchaan wala mila...

that girl told geet to move a bit...as soon as geet saw the same old lady, she immediately moved...

hii...i am naina...naina khurana

geet...geet singh

waise ye meri dadima hai...hugging her dadi side ways...

namasthe....

dadi found geet quite reserved n shy find of girl...

dadi : tum bhi humme dadima keh sakti ho...tum kiske saath aayi ho beta?

geet turned to her dad n introduced both of them...

arjun n dadima chatted for a long time...though naina found many of friends she remained with geet...she exchanged her seat with dadi so that n even pulled geet towards her so that they could chat...naina being talkative..went on n on...she could tell that geet had lot of patience...which she simply adored...as she found only a few with that trait...well only her brother actually...she wanted to include geet in her talks...she questioned about studied n all...she was surprised that geet dint go to any coaching despite being a drop out student...geet told her about her father n grandparents who helped her out with all subjects...it was then she came to know about geet's father being a school principal n was now...a hosteler...

meanwhile arjun n dadima conversed about their families...n their children...wat else would parents talk about that point of time...arjun was saddened with the info that naina's parents were no more n they died in an accident...n dadima was only living for the sake of their grandchildren...he was sorry for what all happened to them...dadima also told about her grandson...who was also a doctor in the same college...arjun was elated with the guts of this old woman sitting beside him...he went off to his past where he had atleast his masterji...but she had none with her...n that too making both their grandchildren doctors...was a big task...he instantly developed immense respect to wards the lady...

when asked how did she manage everything after the death of her children...she told she is the chairman of sanjeevani hospital...which her children established...

arjun also told about his family back at his place...n he being a school principal...then dadima came to know that geet would be staying in hostel...her gaze fell at her granddaughter...she was delighted to see the budding friendship between naina n geet...they were chatting n having a great time..

it was then an announcement was made by someone on the dias...instantly there was silence...the principal welcomed all the students n parents for the new academic year...he made a speech regarding the various aspects of the medical college n how strict were they with respect to discipline..

naina made a comment...dekh toh yaar...apni kitni tarafdaari kar raha hai..itna bhi accha nahi hai ye college...

geet : tumhe kaise pata?

mera bhai padta hai na yaha...

geet : ohh

arjun indicated them to be silent...

naina whispered in geet's ear : tumhare papa strict hai kya?

geet smiled and told...thode se...

thode se...lagta toh nahi hai...

geet : thode dinno mein jaan jaogi...

hmmm

after the principal's speech there was an applause n other professors introduced themselves...giving an info about their subject n what needs to be done to excel in it...

geet n naina were alert for 45min of the speech then it turned to be boring for them...they again indulged in chatting...it was about their families this time...most of the time naina talked n geet listened...but she became withdrawn when geet started talking about her mom...geet couldnt sense it in the beginning...later on...she could...she immediately changed the topic...she felt bad inside...

naina was back to her original self in a while...she told geet that her parents passed away in a terrible car accident...she again was on the verge of tears...geet's comforting hand was there to prevent it...

geet : toh kya hua ki tumhare mummy papa nahi hai...aaj se mere mom dad tumhare hue..ok?

naina smiled n nodded her head...she heard these lines from her other friends too previously...none meant it...she thought bolta toh har koi hai...

geet didnt know why she said that...but she said it..she thought it might be due to their instant connection..well whatever it might be...she would see that this girl will get help whenever she was in need...

finally the meeting came to an end at 12:30...both were unaware how the time passed...they shared a giggle...

dadi knew few professors...she introduced arjun to them...even few ladies came to have a chat with her...she was an eminent lady...

after having few minutes of chat with professors...dadi invited arjun n geet to have lunch at their home...

arjun : nahi maaji...aap kyon takleef leti hai...hum log kha lenge...

dadi : mein kuch nahi sunna chahti...tum log aa rahe ho...n thats final...

they had to go...dadi left no other choice...

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this update is dedicated to SILKY ARORA...megh_piyashi n mysterious_boy...thank you for waiting for updates...i hope i live upto the expectations..

PART 8

days continued to be struggling for maan...controlling his thoughts n concentrating on his studies at the same time wasnt easy...the only thing that kept him going was his prfession...he had no right to be careless...ignorance was said to be crime in his profession...

the next day

it was geet's second day in her collage...parents wernt allowed from this day on...she was indeed very nervous...lively naina changed her mood a bit..as her talking was never ending...

roll nos were given to all 100 students...professor told there wont be any class today as it was introduction day...everyone thought they could leave in a while but their happiness was short lived...as soon as professor went away seniors entered...5 of them..

they told everyone to assemble in the auditorim...as nervous as hell everyone went to the place where they went yesterday...

naina held geet's hand...tightly...making geet more nervous...on the way they met arjun n savitri...that added a bit of courage...

few parents were against it as they came to know that the place was completely filled with seniors n their children were bit afraid...principal then allowed parents to sit at the end ensuring them that it was a part of introduction n they shouldnt interfere in what was going to happen...they could watch them if they like...it was like heaven for both students n parents...

everyone settled

a student came up with a mike in his hand...he switched it on a patted it lightly to see if it was working...

hello all...i m dev..class representative of 2nd year...first of all i would love to welcome all the juniors n their parents...well parents are with us for the first time in the history of this medical school...i hope they too would enjoy this introductory session...well this is the only day where we can rag few of our beloved juniors...just dont take it literally...parents would be watching us too...hope they dont make us expelled...

everyone laughed..

well jokes apart...every junior would be called according to their roll nos n he/she should come up here n should give their biodata...name..parents name...what wud they like to be in future n hobbies etc etc...all must tell their hobbies n we would tell the same to enact them...

this terrrified the juniors...naina turned to see her grandmother with nervousness written all over her face..savitri indicated her to be fine...it dint help...savitri noticed naina clutching geets hand firmly...

the only person savitri thought of at that moment was maan...as he was the senior most student she thought he could do something about this...she immediately called maan...

maan was busy with a case when he got a call from his grandmother..he told her that naina would be fine n he would come in a while...he wanted to assure his grandmother more than his sister...

meanwhile

geet ; kya yaar..itna kyon ghabra rahi hai...teri wajah se aur tension ho rahi hai mujhe...chal itni tension math le...sab accha hoga...

naina ; sry yaar..woh na

geet ; its okay baba...hota hai...chal dekh start ho raha hai...

dev ; i now request everyone to be silent...n now comes our first junior amol...

a short guy with a perfect moon's face comes up on stage n introduces himself...

amol ; hello everyone..my name is amol...i m from rewa...i would like to become a good doctor...n my hobbies are reading novels...travelling and sleeping

everone laughed as he told he likes sleeping...

senior 1 ; ohh really...chal kuch karke dikha...

amol ; mujhe kuch nahi aata...can i share a joke??

all seniors were fine with it

amol ; laloo asked his P.A...itne khiladi kyun football ko laat maar rahe hai?

then P.A. told goal kar ne k liye.

a confused laloo said arey sausra, ball toh pahle se hi gol hai aur kitna gol karenge...

everyone erupted in the hall...

seniors ; ek aur

amol thought a while

amol ; teacher asked a student bade ho kar tum kya karoge?

student told ji shaadi.

teacher was shocked...mera matalab, kya banoge?

student told ji dulha.

teacher was irritate are, mera matlab hai, kya hasil karoge?

student answered ji DULHAN.

some enjoyed it some dint...but every junior was releived a bit...they all started off talking among themselves...

dev ; well that was pretty good start...now here comes angad...

a tall n whaetsih complextion guy came

angad ; hiii everyone..i m angad..i m from bhopal...my father is an engineer n my mother is housewife..my hobbies are reading travelling listening music

senior ; u sing?

angad ; i m a bathroom singer sir

everyone laughed

senior ; koi baat nahi yaar...sab aise hi hai...bathroom samaj ke hi ga le...

angad ; sir plz

seniors at the back; no..gana toh padega...

some of his new friends shouted for him..come on angad...whole auditorium was chanting his name...

angad sang...

koi kahe, kehta rahe kitna bhi humko deewana...

the whole auditorium went euphoric...

hum logon ki thokar mein hai yeh zamaana

jab saaz hai, aawaaz hai, phir kis liye hichkichaana

oh, gaayenge hum apne dilon ka taraana

bigade duniya,

angad forwarded the mike to the audience...

they roared...bigadne bhi do

jhagade duniya, jhagadne bhi do[audience]

lade jo duniya, ladne bhi do, [audience]

hum apni dhun gaao

duniya roothe, roothne do[audience]

bandhan toote, tootne do[audience]

koi chhoote, chhootne do,[audience]

na ghabraao

hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana

aankhon mein hain bijliyaan, saanson mein toofaan hai

darr kya hai aur haar kya, hum isse anjaan hai

hamaare liye hi to hai aasmaan aur zameen

sitaarein bhi hum tod lenge, hamein hai yakeen

ambar se hai aage hamaara thikaana

hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana

bigade duniya, bigadne bhi do[audience]

jhagade duniya, jhagadne bhi do[audience]

lade jo duniya, ladne bhi do[audience]

hum apni dhun gaao

duniya roothe, roothne do[audience]

bandhan toote, tootne do[audience]

koi chhoote, chhootne do[audience]

na ghabraao

hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana

oh, hum hain naye, andaaz kyoon ho puraana

koi..

kehta..

kitna bhi humko deewana..

the whole crowd clapped...

angad ; thank u..thank u all..it was so generous of u...

everyone giggled...

dev ; that was amazing angad..well it was generous of us..we could bare it only because of ur song selection...

all the seniors laughed...

dev ; just kidding guys...now here comes..anjali..

anjali too sang a song...that went on for even the next girl archana...

next one was armaan..as he told he was trained in martial arts, he was made to do an act...he was simply amazing...as he performed his punches n kicks...the crowd completely went silent...that was the power...the final yrs said ab bas kar yaar..hamme pata chal gaya ki tujhse dur rehna hai...armaan smiled n finished his act..after bowing n thanking all he went off..

next was arnav...he seemed pretty angry sort of person...seniors said arey ye toh hamare collega ka sunny deol aa gaya..chal ussi ka kuch sunna de...but he still was quite...

croud cheered sunny..sunny...it was quite funny...first years eased out n now enjoyed this program in true sense...

arnav started off

judge saab tareek dene se pehle mein kuch araz karna chahunga...

pehli tareek mein ye bola gaya ki damini pagal hai

dusri tareek se pehle urmi ka hospital mein khoon kar diya gaya...aur case bana khud khushi ka..

aur aaj phir se ek aur tareek de rahe hai...uss tareek se pehle mera katal ban jayega aur case banega road accident ka..

aur aap phir se tareek de denge

aur is tarah na to koi sachchai ke liye ladne wala rahega na insaaf maangne waala...reh jaayegi to sirf Taarikh...

everyone shouted...come on arnav...

aur yahi hota raha hai me Lord...TAARIKH PE TAARIKH.. TAARIKH PE TAARIKH...TAARIKH PE TAARIKH AUR TAARIKH PE TAARIKH MILTI RAHI HAI...

some were cheering him as sunny...some arnav...even parents were enjoying...

lekin insaaf nahi mila me lord insaaf nahi mila...Mili hai to sirf ye taarikh...

third year senior ; oh mere sunny deol...judge saab tujhe bahut jaldi tareek de denge...

few of them hi-fied eachother...

fourth yrs ; cha gaye sunny sir...

arnav thanked them n went off..

next was a girl named diya...

meanwhile maan completed his work and headed towards auditorium...he entered when diya was giving her introduction..as he was going at the back few of the final years n third yrs wished him..he just gave them a small smile..he sat beside his grandmother n she introduced him to arjun...he tried to behave normally..after their small talk savitri was again tensed for her grand daughter...but maan kept trying...whereas naina was having fun...

n diya was made to a catwalk...she was sort of rich brat...the way she portrayed herself gave others that impression...naina thought ye model shayad galti se doctor banne aayi hai..n giggled..

n then it was announced that next student was geet...n maan was elated...to see her...to capture her in his mind for eternity...

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Edited by millie_maaneet - 12 years ago

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part 9

dressed in light purple frock type of suit n white leggings with white chiffon dupatta...she walked onto the dias to take the mike from dev...the way her long braid was swinging to n fro made maan's heart flutter with it...

hello everyone i am geet...my father is a school principal n my mother is a housewife...my hobbies are listening music, dancing n playing sports..

second yrs ; singing toh bahut ho gaya...u said u dance right?

geet ; yes sir

second yrs ; chalo phir wahi sahi...who is your favorite heroine?

geet ; madhuri

all teased her saying...ooohhh

final yrs ; chill yaar...let find some of madhuri's song in our mobile..

second yr girl [payal] ; sir i have chane ke kheth mein with me

final yrs ; perfect...can u do it geet...geet right?

geet ; yes..yes sir...i will try...i dint dance for a long time now..can i do a few steps??

second yr [payal] ; its ok yaar..tujhe jitna aata hai..utna kar...

payal played the song and dev came forward with the mike...he kept it near the mobile n the song was heard aloud...

meanwhile geet removed her dupatta from a side n tied it properly...

as the music started she did a simple hip movement with her back towards the audience...

athra baras kee kanwari kali thi

ghunghat me mukhda chhupake chali thi

suddenly the calm n reserved face of her transformed into a lively n expressive one...

athra baras kee kanwari kali thi

ghunghat me mukhda chhupake chali thi

with the imaginary dupatta she swayed with the music...finally hiding her face with both her hands she moved her right hand so that only her eye was visible n blinked it with a big smile on her face...the smile took everyones heart...she was indeed a mini-madhuri...

phasi gori

as if trying to pull someone off with a rope she moved her hips...

phasi gori..chane ke khet me, huyi chori chane ke khet me

then it was the trademark step...she effortlessly moved her hip, shoulder n legs...she already took her hearts away with her big smile...n with this she took everyone to a very different world...everyone was with her enjoying...members seated at the back were whistling while others were clapping...

pehle toh julm ne pakdi kalayi

with an angry expression...she acted as if someone did hold her wrist...

phir usne chupke se ungli dabayi

turning her expression into a shocking one she showed her little finger indicating someone held it...

pehle toh julm ne pakdi kalayi, phir usne chupke se ungli dabayi

with a bit vigourous hip movement...she changes her steps to bit casual ones again indicating her wrist n little finger...

jora jori

repeating the previous step...

jora jori...chane ke khet me, huyi chori chane ke khet me

interlocking both her little fingers..she transformed that step into the trademark step of chane ke khet mein...

with that she ended her dance...almost whole crowd stood up for a clapping...

naina was the one who whistled...dadima was sort of shocked with her antics...as soon as everyone came to know it was her...she hid herself

dadi praised geet...

arjun already knew about the talent of his daughter...he saw her old self after many a days...he was a kind of very happy...

maan...he was glued to his seat with his eyes fixed to the stage straight ahead...he was completely lost into another world...offcourse everyone was...but maan was taking a really long time to come back from his dreamland...he captured all her expressions in his mind...he was surprised at her transformation...he kept on staring the stage without blinking as he feared he wont be able to see a lively geet again...his mind kept on playing the same thing...

n maan continued to be in his dreamland..

meanwhile seniors took a promise from geet that she would perform again for freshers day...for that naina..payal n dadi clapped the loudest...

next was gunjan...she sang a beautiful song saibo from shor in the city...the hall listenend with pin drop silence...her voice had a magic...she sang superb...

maan's trance was broken with the vibration of his mobile...he took the call from his professor who just enquired to know where maan was...maan asked if he needed him...but professor denied him n told him to be there with his grandmother...

he turned to see his grandmother busy in conversation with arjun...his eyes then searched geet...she too was busy listening naina...he had a small smile...naina was ever ending as far as her talking was concerned...

meanwhile few members introduction was over and it was kashish turn...she shared a joke...

kripa was next...she sang dhunki from mere brother ki dulhan...she truly seems to be a rockstar...the way she was dressed in jeans n shirt...the way she held the mike...the way she conducted herself...the way she engaged audience...almost everyone sang with her...

manav was too shy to do anything...he was forced to do something...but none could make him...he was left off...

after a few members was muskaan...she had completely curly hair...naina told geet yaar dekhna uske baal ek dum noodles ke jaise hai...geet laughed n indicated her to be quiet as she too sang a few lines of a random song...

after her..it was naina...she told geet...yaar geet mein toh gayi aaj...

geet ; chal yaar..kuch nahi hota...i too did it...

n now it was dadi's turn to be tensed...maan held her hand to calm her...

hello everyone i m naina...both my parents were doctors...

as she told this everyone went silent...dadi held maan's hand a bit tighter...arjun felt very helpless...

my hobbies are singing..roaming..eating n sleeping...

the crowd laughed...it was like she changed everyones gloomy faces abit ago...dadi maan arjun mainly had smiles on their faces...

seniors asked if she would sing...she denied that...she told she is the worst singer...she asked if she could imitate kareena kapoor from jab we met...

anshuman mai kehna chahti thi ki...

hello

kutte...ullu ke patthe

u bas***d

saale suwar ki aulad

tujhe kya laga tu mujhe chod dega to mai jindagi bhar tadapti rahungi

tu kaminey kidde padenge tere upar khutte ki maut marega ...aur marne ke baad narak ki aag mai tu jayega

teri ma ki...

all the students enjoyed it...dadi n maan were sort of shocked...they looked at eachother with the same expression n suddenly burst out laughing...arjun smiled at both of them...

as soon as naina came she hi-fied geet...she asked...kuch jyada toh nahi ho gaya??

geet ; arey nahi yaar...i was hilarious...

then it was introduction of others...

prateek who did govinda style dancing...it was truly comedy...

after some members came rahul who looked like a model...he tried his hand at singing but sang terribly...

then came riddhima...who shared a joke...then sujal...tiya...n intro ended with zareen...

it was amazing experience for all the juniors...it was indeed a moment of their life...which they would cherish forever...

will be continued in the next page...

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finally got the update for JOM
cant tell u hw desperately i was waiting for it
well the update was great...!!
i know what would geet and her family felt like...!!
par chalo its her career so let her go...!!

now ye bata sidhe android dilwa dia tune to...!!
great
well daadi's are always good so was naina's daadi..!!
jaldi se next part update kar and bring in maan now

on the whole fabulous update

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part 10

it was almost 2-30 when the intro session ended...maan went to resume his hospital work after bidding a farewell to arjun...he dint dare to look at geet...

dadi again asked arjun to have lunch with them to which he politely declined...he told he wanted his quality time with his daughter as he would be leaving to his town at night...

geet who completely forgot about it became teary...sensing that arjun sidehugged her...

after that dadimaa couldnt force them...she told arjun not to bother about geet's needs as she herself would take care of it...she even told him that she would taking geet to her home whenever there was the need...she was strict because of which arjun had to agree...

geet dint know how time passed by...n it was time for arjun's departure...geet maintained a brave face until he left ...the moment he left she broke down...she ran n locked her room...she threw herself on bed weeping...curling herself to a fetal position she reached out for her ringing mobile...it was her mother...she tried to talk normally but failed...

simran was aware of her daughter's state...she was probably most tensed person at that moment...she talked n talked until her baby was completely diverted...she was with geet until she slept...she cut the call only after hearing the normal n rhythmic breathing...with the absence of arjun by her side she was hardly at peace...she probably dint had a wink of sleep last night...

in one part of the world where a few people were desperate to get sleep there was maan who was desperate to dream about geet...

pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho

jeevan meethi pyaas yeh kehti ho

pal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho

har shyam aankhon par

hera aanchal lehraye

har raat yaadon ki

baarat le aaye

mein saans leta hoon

teri khushboo aati hai

ek mehka mehka sa

paigham laati hai

meri dil ki dhadkan bhi

tere geet gaati hai

pal pal ...

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AMuRRXCuy-4&ob=av3e

he dint know when he paved his way to a very relaxing slumber...

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simran called geet early morning to wake her up...actually she was more than concerned whether geet would manage everything or not...

geet woke up with her mother's call n headed towards common bathrooms...thankgod there was geyser...which made things easy for her...with only half an hour left for her breakfast she rushed to canteen...on the way she met parul who wished her all the best...parul's smile in the morning was some sort of relief or rather assurance that things would go well...she was recognised by few of the seniors while eating who complemented her dance the previous day...

in the first theory class they were divided into 2 batches...geet was in the first batch whereas naina was in the second...it was all because of their names...

naina pouted innocently...she told geet she would miss her...

geet was surprised by the sudden display of...strange emotions she thought...that too by a girl whom she met only a few days ago...but her inner self told her that she too was very protective of naina...n ya..she could nowhere deny that...mentally kicking herself for flying with her thoughts she told naina they would be together...she made her understand that if their friendship is strong... distance would never create any drift between them...

naina just smiled at her...

n in a few minuted theory classes began...they were told that a bit of theory is needed to be covered for the practicals to begin...it started off with biochemistry...then physiology and ended off with anatomy...

anatomy was soo boring that naina continued to yawn for last 15min of class...if it wasnt geet who continued to shake her whenever she got a chance...naina would have slept by now...

as the theory classes finished...geet glared naina...she made a irresistible puppy face...n geet had to fall for it...

the afternoon theory classes were cancelled which was a delight to cherish for all the students present...naina called her driver bhaiya to come soon...she texted maan that she was heading home..

after having a small chat with the seniors geet n naina headed towards canteen as naina's driver was late...they both sat with their classmates n had a gala time...

geet familiarized herself with harika...archana...diya...kripa...who were her batch mates...kashish went missing...

whereas naina continued her nonstop chatting with muskaan n nupur...they 3 had the same frequency as far as talking was concerned...

muskaan's way of talking could even surprise boys...she was at par with them...if it were bob cut instead of her usual longcurly hair she would be perfect for the look of a tomboy...but still she was a tomboy...

the Indian attire of nupur dint earn the title tomboy..she was not less...

as geet was facing the door of their canteen she could see naina's car which arrived...she bid bye to all of them n dragged geet along with her...

naina was adamant as geet was resisting to go to their home...she made a call to dadi to complain...dadi managed to convince geet n they both headed home...

after meeting her dadi n telling everything that happened at the first day...naina showed her complete home which she dint the previous time...she had a story to tell for each n every corner of it...as it was sunny terrace was meant to shown later...n then it was naina's room..typical girly kind of room...

geet saw her friend's room pained in pink on one side of the wall with her family pictures hung on it...she went ahead to check them...her parents were indeed a very beautiful couple...naina resembled her mother...after checking out some other pictures she explored more...books..lappy...a small study table unlike hers...n a very disorganised cupboard...geet laughed seeing it...

naina agreed that she couldnt manage her cupboard...just then they got a call from her grandmother that food was ready...it was great fun having food with dadi n naina where they would discuss anything n everything...

dadi's sense of humour was something which surprised geet...dadi was more of a friend than a strict parent...she even choked in between dadi's jokes...

naina said koi baat nahi geet...tujhe bhi thode dinno mein hamare aadat pad jayegi...

all 3 had a great time...

dadi went to take a afternoon nap...but naina n geet saw movies...by the time they finished them it was evening...

naina took her to terrace...geet felt it was the best part of the whole house...seeing a small bed laid at one of the corner she immediately jumped on it to relax dragging naina along...they both saw the way sky changed...those colors was beautiful...

they dint know for how long they were staring at sky...but dadi called naina to have evening snacks...as soon as she went off geet dug herself more into the pillow to notice a mild but strong sort of fragnance filling her nostrils...it strangely felt so good to her...

geet then spent hardly an hour when it was time to return to hostel...after bidding a goodbye to dadi with a promise that she will come soon...she n naina headed to hostel...when geet tried to thank naina for that beautiful day naina hit her...bit hard on her shoulder...with a warning ofcourse... that she should never repeat it...

it was time when maan's shift ended...when he saw naina getting into the car, he questioned her...it was then he came to about her day's activities...

the whole day he tried his level best to drive her away from his thoughts...but...still she continued to haunt him...

Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: spvd
can u plz update the title of the FF too with the update number and page and date?

sorry for ur inconvience...it will now be done on regular basis

thank you

Originally posted by: Remya_Pillai
Loved naina-geet friendship..
Naina s too good..
When will maneet meet?

i m sorry to disappoint u but this story was meant to be bit slow going as i wanted it close to our day to day life...i will try level best to speed it up...

thank you

part 11a

their basic theory classes were over...it was the time for practicals...geet and naina were in two different groups...the time table was given...the worst part was geet had anatomy practicals every 3 days a week that too early in the morning while naina's were in the afternoon

the anxiety or restlessness...whatever it might be...it dint let sleep geet at night...she was tossing on her bed...she thought about the proceedings of the day where she expressed her concern to naina...she advised geet to be pretty cool about it and things would go fine as they would adjust soon...but still geet was bit scared of facing the dead bodies first thing at college...she could remember all the ghost stories she heard till then...that even scared her

it was her mother's call that disturbed her train of thoughts

geet was glad she called...it was only her with whom she could share all her thoughts at that moment...

simran had a smile on her face listening to all the stories geet was fabricating over a tiny thing...all she could tell was facing your fear is the only way out...

but geet was afraid of it...she thought tomorrow morning would be the worst day of her life...

simran tried deviating her mind n thankfully she was successful...she talked about anything n everything...to the things going on at school...at home..at neighbour's house n what not...well that was ladies are famous for...

arjun was worried when the talk was continously extending..that too at a late night...simran indicated to tell him later...she had a much bigger task at hand

after an hour of continous effort...geet slept

when a baby was in dreamland...her mother was now in a process to convince her father that everything was fine...she thought this father daughter duo would never change...they always see things under a magnifying glass...

she thought in mind kis kis ko samhalu mein...pata nahi inka kya hota mere binna

she told arjun that every student goes through that phase and comes out of it...and those experiences are needed to make u a better n lively person in future...and if anything happens they are anyway there with geet...n geet was n will be fine...

somehow arjun managed to sleep

the next day geet woke up late..she didnot have her breakfast in a hurry...it was mostly a casual thing for all the medicos...n in the process she dint even meet naina...she texted her that she was late n she would directly meet her at lunch

she got a brief call from her mother just to ease her up...

the thing she was most afraid of has to be done at that moment...she has to enter the anatomy hall...she put her mouth mask on n entered the hall...she was bit frozen seeing all the dead bodies on the stretcher...kripa nudged her to enter sooner but it was a small smile of kashish that helped her in a big way...

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part 11b

sir was late..so everyone was busy talking among thenselves...kripa urged geet to put on one more mouth mask as it proved bit effective in decreasing the smell of those dead bodies entering their nostrils...as she was doing so angad came and commented that girls have weak heart n they cant bare anything...this irritated kripa a lot...though geet was silent about it kripa wasnt...she just wanted to give him a piece of her mind...

kripa...tum apne kaam se kaam rakho samjhe..kisi ne tumse hamare baare mein opinion nahi maangi hai

geet tried to calm her down but in vain

angad...arey jao jao..tum logon ko bas iske alawa aur kuch karna hi nai aata...u just tell people to stay away or to be quiet...ye nahi hai ki hum logon ko galat prove karke dikhaye...

this irritated every girl present there

anjali...tum khud ko itna smart math samjho..ok...hum ladkiyan bhi kuch kamm nai hai..

every girl backed her...it was like lets show them whatever might be the challenge...

angad...soch lo

anjali...tum challenge batao

kripa..haan

geet felt left out...first of all she was afraid of facing these dead bodies...what if the challenge was related something to it...she wanted this to end soon but she now had no control over it...kripa n anjali were fighting with boys n everyone was backing them...

kashish too was backing them up but saw geet all of a sudden...she saw helplessness written over her face...she thought to enquire

kashish...geet...what are you doing...chal aa na hamare saath

geet...arey nahi baba...

kashish...darr lag raha hai kya? dont you want to face their challenge?

geet...i can face any challenge yaar...but what if it turned out to be something with dead bodies...i might do it after few days but not now yaar...my stomach has wierd feeling with all the smell around

kashish...arey aisa kuch nahi hoga..we dont even know the challenge now...tu chal toh...dekh tere liye sab kaise ladd rahe hai..

it was true...she wanted to go n stand with kripa n anjali...but sir came interrupting them all...

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part 11c

meet stayed at home because of her low back pain...n she also heard the convo between her mother n sister...she couldnt understand anything but she got a hint that something is wrong with her sister...she thought to ask geet about it but the pain deviated her mind...reminding herself to ask later...she went off to take a short nap...

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in the college sir started telling about dissection n its importance n the instruments with which its done...

as soon as he dissected the head, the smell of the embalming chemicals became so strong that it was nearly unbareable...geet took another mouth mask to put on...the sound of the zip opening turned the heads of kripa n kashish...kripa ignored it but kashish looked worried...she questioned geet through her eyes...geet indicated that everything is fine...

geet tried concentrating on the lecture...

as the lecture continued geet started getting wierd sensation in her stomach...as the smell was nauseating to her...dragging herself out of the small crowd, she started approaching the washroom...

everyone was completely into the lecture as sir informed to listen carefully...

geet started walking out of the dissection hall but she felt she was blacking out...her head instantly started spinning...she fell on the ground hitting one of the edges of the dissection table with a loud thud...

she was in a pool of blood

arnav n angad were literally shocked..everyone was...but they didnt think that something of that sort would happen to a girl whom they teased earlier...they somewhere felt very bad...

sir immediately instructed someone to pick her up and rush to casuality...

the blood didnt seem to stop

arnav picked her up n ran towards he casuality while angad was clearing the way beforehand...

kashish knew that something was wrong with geet since morning but didnt expect this...she took kripa along with her n rushed behind the boys

others were too shocked to respond

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part 11d

end of part

more to come

sorry for the short part

i m in mid of a very busy schedule

i will be updating small parts

in that way i would try to be regular

i hope u wud understand

thank you

Edited by millie_maaneet - 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: minnie_tweetie
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finally got the update for JOM
cant tell u hw desperately i was waiting for it
well the update was great...!!
i know what would geet and her family felt like...!!
par chalo its her career so let her go...!!

now ye bata sidhe android dilwa dia tune to...!!
great
well daadi's are always good so was annie's daadi..!!
jaldi se next part update kar and bring in maan now

on the whole fabulous update

where's annie dadi n this ud?

theres no annie in my ff...atleast until now...

loved ur comment...i am grateful 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: millie_maaneet

where's annie dadi n this ud?
theres no annie in my ff...atleast until now...

loved ur comment...i am grateful 😃

pagal ho gyi hu...side effect of reading many FF's simultaneosly
chal maine edit kar dia...annie nahi naina😆😆😆

Edited by minnie_tweetie - 13 years ago