Journey Of MaanEet [part11c-pg54]updated[12/4]

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nahtani88

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Amazing Updates
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Abgina

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Posted: 13 years ago

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beautiful n intriguing ff dear...i read all d 8 parts in one go...
cudn't hv stopped myself seeing theres one more more n more hehe...
awww i luved d 10th result part...the way geet was nervous arjun trying to fake anger twins trying to calm geet...d tension in all three seeing their father angry...simran's reaction was d cutest :)...
awww geet's reaction was very realistic coz if we are pressurized to take up something that we r not interested in n we fail in that its human nature to blame ur parents n geet did the same but thanks to simran she understood her father n was determined to work hard n clear next year...
luved d beautiful relationships you portrayed between simran n arjun and arjun n amrit...
the part where geet was working very very hard towards her goal n arjun was going through torments blaming himself for ruining geet's childhood was amazingly penned by u I really had tears while reading that part...hats off to u for writing d part in such an amazing way...
geet's PMT result part was so so nicely written...i really luved each n every family member's reaction...superbly written yaar...
den comes d counselling part where u introduced maan's family...
i lyked naina's full of life nature...n luved d way u portrayed how geet made home in maan's thoughts...luved it...
d way he made that portrait of hers was incredible...
his day where he was not able to concentrate n took leave was superbly written...
n den maan's past n fear came in light...guess dadima knows his fear that is y she'll take that promise from geet...
awww luved harmeet's concern for his sis sooo sweet...n yeah mothers r lyk dat...luved d way naina n geet gelled n arjun felt respect for dadima...
i so so luved d intro session ki kya bataoon maze aa gaye by god...apna intro yaad aa gaya hehe...
n naina ka dar bhi choo ho gaya n she started enjoying...
n wow i luved d last line of prt8 "to capture her in his mind for eternity" but maan babaji ne decide kar liya h she'll b urs for eternity pushing away all ur fears...
u r an amazing writer dear...keep up d good wrk...

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Shruthe

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Posted: 13 years ago

#363

Read all in a go!!!!!

Nice updates!!

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maansi007

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Posted: 13 years ago

#364

juxt read all d partss thanxxx for d pm

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Tamalika Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

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4 pming me dear...😃

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u r done really a

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Abreshmina

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Posted: 13 years ago

#366

heyyy Sai...

Awsum FF...
Me rly loved it..
Gosh wen Geet didnt want to take up med n arjun forced hr to tk up.. I ws lyk aww...
Cz i didnt want to tk up med .. Though my parents wanted me to do dat.. I opted to eng n nt med..cz i knew i wil b bad at it..
Bt yeah arjun knew Geet's capabilities...

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