Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 6

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Posted: 14 years ago
#51
oh no geet got married to dev and they love each other...
but wat next...
wats gonna happen next...
pretty much eager and excited...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
beautiful update
love it
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thnak yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
#53
awesome...like how u just cut to the chase...thanks..and keep me updated👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#54
just luvd ur ff...cont soon n plzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55
hey nice one yaar...
but maan n mus marriage is postponed😕...anyways loved it...
looking fwd...

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Posted: 14 years ago
#56
loved it.
continue soon. waiting for the second marriage...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#57
nice one.. luved maan.. continue soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#58

Love story with a strange twist Part 3

Muskaan gets a surprise parcel.She opens it.It's a pink grand salwar kameez.She sees a chip.It's written "With love your Maan.."
Her mobile rings.She attends the call.
"Hi Muskaan..i'm Maan".
Mus:Hi..
M:Did you get my gift?
Mus:Yes.
M:How is it?
Mus:Very beautiful.
M:I want you to wear that and come with me for a date tonight.
Muskaan smiles.

Maan and Muskaan meet outside.Maan is bowled over by her beauty.
M:You look very pretty Muskaan.
Mus:Thanks Maan.
M:You must have got a lot of compliments for your beauty.So my compliment may not be exciting you.
She simply smiles.
M:You have won the beauty contest in the college.Right?
Mus:Yes.
Maan leads her to the car.
They reach a cool place where there is water fall.
Mus:Wow!Water fall is so lovely.I love it.
She touches the water with her fingers.She moves away.Maan pulls her shawl.She becomes conscious.

Maan goes closer to her.
Muskaan becomes insecure.
Maan does'nt realize it.He puts his arms on her shoulder.He is becoming closer and closer to her.
Mus:mAan..what are you doing?
He asks in a husky soft voice:Why..?I thought since you are a modern girl you don't mind all this.After all we are going to get married soon.
Mus:Not because of that.I'm not against pre-marital romance.But..
M:But what?
Mus:But..i think this is not needed now.
M:But why Muskaan?Why are you hesitating?
Mus:Maan..
M:Tell me Muskaan..you don't love me?
Her eyes become wet.Maan becomes sad.
M:I'm sorry for being rude.I just lost my control.Actually there is no reason to get angry.
He smiles slightly.
Muskaan's tears fall down.

Slowly his smile disappears.
M:What happened Muskaan?If you hate intimacy i'm backing out.
He moves backward.She keeps crying.
M:I'm sorry Muskaan.Why are you still crying?Did i hurt you that much?
Mus:No,you did'nt hurt me.But i'm going to hurt you.I feel sad about that.
M:What?i can't understand anything.
Mus:I'm sorry Maan.Every girl is happy in her lover's arms.I was not happy in your arms..because you are not the person i love.
Maan is shocked:Muskaan!
Mus:I'm sorry Maan.
She cries.
M:Then whom do you love?
Her lips shiver:Dev!
Maan is shocked.He can't believe his ears.
Tears dwell in his ears.
M:Dev?
Mus:Yes.It was love at first sight.But dad chose Dev for Geet.I lost Dev.
Muskaan cries.Maan's heart pains
M:Then why did'nt you tell me before?
Mus:I could'nt be so open about this.But i can't cheat you anymore.Because i feel you love me like crazy.Your love is giving me pain as i don't feel the same for you.
Maan is broken completely.
M:You broke my heart Muskaan.
Mus:Maan!
M:I was a guy who always loved to smile.But you wiped my smile.You cheated everyone.How will Dev,Geet and our parents react if they come to know the truth?
Muskaan has no answer.She is really shattered.
He walks away with suppressed pain.Muskaan cries.
Maan sings loudly out of pain.Song:LONELY-tune mere jaana...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#59
loved the update...
so muskan loves dev...
but wat cud b done they r already married...there is nothing...muskan shud hv voiced it b4...
uff maan is heart broken...
waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#60
oh muskaan loves dev...what's the use of telling it now...

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