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Lovely Update
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awesome part now sharvan will accept her
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part 45 b
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Shravan is changing...
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Hi...thanks 4 da pm n amazing update. poor khushi...update soon n please include direct link in ur pm for the update
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Love story with a strange twist:Part 46{2nd version}


Thanks a lot 4 ur support.Bcz of ur support i completed this FF successfully.1st version had 19 parts.2nd version started with part 13th & ended with part 46.so all 2gether 52 parts or sth.Plz read d climax & write ur fav scene & fav charac & write y u liked them








Pari:Doctor said...
Shravan's heart beats.
P:Doctor said...it's a miracle.
Shravan is tense.
Slowly Pari smiles:Khushi bhabhi is safe.God has heard our prayers.
Shravan is really relieved.He is really happy.
Sh:Really?
She nods her head.
Sh:I can't wait to see Khushi.
P:But we have to wait for some more time for that.
Shravan becomes dull.
He goes to the doctor.
Sh:Doctor..please let me see Khushi.
Dr:Sorry...the patient has'nt opened her eyes.She is having a good sleep.No one can disturb her.
Sh:i just want to see her for my peace of mind...I won't disturb her.
Dr:I know a husband's feelings.A husband can't be peaceful when the wife is in the hospital.Just because you are her husband i will allow you to enter her room.
Sh:Thank you Sir.

After some time Shravan enters the room where Khushi is sleeping.He sits near her and looks at her face carefully.
She is sleeping peacefully.
.He stands up to go back.
Unexpectedly she holds his shirt.
He is surprised.He looks at her catching the shirt he is wearing.

He looks at her face softly.


Then he holds her hand.


He keeps her hand downand goes out.

After sometime after Khushi regains her consciousness he visits her again with Sanjana.Sanjana touches her hand.Khushi becomes emotional.
Shravan holds her arms softly.
She is surprised.
Sh:Khushi..you don't know how happy i am.I got scared of losing you.That time only i realized how important you are in my life.
Slowly other family members also entered the room.
Pari:After we lost Sachi,i have not seen Shravan bhai happy like this.He is so happy to see you safe.
Khushi smiles.
Maan:This is not enough.You have to be clear about your feelings.
Sh:Means?I can't understand anything.
M:Means...very simple..you have to tell whether you love her.
Shravan is embarassed.
Everyone except Khushi smiles.
Khushi is confused.
Maan smiles.
M:Shravan..i know your feelings.But others should also understand that especially Khushi.So you should express your love for Khushi.
Khushi can't believe it.
Karthi:Maan..what's the need for that?Shravan and Khushi are husband and wife.So we all know that they love each other.What's the need of this open confession?
Maan stares at Shravan.He can't look at Maan's eyes.
M:You won't understand that mom.
Even Dev and Muskaan don't understand that as they don't know that till now they were leading a loveless married life.
M:Come on Shravan..say 'i love you' to Khushi.
Geet:Maan...What are you saying?Are you crazy?
Muskaan:Geet...what's wrong in that?Husband and wife should always say 'i love you' to each other.
Muskaan looks at Dev with a naughty smile.
Mus:Is'nt that right Dev?
Dev is shy.
G:Such things have to be private.
M:But Geet..
G:Stop this nonsense.You are crazy and Kiddish sometimes.
M:Geet..i want to hear Shravan confessing his love to Khushi.
G:Why do you want to interfere in their love life?Such things can be told only when they are alone.How can they open their heart in front of us?
She looks at everyone:I think we all should leave this room now leaving Shravan and Khushi alone.
Dev:That's right.
Mus:Oh Geet!
Muskaan takes Sanjana from Shravan.
Mus:It's time for her to have food.Let Khushi take rest.I will feed him.
They all go out.
Shravan and Khushi look at each other.They both are shy also.
Suddenly Khushi coughs.Shravan gets scared.He holds her hand:Khushi!
K:I'm ok Shravanji.It's rainy season.Right?Very cold.So i just coughed.
He is relieved.
Sh:I got scared.You know Khushi.I can't lose you.When you were in the ventilator we all were so scared.Then i realized that...
K:What did you realize Shravanji?
Khushi is longing to hear magical words from him.
Sh:I realized that i have fallen in love again...with you...
She feels that his love has touched her eyes..so her eyes are sparkling.
She smiles.

Shravan comes out.Maan is standing outside the room.
Sh:Maan uncle!You are still here?
M:Ya...how can i go back peacefully?Tell me..did you confess?
Sh:Yes.
Maan is excited:Really?Wow!Congrats.
Sh:But she did'nt say anything.She loves me or not.No idea.
M:Don't worry.I'm a throwing a party after Khushi gets diascharged.You have to call her for a dance.If she is willing to dance with you..that means she also loves you.
Shravan is tense.

Party...

Shravan sings 'Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye

Dil ka yeh kya raaz hai, jaane kya kar gaye
Jaise andhero mein tum, chaandni bhar gaye
Kare chaand taaron ko, mashoor itna kyun
Kambakht inn se bhi khoobsurat hai tu

I love you, tu ru ru .. yeah yeah .. - 3 times'{Bodyguard}.
He extends his arms towards Khushi singing.
With a smile she holds his hand and they both dance.Maan winks his eyes at Shravan.Shravan smiles.
Maan-Geet,Dev-Muskaan,Karthi-Srivastav,Milind-Pari also dance.



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Edited by jasminerahul - 13 years ago
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