Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 115

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Posted: 13 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
glad shraven is changing
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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Posted: 13 years ago
hey that's sooo nice yaar...
shravan started to feel for khushi...
loved it...looking fwd...

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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
sharavan is changing a bit now
hope soon he realises his love for khushi
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Posted: 13 years ago

Love story with a strange twist Part 45{2nd version}


Khushi is in the garden.She waters the plants.While walking,her leg slips and she is about to fall down.Suddenly Shravan holds her hand tightly preventing her from falling down.They both are lost in each other's eyes.
hravan becomes conscious of what he is doing.Slowly he removes his hand from her hand.

He talks softly:Be more careful while walking Khushi.
She is surprised by his soft manner of speech.
She thinks:How can Shravanji be so soft to me?
She nods her head with tension:Yes.

He walks away.
She looks at him walking.
She thinks about Geet's words:Shravan will accept you.But you need to wait for some more time.
Slowly she smiles.
Shravan turns back and looks at her.She is surprised.
He goes away.
She thinks:Is Geet's aunty's words becoming true?You are changing Shravanji..
She smiles.She smiles thinking of her rain moment with Shravan.
Slowly her smile disappears.
She thinks:What if what i'm thinking about his change is not true?

Khushi is crossing the road.Unexpectedly a bus hits her.
Khushi gets admitted to the hospital.
All the Khurana members are there.They all are crying.
Shravan is not crying.He is numb.
Pari goes near him with tears:Your wife is in the ventilator.Doctor has given no hope.Still you have no change?Your face has no expression.You are losing your wife.Sanju is losing her mother.Still you have no problem.What kind of a man you are?Are you a human being?
Shravan controls himself.He suppresses his emotions.
Milind holds Pari's hand.
Mi:Pari...control yourself.Leave him alone.He is tense that he can't even express how sad he is.
P:He is not sad Milind.He is happy to get rid of Khushi bhabhi.Because he does'nt love her.He hates her.
Unexpectedly he reacts:No.I don't hate her.
Pari can't believe what she has heard.She can't believe the way he has reacted.
Shravan weeps:What will i do Pari?First God snatched Sachi from me.I thought my life is over.Khushi gave me a new life.But i did'nt understand that.When i got used to her,God snatched her from me.
Geet:No...God has'nt snatched Khushi from you.God can't do any mistake.He won't do that.
Her eyes are wet.
Shravan weeps.Muskaan hugs Geet.
Mus:Geet...what a fate!Why all my daughter in laws are facing death?
Geet tries to cover her fear and pain by giving strength to Muskaan:What nonsense are you saying?Nothing has happened to Khushi.She is still alive.
Dev is really upset.
Maan goes near Shravan:I know that you are scared of losing Khushi.Pray well Shravan.God will hear your prayer.
Shravan cries.
Shravan goes near the God Shiva's idol and weeps.
Sh:Khushi is such a sweet girl.She has only tried to make us happy.Still why did you be so cruel to her?Please save her.I beg you.
He turns back.He sees Pari looking at him seriously.
P:Surgery is over.
Shravan has no strength to hear the rest.
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Posted: 13 years ago
really this is getting on interesting...lovely update dear.
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey nice part...
hope khushi is fine..
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
hope khushi is fine...
plzz continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wowww loved it
waiting to see what happened
but poor sharavan man how much has he to suffer now
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Posted: 13 years ago
khushi vl b alright na..
update soon..

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