Love story with a strange twist:Maaneet FF Climax - Page 109

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Posted: 14 years ago
wowww loved it
finally milind confessed his love
the pic is not coming 😭
but will be waiting to see who it is
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks 4 da pm n lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago
tx for the update, who is this lady?
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 39 b
nice part...
who is the lady?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Love story with a strange twist:Part 40{2nd version}

Shravan:Pappi maa...
That lady's eyes become wet.
She:Shravan?
Sh:Yes..your Shravan.
Shravan runs to her.She hugs him.
She:How are you?
Sh:I'm fine.But i missed you and Rahul uncle a lot.Why did'nt you visit us?
Muskaan smiles seeing their love.She is happy about their emotional reunion.

Muskaan:We enquired a lot about you and Rahul Padmini aunty.But we did'nt get any information.We are really touched by your visit.
Pari:Shravan bhai..this is Pappi maa?Rahul uncle's mom?
Sh:Ya.
Pari:I have heard a lit about Rahul uncle and Pappi maa.But now only i could you see you.
Geet:Where were you Padmini aunty?
Padmini:Rahul did'nt want to desturb you all.We wanted to forget everything.We thought it's better to stay away from you all.
Mus:Rahul...?His wife and children..?
Pad:He did'nt get married.
Mus:Why?
Pad:Because he was not confident to get married as he was not sure whether he will be able to love another lady.
Muskaan's face becomes dull.Dev also becomes dim.
Maan:Where is Rahul?
Padmini busts into tears.
Everyone becomes upset.
Mus:Why are you crying aunty?
Pad:Two years back Rahul died in an accident.
All are shocked.
Tears fall from Muskaan's,Shravan's and Geet's eyes.
Mus:Rahul was my best friend.He is the one who helped me when i was in trouble.
Sh:Rahul uncle loved me like his own son.
Pad:It's our fate.I came here with a request.Rahul had adopted a girl.We named her Khushi.She was his darling.He lived for her.His death made her very weak as he was everything for her.But i gave her the strength to live her life.But now..i know that i can't be her forever.I'm suffering from cancer.
All are shocked.
Mus:Aunty...
Sh:Pappi maa..
They cry.
Pad:I don't want Khushi to be an orphan.I request you all to look after her like your own daughter.
Dev:Padmini aunty...Rahul helped Muskaan a lot.We can never forget that.We can never ignore Rahul's daughter.His daughter is our daughter.We will bring her here.
Padmini is relieved:Thanks a lot.
G:Did you tell this to Khushi?
Pad:Ya..i told her that she may have to move to another house before my death.Only then i will be able to die peacefully.First she made a lot of fuss.But i made her understand the situation.She will adjust.

After 2 days...
Khurana members go to Padmini's house.They see a crowd there.
They get inside the house.
They see Padmini's dead body.Khushi is crying near her.
They feel sad.Muskaan,Geet and Shravan cry.The others control their tears.
Muskaan goes near Khushi snd puts her arms on her shoulder.
Mus:Khushi...we are there with you.
Kh:You are Muskaan aunty?
Muskaan is surprised as Khushi recognised her.
Kh:I have seen your photos.You had a special place in dad's heart.
Khushi sees Geet.
Mus:She is my twin sister Geet.
Kh:I know...you both were dad's friends.But from your gestures i understood that you are Muskaan aunty.Dad had explained each and everything of your's to me.
Muskaan is surprised.
Padmini's cremation time.
Poojari:Where is her son to perform the rites?
Khushi cries:He is no more.
Dev:I will perform the rites like a son.
All are surprised.
Dev performs the rites.

They take Khushi to their house.Day by day Khushi gets more and more closer to them.
She takes the photo where she is with Rahul and Padmini and talks:Dad..dadi...what you both said is true.The people over here are very loving.I'm very happy here.
She hears the sound of bangles.She goes out of the room.
She sees Maan putting bangles on Geet's wrist.

G:I'm surprised Maan...today i wore a viloet salwar kameez.Without knowing that you bought viloet bangles for me.What a coincidence.It was a truly a surprise.
Maan smiles:God made me buy violet bangles,because he loves the people who are madly in love with each other.
Maan and Geet laugh.
Khushi gets into her room with a smile.
She thinks:Maan uncle and Geet aunty are so much in love.
Suddenly her face becomes dull like a fading flower.
Kh:Getting true love is a luck.I'm not lucky enough to get it.


Slowly tears flow down her cheeks.
Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Update
Cont Soon
Thanks 4 The PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update...I always wondered what happened to Rahul...
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Posted: 14 years ago
part 40 b
nice part...
oh now Khushi is living with them...
cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, brilliant part
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
hiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
sooo cute
loved khushi's entry
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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