A Mistake Of Our Life - Mayur SS.. updt pg36

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Sanchari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

very nice part radhika...

but had to wait really wrong...

please continue soon...

really nice update...

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ana.khan

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

gud 1...lyked it...ll b waitng for update...

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Binal Damania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

i lovd this ff...
plzz do pm me...

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Babaji Ka Thullu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Hello frnds hii... lo here is d nxt part..

PART 8

"chalo ghar chalo lunch time u knw.. mom ka call
aaya tha..." Mayank said happily... finally
Nupur smiled n walked out of cabin with him...

"ye Mayank bhi na kabhi nahi sudhrega... kaun
kahega ek baby ka papa banane wala haii... khud
bhi ek baby se kam nahi haii... ise kaam na karne
kaa bahana bhi mil jaata haiii...aur aise excuses
dega ki koi naraz bhi nahi ho skta..."
Nupur thought n smiled at his talks...

"ye Nupur bhi na bossy haii puri ki puri... aaj
to bach gaya...par mein thodi naa har baar ki tarah
game khel raha tha... baby ke baareme hi to padh
raha tha...fir bhi daant na shuru kar deti par mein
bhi smart hu aise kaise daant khaa leta... apne
baby ke liye read kar raha tha..."Mayank said
proudly in his mind n smiled him self while both
walking out of office n left every1 in sock...
as they were leaving office at lunch time..n
together...

They reached home... as they reached home Nupur
saw Shilpa aunty was in kitchen... so she directly
went to kitchen...shilpa aunty was making daal..
n Nupur started to cough... as soon as she heard
Nupur's cough.. she turned...

"are Nupur tu yaha..?? chal bahar beith..."
Shilpa aunty lead her to the hall... n made her sit
on sofa.. where Mayank was watching TV...

"kisne kaha tha tuje kitchen me jaane ke liye???"
Shilpa aunty scolded Nupur... n Mayank was
watching saas bahu drama in TV n also real life..

"wo mom meine dekha aap kitchen mein haii to bas
aap ki help karne aa rahi thi..."

"are meri help karne ki koi jarurat nahi haii..
aur tuje pata hai aisi haalat mein kitchen mein
kuch nahi karna chahiye... yaha Shanti se beith...
khaana ban chuka haiii... jab me bulaau tab khaane
aa jaana..." Said to Nupur..

"aur tu yaha beithe beithe kya kar raha haiii???"

"saas bahu ka serial dekh raha hu..."
Mayank replied while pointing at TV...

"kya ladkiyon ki tarah saans bahu ka serial dekhne
beith gaya...chal uth meri help kar..."

"wt me no mom... ye ladkiyon ka kaam haii...mein
nahi karne wala..."
Mayank refused...

"kuch kaam ka nahi haii ye ladka..."
Shilpa aunty said n left...

n Mayank turned tuwards Nupur n saw she was
glaring at him...

"wt??" Mayank asked..

"tum mom ko help nahi kar sakte the kya??? mein
help karne gayi thi par jab mom daal bana rahi thi
to kuch ajeeb feel hua is liye nahi kar paayi..
par tum to kar sakte the na..."

"oh hello madam ye office nahi haiii ye ghar haii..
so yaha mein boss hu...tum nahi...office me
tumhaari chalti hogi bt ghar me sirf or sirf meri
samji tum..."

"mom ne sach hi kaha tum kisi kaam ke nahi ho...
naa office mein kuch kaam karte ho naa ghar me.."

"wt do u mean by office me kaam nahi karta...
sabse pehle company me mein aata hu... samji
tum mujse shuru hoti haii humari company tum to
baad me aati ho..."
Mayank argued...

"tum kab time se office me aaye.. hamesha late aate
ho... aur hamesha mujse daant khate ho...aur kehte
ho ki tum mujse pehle aate ho..."

"haa humari company ka name kya haii...??"
Mayank asked..

"wt ?? company ka name... M & N.."
Nupur replied..n alsp perplexed...

"so M& N me M for Mayank.. Mayank Sharma aata
haiii... to aaya na mein pehle... n Then N
for Nupur... Nupur Bhushan baad mein aata haii..
to tum baad mein aati ho samji..."

"itna ucha matt udo... samje tum.. waqt badal jaata
haii na to name bhi badal jaata haii... mein
Nupur Bhushan thi... ab Nupur Mayank Sharma hu..
aut is mein Mayank.. Mayank Sharma hamesha
Nupur ke piche hi rahega samje tum..."
Nupur became hyper...then both sat quitly...

"ho gaya...????"Shilpa aunty said... n both looked
at her n realised dat she was njoying their
fight...Nupur felt embaressed.. as infront of her
mother in law she was fighting with her husband...

"Sry mom wo bas Mayank ..." before Nupur could
complite her sentense Mayank started,...

"wt Mayank haa??? isme bhi mera name... dekha mom
mein kitna responsible hu kisi bhi baat ke liye
responsible mein hi hota hu...ab aap kabhi muje
irrisponsible mat kehna..."

"hwww tum dono husband wife ke bich me main kaha se
aa gayii...????"

"haa mom ye Mayank haii hi aisa... aap chalo..."
Nupur said to Shilpa n both left... n Mayank's
mouth fell open...

"saas bahu serial me to kuch aur hi hota haiii...
Mayank jaldi se jaa aur dekh is saas bahu ke bich
me kya khichdi pakk rahi haii..."
Said Mayank to hilself n went to dinning area...
n saw his mom n wife were already sat...

"ye le ye bhi aa gaya...chal beith.."
Shilpa said... n then they had their lunch...

" Nupur tum ready ho jaao..."
Mayank commanded...

"kyu tum dono kahi jaa rahe ho???" Shilpa aunty asked

"mom wo bas Nupur ke liye doctor se appointment
li haii to bas Nupur ke check up ke liye hi
jaana haii..." Mayank said seriously...

"thik haiii jaao tum dono..." Shilpa said while
putting her hand on her head...
Mayank nodded...

AT HOSPITAL...

{Surprise for Anjali diii [Anjali_12]}

MAYUR reached to the hospital... Doctor called
themm.. then entered in cabin... n saw a lady
wearing pink dress n haaving her lab coat on her...
Mayank entered n saw her...

"Anjali tum????" Mayank screamed...happily...
lady looked up n saw Mayank .. she stood up
seeing him...

"omg Mayank... tum.. i didnt expect it..."
Anjali said n come forward n both hugged...

"Anjali tum to USA thi na??? i mean tumhaari shaadi
ke baad tum USA chali gayi thi..."

"haa mein abhi abhi USA se india aayi hu.. apne
pati aur beti ke sath..."Anjali said while
breaking hug...

"dats cool..."

"so MR. Sharma apni wife ke sath.. hospital mein
hmmm gud news haiii..." Anjali said while seeing
Nupur...

"haa ops sry ye meri wife haii Nupur... Nupur
ye meri college frnd haiii Anjali..."

Mayank introduced them... n Anjali smiled...

"hii.."Nupur said..

"hello.. hw are u??" Anjali asked..

"m fine..." Nupur replied...

"aao... beitho..."Anjali said..
n they sat...

"Anjali sry i mean Dr. Anjali tum Nupur ka
check up kar lo..."Mayank said...
Anjali nodded...

"thik haii .. Nupur come..." Anjali took Nupur
with her... n Mayank was waiting for them..

after sumtimes both came...

"Sab thik haii na???" Mayank asked...

"haa thik sab thik haii... par Nupur bahut weak
haii Mayank..."
Nupur sat beside Mayank n Anjali sat in front
of them...

"haa Mayank Nupur bahut weak haii... use healthy
food ki jarurat haii.. kyunki agar Nupur weak
rahegi to baccha bhi weak hi rahega... iske sath
sath...usse bahut kuch cheezo ka dhyan rakhna haiii..
jaise Nupur ko nausea hoga... jaise daal ke
boiling ki smell usse bardast nahi hogi.. daal me
tadka karne ke waqt ... she will be very sensitive
in all these..."

n Nupur remembered about kitchen scene...
n Mayank was listening her carefully,,

"abhi Mayank u r new to all these... tumhe samajna
hoga ki its all coz of pregnency...use morning
sick ness hogi... vomiting your head will be heavy,
you feel dizzy..Its really feel uncomfortable...
aur ye 3 months ka jo waqt hota haii wo bahut hi
nazuk hota haii... is time mein zara si carelessness
baby aur mummy dono ko bhari par sakti hai...
aur sayad baby ki jaan bhi... its liye extra care
full rehna padega... aur abhi Nupur bahut weak hai
to uska jyada se jyada khayal rakhana padega...
kyunki Nupur ka sidha effect baby par padta hai..
wo kya sochti haii kya karti haii sab kuch...
is liye no stress... no worry no hard work...
coz in sab ka effect baby par padta hai... so
always use happy rakhna... aisa environment creat
karo ki Nupur khush rahe.. tabhi baby bhi khush
rahega... aur Nupur tumhe bhi apni care khud karni
hogi... time se so naa. time par khaana..
healthy food.. n thik tarah se khana... tum jaanti
ho ki ab tumhe sirf ek nahi do logo ka khana haii..
aur aisi kisi bhi chiz ko mat khanaa ki baby ko
harm ho... bahaar ka khana avoid karna ok..."
Anjali instructed them...

"thnk u doctor..." Nupur thnked her..

"u welcum Nupur... n Mayank mera frnd haii to
uske aur uski family ke liye mein itna to kar hi
sakti hu naa..." Anjali samiled n said..

"thnk u Anjali... ab aur kuch i mean aisa kuch
jo hume dhyan rakhna ho...??"Mayank asked...

"haa ise jyada pareshan mat karna coz i knw u
Mayank college me tum kaise the...aur Sneha ko
kitna pareshan karte the..."

Mayank face fell.. bt tried to smile...

"ohkk thnk u so much anjali..."Mayank said...

"u always welcum Mr.Sharma.. aur ye jo medicine
likhi haii ise time se Nupur ko de dena...
n kabhi bhi kisi bhi time koi bhi prob ho to muje
call kar dena ohkk kyunki 3 months tak mein yahi
hu..."n handed him reports...

"yah sure.. thnksss..." Mayank said..
n then Nupur hugged Anjali n thnked her...
n Mayank also hugged her.. then both left...
Mayank brought medicine n also fruitsss...
n then they reached home...

as then entered they saw Mayank's dad was sitting
n Sneha was crying n hugging him... n Shilpa aunty
was standing there...as Mayur entered they turned
n saw them... they walked towards hall...
seeing expression of his dad Mayank understood dat
Sneha has already told him about His wedding n
Nupur's pregnency...

" dad aap kab aaye..." Mayank asked...

"pehle ye batao Mayank meine abhi abhi jo sunaa
wo sach haii ya nahi???"
Mayank's dad asked in hard voice... n for a moment
Mayank scared...n Nupur was also too much scared
hearing voice of his father in law ...

"dad wo bas mein..."

"wt the hell Mayank... tumne shaadi ki hai ya nahi??"
Mayank's dad asked angrily...Mayank remeined silent
coz he knw his dad...

"wow the great silence..." Sneha said...
n Nupur n Mayank looked at her...

"is khamosi ka matlab yahi huaa na ki jo bhi Sneha
ne kaha wo sach haii... tumne usse dhoka de kar
Nupur ke sath... muje to bolne mein bhi sharam
aati haii...sach kehti thi Shilpa meine hi tumhe
bigad rakha haii aur uski saza bhi muje hi bhugatni
padegi..."saidn n left... n Shilpa also went
behind her husband...

Sneha came to Mayur...

"tumne aisa kyu kiya Sneha???" Mayank asked
angrily...

"ab pata chala kisi apne ko khone ka dard kya
hota haiii...Mayank...abhi to sirf dad se meine
tumhe dur kar diya haiii... jise tum bahut
pyaar karte the..to tumhe to uska dard milna hi
thaa...

aur Nupur tum... tumne to mere Mayank ko mujse
cheen liya naa... is bacche ki wajase... ab
bacha sakti ho to apne bacche ko bacha kar dekh
lena..."Said to Nupur n left ...
Mayur were hell socked... Nupur ran to her room...
after sumtimes she saw Mayank entered room...
he was so silent... come n sat on sofa... in deep
thought... Nupur realised dat Mayank was too in
pain n they had to be strong... She slowly went
to him n sat beside him...n put her hand on his
shoulder... he came out of thoughts...

"dad Mujse naraz ho gaye Nupur... aaj tak meine
kitni bhi badi galti kyu naa ki ho wo hamesha sath
rahe haii mere... mom se meri wajase fight karte
the... aur aaj unhone bhi mera sath chhod diya jab
muje sabse jyada unki jarurat thi...aur Sneha
muje lagta tha ki meine use dhokha de kar bahut
bura kiya kyunki mein use pyaar karta tha ... par
aaj muje nafrat hone lagi haii khud se ki mein
Sneha se pyaar karta tha.. usne mere dad ko to
cheen hi liye.. mere baccche ko bhi marna chahti
haiii Nupur... mein kya karu muje kuch samaj me
nahi aa raha haii..." tears were steaming frm both;s
eyes... n Mayank put his head on her shoulder...
n Gunja hugged him to coomfert him...

"Mayank abhi dad naraz haiii na.. hum unhe mana
lenge naa... aur jo hume sabse jyada pyaar karta
haii wo hi to sabse jyada naraz hota haii... aur
anjaane me hi sahi humne unko chot pohchayi haii..."
Nupur said him to encourage him...

"wo nahi maanenge Nupur mein janta hu apne dad ko
wo mujse bahut pyaar karte haii... aur meine unko
dukh diya haii... wo kabhi nahi maanenge..."
n hugged her tightly...

"Mayank tum aisa kyu sochte ho... hum koshish to
kar sakte haii na... " Mayank nodded...

"Aur humara baby uska kya Nupur??? Sneha use..."

"kuch nahi hone denge na hum humare baby ko..."
Nupur said while breaking hug...

"kuch nahi hoga baby ko jaante ho kyu??? "
Nupur held Mayank's hand n put it on her tummy..
Mayank was just looking at her..

"kyunki is baby ke jo papa haiii na wo apne baby
ko na bahut jyada pyaar karte haii bahuttt...
aur uske liye ab offfice mein wo game bhi nahi
khelte aur baby ki care karne ke liye articales
padhte haii... aur uska har tarah se bahut khayal
rakhte haii... ab jab uske papa baby ko itna pyaar
karenge to baby kaise uske papa se dur jayega...
kahi nahi jaayega...hum haii na uski care karne
ke liye.. haii na..??? baby ka papa haii na???"
Nupur asked...n her words gave him strength..

"haa baby mein aap ko kuch nahi hone dunga papa
loves u a lot..." Mayank said smilingly...
n hugged her...n Nupur too hugged him...

"Mayank..."

"Nupur plzz thodi der aise rehne do..."
Mayank requested to her.. n Nupur remained silent..
as she knew as of knw Mayank need sum1...

"Mayank subah office mein tum baby ke baareme
konsi site se padh rahe the...??"
Nupur asked to cheer him up...
so Mayank soon broke the hug...

"oh wo.. chalo tumhe dikha ta hoo..."
Mayank held her hand n then made her sit on bed..
n he took his laptop n sat beside her...
n then looged in n saw her site...n read n
make fun of Nupur.. n laughed... n sumtimes
gave her warnings strictly...n Nupur was listeniing
him... n sumtimes lost in him...

precap:

"Mayank ghar chhod kar jaa raha hai plzz use rok
lo..."

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Love😉
Radhi...

Edited by RadhikaBhushan - 14 years ago

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monalisa1234

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Posted: 14 years ago

#135

very beautiful update,but that sneha😡😡i wanna kill her with my own hand.dont let anything bad happen to my nupur or the baby. plzzz its an earnest request haan?plzz update the next part soon,and add some romance in it plz..=😳

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Binal Damania

@binudamania

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Posted: 14 years ago

#136

superb update...
i lovd it
do cnt soon

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samira

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Posted: 14 years ago

#137

=Brilliant update dear loved how mayr concelling each other n hate that Sneha 🤢
i hpe verything goes well soon n mayur fall in love

Radhi u said Gunjan instead nupur not complaining just 2 remain u 😃

n plzzz add some romantic moments next update n jald karnaa plzzz

thanks lot for the pm