Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 31

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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
seems like arjun has everything planned but i am sure maan will save geet from everything...
eager to know wats gonna happen next...

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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT


Part 15

"omg..omg..omg..sweety...how did this happen..i didn't evn knew that u were in this hospital until i met kathie...iam sorry geet" screamed jenny when she entered geet's room looking at geet who was trying to sleep...

geet woke up suddenly with the scream of jenny...before she could speak..jenny ran to geet and hugged her...saying.."don't worry..everything will be fine"

geet got irritated...

geet: jenny stop it...iam ok now...

jenny : are u sure honey...

geet: yes...

jenny: then its ok...

jenny then started talking abput various issues to geet as if there is no tomorrow...geet held her head not knowing how to stop jenny...

geet: jenny...u have nothing to do or what?

jenny: u silly...u have a good sense of humour...hehehe

geet gave a confused expression...saying..."sense of humour?"

jenny: actually today is my celebration day...i officiallyy broke up with my boy friend today

geet got shocked and screamed.."again?"

jenny: we started dating each other 2 long weeks back...so we felt bored..thats why...and from today iam a free bird..and i have to start my hunt for a new one...

geet got furious

geet: jenny..if u say one more word about ur loves and dates to me ..i swear...iam going to kill u..just stop this non-sense...

jenny: common geet..don't be jealous of me...

geet: jealous? jenny..u know what...i need to take rest...so please leave from here...

jenny: oh geet...why everytime u r shooing me away from you...anyways...take rest i will leave...

geet sighed in relief when she said those words...jenny stood up to leave and walked towards the door...when she was about to open the door...maan entered geets' room...

jenny turned towards geet in surprise...with her mouth wide opened

jenny: omg..geet..who is this handsome hunk...

geet looked at jenny in anger...maan gave a confused expression...

geet: jenny..i told u to leave...

jenny: ok..ok...iam leaving...

while leaving jenny winked at maan...maan got embarrassed and looked aside...

geet: maan...don't take it seriously..she is just like that...a crazy girl...

maan nodded and smiled...

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Arjun reached geet's flat with flowers and ring...well prepared for proposing...geet..but he got disappointed when he saw her flat locked...

arjun: its already 6.00pm..by this time geet should be at home...mistake was mine..i should have called geet before coming her...but to give her a surprise i didn't called and now iam facing trouble...

he tried to ask the old woman living adjacent to geet's flat about geet..but he remembered his bitter experiences with that lady and stopped himself from asking her...he then tried to call geet...but before he could call her... he received call from a close fried of his who was a bar owner...he answered the call...his expressions changed from anger to worry...on listening to his friends words...he cut the call and ran towards his car with tears in his eyes...

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Finally geet got discharged from the hospital...geet thanked kathie for her help..kathie smiled and whispered in geet's ear looking at maan..."good choice geet..."..geet got confused...

geet: good choice?

kathie patted her shoulders and left to attend an emergency case without giving any reply to geet..geet shook his head and walked towardss parking lot holding maan's arm...as she was weak...

geet and maan reached their apartment...geet walked slowly towards the lift with maan's support...when they were about to enter lift they saw a notice on it saying.."lift under repair"

geet: oh..no...yeh lift ko bhi abhi kharab hona hey

maan: hum sidiyon se upar chalenge...

geet: maan...humare flat 10 th floor mein hey...in this situation i can't ...

maan thought for a second...he then quickly lifted geet in his arms and started walking carrying her...

geet got shocked and at the same time surprised...

geet: maan..aap thak jaayenge..plz...mujhe neeche uthariye...

maan just smiled and continued his walk...

geet: aapna bahuth kamal ke cheez ho...ap kab kya karthe hey..bilkul samaj mein nahi aatha...

having said these words geet closed her eyes...and leaned onto maan's shoulders...maan was lost in her touch and close proximity

maan (monologue): kamal ki cheez mein nahi..tum ho geet...tumhe nahi patha aaj mein kithna kush hu...agar babaji kripa kare...mein zindagi bhar tumhe aise hi utake le chalu...

he snapped out of his thoughts

maan(monologue): maan tum kya soch rahe ho...baar baar..kyu apne aapko kamzor bana rahe ho...pyaar..vyaar...tumhare nasseb mein nahi hey...

the smile which was there on maan's face suddenly vanished with those thoughts...he became serious and continued walking without any expression on his face...

Mumbai

Rachna threw all the documents before the trust members...

"iam saying..how long..how long i have to wait?"yelled rachna at trust members...

Avinash who was sitting calmy and quietly at a corner..stood up...and said...

"now there is no need to wait...mrs rachna..ur truth is out"

this infuriated rachna further...trust members looked at avinash in shock and surprise

rachna: Mr avinash..think before you speak..u have to born again to prove me wrong...

avinash: i think its not needed...mrs rachna...

avinash gave a smile to her and looked at trust members...saying.."my dear friends...now i have a solid proof to say that the girl brought by rachna is not geet..."

rachna looked at avinash in disbelief...he then showed the photos and documents of geet which he got from the private detectives...who took all these things from arjun...which arjun is totally unaware of...

rachnna stood speechless in shock..when she saw those photos...and documents...

avinash: so my dear friends..from this it is clear that ...this lady..mrs.rachna tried to fool us...by bringing an imposter...

rachna got scared..without speaking a word after that ..she walked out of her own house...trying to escape from all the legal proceedings...

to be continued...
Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
me first to comment🥳
hey thanks for updating this ss loved the update continue soon
Edited by abinash079 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update. wowww maan picked up geet and is going to take her to tenth floor and thinking about to pick her whole life. sooo sweet of him and geet doen't know anything about his feelings.

thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
After this I think Jenny going to attack Maan.
This is really going to be funny.
I wish to see Jenny's crazy act.
Please include this.
thx for the pM
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Posted: 14 years ago


What news Arjun got , that he had tears in his eyes ???
Maan's so sweet took Geet in his arms & carried her to 10th floor 😳 . His time 2 time self-introspection is scary though; he's constantly reminding himself that he does not deserve Geet
Good move of Avinash 👏

Superb 👍🏼👍🏼
Thanks for pm ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
omg arjun came to propose her well she wud have said no anyways...
maan is losing himself in her day by day but wat geet feels for him is just friendship for now...
so for now one prob sorted abt rachna...
i am sure arjun wud hv got call abt his brother...
pl cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
i really love this ff... thoda jaldi update kiya karo na plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely update...!!!!
Awww...maan is losing himself to geet
he is sooo sweet i'm luving him...!!!!
and i'm glad that avinash proved that the girl brought by geet's step mom is not geet...!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

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