Bhageeratha- maaneet(ss) part 16 pg 63 updated - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
when r u updating the next part

please answer to my question
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Originally posted by: abinash079

when r u updating the next part

please answer to my question


tomorrow i will update dear...i will try to update 2 parts tomorrow😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
stupid n cruel mohit n vinati
Edited by ammu5 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi nice ss. just finish it reading all the parts. all parts r good. wow maan teaching football is really interesting. can't wait for maaneet meeting. 😆 and hopefully soon. pls continue and update sooonnn can't wait for them to meet
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THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

Part 7

said these words mohith gave a kiss to her, cut the call and got busy in packing...

Inspite of his parent's request to postpone the trip...mohit paid a deaf ear to them and he came to airport to catch the sydney flight...He boarded the flight dreaming about sydney and vinati.

Sydney, Australia

Sunny reached geet's flat to convince her about the conditions. He stood outside and called her. But to his bad luck her phone was switched off. He kept ringing the door bell. But there was no response. Not knowing what to do...he again came back to vinati's flat. Though the door was locked from inside he entered with the spare key which he had with him. On entering ...he heard vinati talking to mohith...first he thought to leave to give some privacy to vinati...but when he heard the words..."that fool...sunny"...he stopped for a moment and listened to the entire conversation...

When vinati said to mohith on phone..."iam dying to be with u"...sunny's heart shattered...he felt as if someone is ripping his heart...he couldnot take the betrayal of vinati...he simply left the place...without making any noise...

After leaving vinati's flat...sunny reached a lonely place...he cried his heart out...then he wiped his tears...and took a decision...

sunny: vinati...u took me for granted...u played with my emotions...now i will show what pain means...i will make ur life hell...mohith...u will get what u deserve...

An evil smile appeared on his face...he reached a bar and drank...thinking about vinati's betrayal and his revenge...

Next day...

Geet got up after a heavy sound sleep...she looked at her watch...it showed 10a.m.

geet: omg...its 10...arrgh..why i slept like this...i had to get ready...

said these words she rushed into washroom to get ready for college...

While on his way to college...

geet: oh no...i think sunny told that today his friend will be arriving...i have to ask him about that...

she tried to call...but his phone was switched off...she tried several times...but couldn't reach him...

geet: oh god ...this sunny...i wanna kill him...he will disappear at that time during which he is needed the most...what to do now...leave it geet...if needed sunny will call u...

she calmed herself and went to attend her classes...

Mumbai

Maan finally decided to accept the job offer given by arjun. Without a second thought he called to the number which arjun gave...Arjun answered the call...

maan: hello arjun ji...mein maan bol raha hu...

arjun: oh ...hello maan...kaise hey aap...aur kya socha hey job ke baare mein?

maan: ji...mein tayyar hu aapke saath kaam karne keliye...

arjun: oh then fine...aap hotel oberoi aajaiye...mein wahi pe hu...if u don't have any problem...we will discuss about further details...

maan: ok...aapka room no.

arjun: i will be at reception...waiting for u..aap jaldhi aajayiye...

maan said "yes" and cut the call...he then rushed to oberoi hotel to meet arjun...Arjun greeted maan with a smile...he felt very happy about maan's decision...

Arjun: maan...aapke paas passport hey...

maan: ji hey.

arjun: then its fine...i will book the ticket for both of us...and we will leave tomorrow...

maan thanked arjun...and prayed to his babaji to help him...in this work...

Maan called adi to inform him about the new job...adi felt very happy and promised maan that he will take good care of his grandparents ...

Next day...maan and arjun reached airport to leave for sydney...but arjun got an urgent call ...he looked at maan...

arjun: maan...aaj mein nahi aa saktha...i have an very urgent work...

maan: ok arjun..hum wapas chale jayenge...

arjun: no...no..no...aap sydney jaayiye...

maan: lekin...

arjun: don't worry maan...i will talk to my brother...he will pick u at airport...he will be there to help u...ok...

maan agreed and boarded the flight...while boarding the flight...

maan(monologue): babaji...mein aaj apni hi mitti ko chodke ja raha hu...mein jaha bhi jao aap mere saath hi rehna...aur mera daadi aur dadaji ka khayal rakhna...bas yehi dua hey aapse...

a tear escaped from his eye when he thought about his grand parents...

Within few min after boarding ...flight took off...taking maan...to sydney where he is going to meet his life...

Sydney, Australia

Finally mohith reached sydney...sunny stood there with a smile...

mohit: aap sunny right?

sunny: yeah...welcome to sydney...Mr.Mohit..

mohit: thanks...huh...vinati nahi aayi...

sunny clenched his fist in anger...he controlled himself...and said "no"...sunny observed the disappointed look on mohit's face...

.After exchange of greetings...they reached parking lot...

sunny: mohith...u want to meet vinati first? (with a evil look)

Though mohit was very much excited to meet vinati...he denied it ...

mohit: iam very much tired...we will go to flat first...after that we will meet vinati...waise...u talked to ur friend about the conditions...Did she agree for that?...

sunny: haaan..i talked to her...she understood and agreed to share the flat with u without any conditions...

mohit smiled...both mohit and sunny got into the car...due to long journey mohit fell asleep...sunny smirked at mohith and drove the car to an old cottage in a forest...

After few hours...mohit woke up...he looked aside...sunny was not there...he came out of the car...and got shocked...he was in a forest...his whole body started to shiver...with a shaking voice...he called..." sunny"...there was no response...again he tried to call louder...but he got a hard blow on his head from backside...he became unconscious...sunny laughed hysterically looking at mohit who was lying on the ground...

sunny: vinati...now u will not see this mohit in ur life time...

said these words sunny dragged mohit into cottage...then his phone rang...it was from his brother...arjun...

arjun: sunny...where are u...i was trying to call u since last night...but ur phone is switched off...listen carefully...actually...mujhe aaj sydney pahunchna tha...along with my friend maan...lekin mujhe ek zaroori kaam agaya aur mein nahi aapaya..but maan is coming to sydney today...he is new to sydney...tum airport jaake unko pickup karna hey...understand...

sunny: but bro...

arjun: dekho sunny...mein kuch nahi sunna chahtha...u should be at airport this evening at sharp 5...

said these words arjun cut the call...sunny looked at his watch...it was 3pm...

sunny: oh no..its already 3...to reach airport it will take minimum 5 hrs...what to do now?...hmmm...yes...geet...she only can help me...


to be continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice part
Maaneet wil meet yipeee
Sunny pagal hogaya hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG!!! Did sunny killed Mohith????
I hope he didnt. Tats so scary oh him.
I very eager bout next update!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful part,
aww...Maaneet are going to meet.
waiting ...

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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome now maan will meet geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update do continue soon

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