THE NEXT GENERATION...AR,RM,AN,AA DMG FF upd PG 23 - Page 8

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Posted: 14 years ago
#71
awesome part...the precap seems interesting!!!
cont soon...
Tc😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
add me add me plzzz to your pm list
i just love dmg..missing it sooo much

thx yaar
emma
Posted: 14 years ago
#73
i am missing your update friend.pleas give us update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
Hey Guys... Sooo soorry yaar... i know that a "sorry" doesnot make up for my lateness...but u guys have to understand that i had exams and a more important fact is that me and my frnd were trying really hard to beat this really arrogant guy in terms of marks... so yeah...i really hope u understand and sach mein agle baar jaroor update karoongi... NOW JUST SIT BACK AND ENJOY!!!!!!!!!!!!
Current track:
Our pyaara sa gang is enjoying their life at sanjeevani despite all the stress and pressure...karan and meghana are closer than ever...anirudh and suhana are well...(u know unbreakable) and as for sid and pri...their love story is facing some problems and the problems takes the face of DR RITESH>>>>>>>
NOTE: i just want to make this clear before anyone gets confused...this ff is mainly abt our gang and the old DMG gang lyk AR will be included but they r not the main focus...just to break anyone's suspense...the next chapter is completely on OLD DMG gang...
also i am going to focus on individual pair just to get the story moving...at the moment it is siddhesh and preeti...any karan- meghana or anirudh-suhana fans pls dont get disappointed as everyone is given equal importance and story space...
alrite...now i will finish my speech and...
COnTinuE:
Siddhesh's liking towards Preeti has increased and he has been wanting to ask her out for dinner...but hasnt been finding the right time and opputunity...and hence the wait...but meanwhile our dear Mr Ritesh is fully making a move on poor preeti...who is surprisingly enjoying the attention...(well...as Ritesh is showering tons of attention on Preeti...she hasnt been paying attention to anything or anyone for that matter...and hence the delay for Sid...just as Sid gears up his courage to ask preeti...)
SIDDHESH: aaj to pri to date par puchna hi padega...come on Sid u can do it...
*just passes the canteen and overhears a conversation...*
RITESH: oh dont worry dad...humara plan successful hoga...dr yuvraj ki beti barbaad ho jayeegi...aaj mein usse date par lekar jaa raha hoon aur thab aap dekhiye ki voh kamina Dr Yuvraj or uski beti Dr Preeti ka kya haal hoga...voh bechari soch thi hain ki main usse sach mein like karta hoon...no dad...par ek baat toh bolunga...agar aap ki aur Dr yuvraj ki dishmani nahi hoti toh main zaroor usse pyaar karta...
SIDDHESH: * he cant believe his ears...how could someone do this to preeti...HIS preeti...he had to tell her...but how...will he believe him...of course she will...*
*sid goes in search of preeti...cant find her anywhere...just as he spots her he is called to the nurse station...compelled by his duties Sid makes himself lose the opputunity...he is required to assist Dr Navneeta in a surgery and it takes about 4 hours...by the time he finishes the surgery it is nearly 8pm and the time for Preeti to leave...*
SIDDHESH: *just catches her at the parking lot waiting for Ritesh* PREETI!!!!!
PREETi: oh hey sid...kya baat hain...bahut nervous lag rahe ho...
SIDDHESH: oh pri main soch raha tha ki kya tum mere saath dinner pe chaloogi...
PREETI: oh sid...main..main...i would love to...par mein ritesh ke saath jaa rahi hoon...
SIDDHESH: nahin pri...tum uske saath nahin jaa sakti...
PREETI: What!!!!! what the hell Sid...tumhe kya hua...
SIDDHESH: pri mera baat suno...voh accha aadmi nahin hain...
PREETI: what sid tum...*sid cuts her*
SIDDHESH: pri maine usse phone par baat karte hua suna tha...voh sirf yuvi chahcha se badla lena chahtha hain...this is all a drama...pri pls...
PREETI: sid tum apna limits cross kar rahe ho...
SIDDHESH: pri pls...
PREETI: oh goodness sake Sid...do you know what youre even talking about...
SIDDHESH: pri pls its not safe...
PREETI: sid..
SIDDHESH: meri baat suno pri...
PREETI: THATS IT!!!!!!! maine bahut sun liya...mujhe yakeen nahi hoti ki tum itne ghir sakte ho...just cause i said no to you...tum ye sab...seriously Sid...
SIDDHESH: pri..pls...
*siddhesh realises he was wrong in believing that Preeti would definitely believe him...he realised the consequences for waiting for the right moment...the consequences being his broken heart and a searing pain on his cheek when Preeti had slapped him...*
SIDDHESH: *siddhesh watched with a broken heart...a broken heart not because Preeti said no to him...a broken heart because she didnot believe him and accused him of making lies against her...he watched with a broken heart as the love of his life drove away with the man who is ready to inflict anykind of harm on her...*
*siddhesh might have noticed the look of hatred in those chocolate eyes...but the thing he didnot notice was that Karan and Meghana watched everything that happened*
Karan had believed what had happened and was about to confront his best mate about it...
MEGHANA: SID!!!!
KARAN: SID tu aisa kaisa kar sakta hain yaa...(stops once he sees sid's face as he turns around...his face and eyes were filled with an emotion that karan and meghana had never seen in their years of friendship together...tears,grief, sadness, betrayal and remorse...karan regretted his words and feelings as he thought Sid was at fault...he felt guilty as he saw his mate's eyes that were filled with pain...)
SIDDHESH: *as karan and meghana approached him he did something that even he didnot expect himself to do...he walked off*
Sid walked off...
from the place where he was accused...
from the place where he was lost...
from the place which showed the hatred of the girl he loved...
from the place which he thought would torment him if he didnot leave...
from the place where he wanted to forget those hurtful moments of his life...
Siddhesh Garewal walked off...to lose himself in the pain and heartbreak he felt...Siddhesh Garewal walked off...maybe not to ever return to his original self...
Siddhesh Garewal walked off...with every inch of his body filled with love, pain and heartbreak for the only girl he ever truly loved deeply...PREETI OBEROI...
Hey guys...(i was seriously crying...) but anyways i hope this chapeter will make up for my long unforgiven absence...AR and others will be in the chapter...
pls tell me if u liked or hated it...
so until next time...
meghana...
pls LIKE and COMMENT>>>>>😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
Hye thats an awsm part buddy.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Update soon.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
Awesome part. Thanks for the pm
Posted: 14 years ago
#77
excelent update.i feel sorry for siddesh.pleas update soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#78
feels very bad for sid.. bechara... but cant wait for karan-meghna-poonam triangle.. that one will be explosive..especially knowing how their parents were...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#79
aww poor sid feels really bad for him
really nice part
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#80
Hey guys...i know that this is a quick update...but i had time so i though i will just update...
CoNtIuE:
Siddhesh was really upset and sad and you could tell...the next day wheh he came to sanjeevani...everyone was shocked...the normal happy go lucky Siddhesh Garewal was looking like he was dead...they spark had gone from his eyes...his warm golden hazel eyes that were always glinted with mischief were now filled with pain and remorse...his eyes were red and there was no life in his face...in short words Siddhesh Garewal looked like he was a zombie...
KARAN: kya yaar,maggie...mujhe ye pata nahin chal raha ki pri iski baat kyun nahin sun rahi thi...
MEGHANA: haan...i mean ...i dont know...
*just then preeti and ritesh come into the office holding hands...seeing karan and meghana they let go...preeti blushes and stands next to them...*
MEGHANA: *fuming* *in her head* what the hell...yeh pri hain...iska best friend devdas ki tarah padah hain aur isse fikar bhi nahin...
PREETI: hey guys...
KARAN and MEGHANA: *less cheerfully* hey pri...
*as the day goes past karan and meghana try to make plans to get the truth out of ritesh...as they hear a familiar conversation that Sid had heard yesterday...*
RITESH: *in the fire escape* dad...aap fikar mat kijeeye...the task will be complete...kal maine usse date par layke gaya tha...aur thodhe hi dino me jab voh mujhpar pura bharosa kareegi tab mein usse dhoka doounga...and dont worry dad humare plan ke baare main kisi ko bhi nahin pata hain...especially voh Siddhesh aur uske friends ko...so humara raasta clear hain...
*ritesh leaves...thinking that he will be successful in his plan...but he doesnot realise that he wasnt alone in the fire escape...karan and meghana who were just about to plan their plan in the fire escape heard him and surprisingly...some how...Anirudh and suhana were in the fire escape...though they were involved in *ahem* other activities...*
MEGHAHA: WHAT THE...
KARAN: i know right...
ANIRUDH: oh hey guys...tum logon ne bhi suna...
SUHANA: i cant believe it...
MEGHANA; mujhe ye samaj mein nahin aa raha ki...pri sid ka baat kaise nahin suni...
SUHANA: ab yeh Sid ke bacche ne kya kiya...
MEGHANA: *explains what happened yesterday*
ANIRUDH: what...are u serious...
KARAN: lekin guys...hume Sid ko batana chahiye...
SUHAHA: sorry karan...mujhe aur ani ko abhi jaana hain...hume ritesh to assist karna hain...i wish main bhi aa sakti lekin...
ANIRUDH: ek kaam karte hain...su tum jao aur main aur karan jaakar sid se baat karte hain...
MEGHANA: nahin...ani aur su tum log jaakar assist karo nahin to uss suar(pig) ko shak ho jaayega...
KARAN: haan guys...shez right...tum log jao aur just remember to keep an eye out for any weird things that ritesh does...
ANIRUDH and SUHANA: okay...bye...and good luck!!!!
*as they leave meghana suddenly feels a pang of anger at Preeti...how dare she not believe her best friend...*
KARAN: *notices that there is something worng*maggie...maggie...are u alright...
MEGHANA: haan...kuch nahin...main bas yahi soch rahi thi ki Preeti Sid ko chod kar ritesh ko kaise choose kar sakti hain...
KARAN: pata nahin yaar...anyway chalo hume sid to pata kar kuch plan banana hain...
*they find sid...who is sitting in the locker room finishing some reports...he looks so sad...that meghana was moved to tears*
KARAN: hey buddy...
SID: *looks up* hai...
KARAN: listen sid...*tells him what he heard*
SID: i knew it...*is a dissappointed voice* hume kuch karna hain...
KARAN: lekin *stops by looking at sid's face*
*sid's eyes regained some of their lost sprark but his trademark mischievous look...this time Siddhesh GArewal's eyes were filled with revenge and anger*
SID: hume abhi yuvi chahcha ke ghar jaakar unse poochna hain ki kya unki koi dushman the...
*sid quickly finishes his reports and they all leave home*
*at yuvi and naina's home...all the parents are having their once a month meetings...*
*karan, meghana and sid go to yuvi and naina and say they have to talk something important...they go into yuvi and naina's room*
meanwhile...
Armaan and Riddhima were in the kitchen as riddhima was cooking food...
Abhi and nikki were in the garden as nikki wanted some flowers...
Rahul and Muskan were on the terrace...
Anjali and atul were in the attic as anjali wanted to find some book...
*riddhima was mixing flour to make rotis*
ARMAAN: *comes from behind and holds riddhima from the back*
RIDDHIMA; armaan...armaan pls...
ARMAAN: no...
RIDDHIMA: armaan...chodo armaan...koi dekh lega tho...
ARMAAN: *fake angry tone* mujhse ye batao riddhima...jab se maine tumse pyaar karna shuru kiya tha tab se tum yahi bol rahi ho...
RIDDHIMA: waise armaan...tum aaj bahut acche lag rahe ho...*trying to change the topic*
ARMAAN: *just realised what riddhima was trying to do* dont change the topic...anyway aacha to main humesha lag tha hoon...aur waise bhi Mrs Basket Mallik aap ki aaj bahut hot lag rahi hain...
RIDDHIMA: *blushes* armaaan...
ARMAAN: oye hoye...
RIDDHIMA: *still blushing*
ARMAAN: waise riddhima tumhare naak par atta hain...
RIDDHIMA: *scrunches her nose* kahan...
ARMAAN: yahan *takes the atta and puts it on her face*
RIDDHIMA: armaan...main tumhe chodoongi nahin...
*chases armaan*
meanwhile in Naina and Yuvi's room...
SID: chacha jab aap intership ya college mein the kya aap ke koi dushman tha jo humesha aap se badla lena chahtha tha...
YUVI: kya hua Sid...achanak ye kyun...
SID: waise chacha...*explain about ritesh*
YUVI: WHAT? lekin preeti ne mujhse ye bataya khi voh bahut accha ladka hain...
NAINA: yuvi...voh ladka pri se yeh nahin boolega khi...hey main bura aadmi hoon...
YUVI: lekin sid..karan...aisa koi insaan nahin tha jo mujhse badla lena chahtha tha...
MEGHANA: lekin chahcha are u sure? koi bhi nahin...aap ka kya chachu intership ya college mein kya aap ko koi pareshaan karta tha...
YUVI: nahin maggie...i dont think so...tum log shayad galat hain...
NAINA: yuvi...ek second * her face pales out as she says the name*
hahah...evil laughs...cliffhanger...
anywayz i hope i havent dissappointed any of you with the AR part...
so for all the AR fans...yeah a small bit...trust me there is more of AR,RM,AA,AN and YN
so untill then bye bye...
meghana 😊

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