THE NEXT GENERATION...AR,RM,AN,AA DMG FF upd PG 23 - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
excelent update.i hope ritesh will expose soon in font of preti.pls update soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
awesome yaar. ... cant wait for the AN and Karan-Maggie romance..love them
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
awesome part
hope pri soon come to know about ritesh
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
it was cuteee AR scene...BT I M SO ANGRY ON PRI JUST LIKE MAGIE
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
awesome part!!!
love it..
aww cute AR moment!
just hope Pri finds abt Ritesh's truth soon!!!!

cont soon...
Thanks 4 the pm

Tc 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
sorry for the late reply yaar...was busy with exams
anyways the update was really good but sad
hope everything goes on well
update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

PRECAP:

When Naina is in the middle of revealing who Ritesh's dad was...
NAINA: haan yuvi...koi tha...
COntiNUE:
YUVI: kya!!!!!
NAINA: yuvi tumhe RAJ yaad hain...
YUVI: you mean voh raj jo humare saath tha...aur jisse main nafrat karta tha...
NAINA: haan...yuvi raj to vahi hain na jo mujhse like karta tha...
YUVI: mujhse ye check karna padega...
SIDDHESH: chachi...hum check kareenge...
ANIRUDH: lekin Sid kaise...
KARAN: sid...tum aur main...sanjeevani jaayenge aur Ritesh ka records dekhenge...
ANIRUDH: accha...main yeh pata lagata hoon ki pri aur ritesh unke date ke liye kaha gaye...
MEGHANA: arey yaar...yeh bilkul safe nahin hain...
SUHANA: accha ek kaam karte hain na...ani tu pata laga ki voh log kaha par hain...main aur maggie thoda makeover karke ritesh ko distract kareenge aur sid tu preeti to sab saaf saaf batha dena...
*everyone agrees*
*karan and siddhesh are at sanjeevani in the records room...siddhesh turns on sanjeevani database...logs on and access the information through his iphone...*
SIDDHESH: karan mil gaya...
KARAN: oh ok...so kya baat hain?
SIDDHESH: Ritesh Singh...age 24...father Raj Singh...Mother: Sambhavana Singh (dead)
KARAN: shit...yaar...naina chachu sahi thi...
*just then Sid's phone vibrates...*
SIDDHESH: hello!
ANIRUDH: hey sid...pri aur ritesh...moongaze valley mein hain...aur maggie aur suhana vahi par hain...
SIDDHESH: accha main aur karan...aa rahe hain...
*at moongaze valley...*
*maggie and suhana dress up and put so much makeup that u dont realise that it is them...and they go to the bar seperately...*
Meanwhile...
PREETI: wow...thanks Ritesh...this is sooo...beautiful...
RITESH: anything for you...
PREETI: *blushes*
RITESH: sooo...preeti...kya tum mere saath...i mean...aaj raat ko...
PREETI: What DO u MEAN?
RITESH: hey chill...i didnt mean that...i meant kya tum mere saath...aaj raat ghar chalogi...kyunkki bahut raat ho chuki hain aur ab ghar jaane mein bahut dher ho jayega...
PREETI: oh im sorry...maine socha that ki tum kuch aur expect kar rahe the...annyways i would love to come over to your house...
RITESH: great...so kya kaoogi...
*siddhesh hears the whole conversation and thinks that there is no hope now...just then meghana in her NEW avatar spots Ritesh coming to get the food and decides to set the plan in motion...*
*meghana calls karan*
KARAN: hello...
MEGHANA: hey karan...ritesh is coming to the bar...aur mera plan abhi shuru ho raha hain...main usse distract kar rahi hoon...tum sid ko bolna ki voh jaldise preeti se baat kare...
KARAN: oh alright...and maggie...
MEGHANA: haan...
KARAN: take care!!!!
MEGHANA: thanks and u too...sid ko bhi bolna...
KARAN: sid...maggie ka phone tha...voh ritesh ko distract kar rahi hain...jab tum ritesh ko maggie ke saath jaate huye dekhoge...then you go and talk to preeti...
SIDDHESH: alright...
*ritesh approaches the bar to get cokes for him and preeti...he sits at the counter...*
RITESH: two cokes with ice please...
WAITER: sir if you dont mind could you pls wait for a few minutes...the ixe is finished,...
RITESH: oh alright...
*just then meghana in her DIFFERENT look approaches ritesh*
MEGHANA: hey handsome...
RITESH: *is blown away by this girls hotness...* hey sexy...
MEGHANA: i saw you with your date...you looked like you werent enjoying yourself...
RITESH: well thatz kind of true...that girl is boring...
MEGHANA: *was stopping herself from punching ritesh...how dare he talk about her best friend like that* oh...so are you free now...
RITESH: i will if you want me to be...
MEGHANA: then why wait...get rid of her and join me...
RITESH: ok in two seconds...
RITESH: * accha...now i will tell preeti that i saw an important board member of sanjeevani and i have to meet him for a while...then i will go enjoy with that girl...after coming back preeti is finished forever...*
RITESH: umm...preeti...
PREETI: hey! where were you...itni daer kyun laga dhi...
RITESH: sorry,...main abhi Mr Talwar se mila tha aur uss ne kaha tha ki usse abhi koi deal sign karni hain...do u mind if i am away for like 45 minutes...
PREETI:*in a dissappointed voice* okay...
RITESH: im really sorry...
PREETI: its alright...i will just walk around...tell me when ur finished...give me a call...
RITESH: okay...and i am really sorry...i didnt mean our date to be like this...i promise i will make it up to you...*kisses her cheek*
PREETI: okay...*blushes* now go!!!!!
*siddhesh sees Ritesh leave with Meghana and signals suhana to keep Ritesh away until he talks to preeti...*
SIDDHESH: Preeti...
PREETI: *angry* tum...yahan kaise...
SIDDHESH: pri...main jaanta hoon ki tum mujhse abhi bhi naraz ho lekin...mujhse tumse baat karni hain...pls suno
PREETI: accha ritesh ka koi meeting tha...aur main tumse fight karke apna mood spoil nahin karna chahti...so bolo...tumhare paas 5 minutes hain...
SIDDHESH: *calls Yuvi and Naina and lets them tell the whole story...*
After a while after Preeti hears the story...
PREETI: Oh My God...i dont believe this...*then she realises how bitchy she was towards Sid, she is ready to say sorry to sid but he is NOT there*
Ritesh comes back...
RITESH: hey pri...
PREETI: *screams* DONT YOU DARE CALL ME THAT!!!!!!!!!HOW DARE YOU>>>>>>*slaps him and leaves...*
RITESH: *is too shocked to move*
Preeti finds the gang...
PREETI: sorry guys...
GANG: its alright...
*they are in the car...everyone goes home one by one and Suhana was getting dropped by anirudh who had dropped meghana and Suhana at moongaze before...*
*in the car...it was just preeti and siddhesh...both of them were not talking to each other...for an outsider this would have been normal...but to Preeti it wasnt...she realised what a BIG mistake she made...the situation between
her and Sid was so bad that they couldnt even talk anymore...*
Meanwhile...
SIDDHESH: tumhara ghar...
PREETI: sid im sorry...i shouldnt have slapped you...

*siddhesh was heartbroken to know that...the reason preeti thought he was upset was because she slapped him...siddhesh thought that he had to tell her...it was NOW OR NEVER>>>>>>>*
PREETI: sid pls...kuch bolo na...im really sorry...
SIDDHESH: pri pls...sorry mat bolna...i am not upset because you slapped me...what makes me more sad is the fact that you believed him when he said he had to go and see Mr Talwar...but you didnot believe ME when i said Ritesh wasnt right for you...
PREETI: he didnot see Mr Talwar...
SIDDHESH: preeti...there is no Mr Talwar on the board of Sanjeevani...
PREETI: *shocked* how did i do this?
SIDDHESH: I dont know how you did this...but the only thing i know is that you believed him over ME...tumne soch bhi kaise liya khi main tumse jhoot boolunga...im your best friend yaar...
PREETI: *is in tears* Im sooo SORRY!!!!!!!
That night in bed...Preeti or Siddhesh couldnot sleep...preeti wasthinking how could she have been so mean to Siddhesh...he was her best friend and she didnot believe him...she was ashamed of herself...Siddhesh was thinking...maybe i shouldnot have said all those things to her...
Finally they fell asleep...the gang was peacefully asleep...thinking NO MORE PROBLEMS>>>>>
HOW WRONG THEY WERE...
NEXT TIME::::::::
Preeti tries to talk to Sid...Sid is not interested...
Karan has a girlfriend...who is NOT meghana...
- what will meghana do?
- Ani and su tell everyone about their relationship...
Meghana and Preeti are trying to get back their men...
UNTILL THEN:::::

ENJOY!!!!!!!!
pls LIKE and REVIEW!!!!!!!!
Posted: 14 years ago
#88
superb update.finally ritesh unmasked.precap sounds very interesting.pleas update next part soon.thanks for pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
nice part
loved it
finally the truth is out
can't wait 4 the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
Very nice part buddy.
Finaly their chap is closed.
Waiting 4 nxt part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
Update soon.
T.c.

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