SS-Maan Geet ka Anokha Pyar -Part 13(last):Page 62 - Page 33

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Posted: 14 years ago
part 10!!
i was soo not gonna read this...coz since me have written something similar..i didnt wanna get influenced by ur writing!
lekin resist nahi hua!
hot hot super hot..without being over the top!!
loved the water scene..maan cleaning up geet...why didnt geet return the favour😉😉😉
hmmm blankets me dressed and all...😆😆😆😆
why u didnt show nain matakka via the saree???😕😕 wud have added to the drama!!😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
dii..i finally read ur update...
its so nice...
how sweet of maan tying saree to geet.. that part was luvly
and dii...bechare dev n nandini.. phython boar and bees unke peechey padh gaaye...
gud update dii..
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Posted: 14 years ago
girls ... plz forgive ... me for not updating since a long time ... i was really busy ...
with some personal works ... as well as signing the petition to save GHSP ...
i will most probably will give u all an update very soon ... may be by the next sunday ... hopefully if i get time ...
sorry once again 2 keep u all waiting ... thanks for ur patience ...
& thanks for all the lovely & wonderful comments u all posted ... love u all ...😊



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Posted: 14 years ago
at last i get to read your Ss, its lovely, hai its nice,

its ok about not posting, we understand, take your time
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Posted: 14 years ago
pls update soon . u said i will give update on sunday . two sundays had passed after that . no update yet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di update whenever u can we will wait...first of all take proper rest i know u must be tired travelling na...then if u get time update...no hurry ok...
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks hima.. please update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Girls ... thanks for all your lovely comments & thanks for waiting patiently friends ...

sorry for the delay in the update ...
i have a dead line at my work place ... once i am done with my course work ... i will update the FF's sorry friends ... for the delay ...
thanks for ur co-operation ...
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Posted: 14 years ago

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Girls … thanks for your lovely comments loved reading them all … sorry for the delay in the update … I was really cought up in my work has not yet completed my work … & got the dead line extended … wrote most of the update for this SS 2 weeks ago … but as I was really tired could not even finish what I wrote & did not have time to do the proof check …. thanks for your patience … I appreciate it … will be updating in a short while …

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Girls … thanks for your lovely comments loved reading them all … sorry for the delay in the update … thanks for your patience … I appreciate it … Hope you all like this update … & I hope I could reach to your expectations …

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Part 12:-

Masi tejji & everyone at home were worried … as they got the info that geet & company has not reached the engagement ceremony … they decide to contact the cops … tejji picks up the phone & was about to call them …. Maan … geet … nandini …. Dev … all return home & enter the hall …

Beeji is happy to see them back … geet & nandini come & hug beeji who has extended her hands towards them … beeji nandini & geet have a group hug …

Nandini then narrates the whole incident … how they all got lost & how they found each other … beeji asks them to get freshned up … every one leaves to refresh them selves …

It's late in the night … maan sneaks into geet's room through the balcony … geet was getting ready to go to bed … maan entering her room through the balcony … geet spots maan's image in her mirror … maan comes & stands next to geet … geet smiles at maan … maan & geet both hug each other …. While the hug continues …

Maan – geet you still remember my wish … isn't it …

Geet – wish … what wish maan …

Maan – you forgot my wish to become a dad …

Geet – maan …

geet hugs him again out of shyness & buries her face in his chest ...

maan lifts her face to kiss her ... she releases herself from maan & runs away from there ... maan too goes behind her ... geet runs inside the bath to lock her self in the bath ... she is successful in locking her self inside the bath …

maan - geet bahar niklo ...

geet - maan ... no ... i will not ... I know you have naughty thoughts in your mind … I am not going to come out …

maan - if u are not going 2 come out of the bath ... i will break the wash room door ... & I will come inside … I bet it would be even more romantic inside …

geet – hey babaji … yeh maan bhi naa … poore ke poore romeo maan singh khurana ban gaye hain …

geet with an evil smile - oh really ... u want 2 break the door ... let me see how u will break the door ... be my guest …

maan - oh ... sure why not ... i will show u my talent ... just wait & watch…

geet smirking - let see ... who will show whose talent ...

maan is faking anger & takes his shirt off & throws it away … it flies & falls on the couch …

maan - geet I am coming … wait …

geet had a plan in her mind … she wanted 2 throw a bucket full of water on maan as soon as he breaks open the door ... she keeps a bucket under the faucet & opens it ... but forgets to check whether the tap was open or the shower was open ... as soon as she opens the tap ... water comes out of the shower ... & as a result geet gets wet ...

geet – "yeh lo … hogaya nehle pe dehla …".

An angry geet cursing the shower ….

Geet - ullo ke patte ... gadhae ke aulaad ... kuthe ki dhum ... kaminey...

maan - geet ... whom are you cursing ... are you cursing me ...

geet - oh no maan ... not you … why on earth would I curse you ... i was shouting at this stupid shower ... Because of which ... i got wet ...

maan to himself giving an evil smile … "geet all wet ... great ... I love her that way … my work is more easy … thank you babaji … "

geet - maan did u say some thing ...

maan - no geet ... i did not say anything ...

maan to himself – "ab aya na uunth pahad ke neeche ..."

geet - i can hear you maan ... you said some thing ...

maan - no geet ... meri ithni majaal ... ki i comment on you ... mujhe marna thodi hain ... wo bhi … mere boss ke haathon se …

geet – good ... maan Plz can u give me my dress from the cupboard ... i need to change ...

maan – ok ...

geet undresses her self & is waiting for maan to bring her clothes ... maan has a wicked thought while he was pulling out geet's clothes ... instead of giving geet her clothes ... he plans to give geet his kurtha … so he picks up his kurtha from the ward robe(as some of his clothes were in geet's ward robe)... maan goes near the wash room door ... knocks on the door ...

maan - geet ... open the door ... here take this ...

geet opens the door holds her hand out ... maan places his kurtha in her hand … geet holds it was about to take her hand in ... maan then pulls her hand a bit towards him ... while he has a evil grin on his face ... geet who knew maan will definitely do some thing on these lines was quick for him … she holds the door for her support & does not come out ... she then frees off herself from maan's hand ... & locks herself quickly ... maan is smiling thinking that geet closed the door & did not even check what he gave her ... geet is shocked to see his kurtha in her hands ...

geet - yeh tho maan ki kurtha hain ... babaji ... inhone yeh kya de diya mujhe ...

geet – maan … this is not mine … itz yours … can you please give me my clothes …

maan lying down on the bed …. With his hands folded under his head.

maan – geet I am tired … sorry sweet heart … khud hi le lo … I am off to bed

geet - some times … he is so sweet like jilebi … some times … so khadoos … dhust dhanav kahin kaa …

geet wears the kurtha ... is thinking on what to do … she peeps out of the room … watches that maan is lying down on the bed …. With his back facing the bath room door… geet thinking whether to walk out of the bath or not …

maan - come out geet ... how much time will you take in the bath ... I am waiting for you …

geet imitating maan – waiting for you geet …

geet is feeling shy to come out of the bath … geet closes the door & is thinking to herself …

Geet to herself - this is not the first time ... maan will be seeing you like this ... he saw you in his clothes plenty of times & yesterday night … (geet was thinking about their SR & then how maan tied the saree to her)

Maan is now facing the bath room door & is standing in front of it … counting the time thinking that geet might have worn his kurtha by now … geet opens the door ... slowly ... maan is eagerly waiting for her to come out ... both geet & maan have an eyelock ... geet is feeling that the kurtha is short … while it is actually covering her legs till her knees … the kurtha was actually too big for her … and as it was big it was sliding off her shoulders … she was adjusting the kurtha to lay properly on her but it was of no use … while she was making one end of the kurtha not to slide … the other end of the kurtha was sliding off her shoulder … it making her bare shoulders visible …

geet & maan both were walking towards each other ... both lost in each other's eyes ... maan & geet are closing the space between each other ... maan is in front of geet …. maan places his hands on her waist & pulls her towards himself … geet coils her arms around his neck ….

geets hair strands which were on her face were troubling maan as when ever he sees her hair falling on her face he has the urge to touch them feel them tuck them back ... maan with his left hand ... tucks her hair strands behind her ear ... & starts caressing her hair ... then slowly his hands start tracing her curves which were quite visible ... his hands then travel through her back then to her waist ... while he was still caressing her back ... geet was feeling shy & was moving away from him ... towards the bed …

maan holds her hand & twirls her towards himself ... geet twirls & she hits maan's chest with her back ... maan hugs her from back ... both criss cross their hands … & both of their hands lie on geet's belly … maan then moves her hair to the front & kisses her shoulder & her neck ... geet again releases herself from him but she could not go away from maan & she meets dead end in the form of the bed ... maan is now in front of her with a naughty smile ... geet understood that now she can't escape maan ... she saw the desire in his eyes & understood about his wish & also noticed how his eyes have narrowed ... maan stands in front of her very close to her ... there was no space between them ... they both can feel each other's breath … geet has her hands on his muscles ... maan hands now travel around her waist ... caressing her waist ... travel a bit upwards …. Geet closing her eyes as soon as she feels maan's hands travelling & feeling all her curves … his touch was making her go weak in her knees & was willing to give into the desire to be with maan … she knew it was not the first time for them to feel each other ...

maan's hands ... slowly travel towards her back he was caressing her back & was having an eye lock ... maan was closing the space between their lips ... both were getting ready for a lip lock ... maan was closing in the space between their lips & them selves ... But before he could kiss her … geet falls on the bed on her back ... the kurtha had slided little bit on either side of the shoulders … maan comes & lies down beside her ... he then inter twines his hands in her hands … & then bends over her … geet closes her eyes … while her lips were parted for maan's lips to feel the taste of her lips … maan starts kissing her forehead … next her eyes … nose … cheeks …. Chin … He then kisses her on her lips … maan & geet both … kiss each other passionately … then starts series of kisses kissing her passionately below her chin & then proceeds to her throat … next to her shouldrs … then proceeds to her heart … they both have a love filled night …

Next day morning ….

Maan is lying down next to geet … geet lying on maan's chest …

Tejji – balwant …. Oye … balwant … kitthe hain tu …

maan & geet both wake up to the shouts of tejji … Geet & Maan both wake up with a jerk … both looking into each other's eyes …. Making their eyes big … all their sleep was gone …

Maan – Oh My God … Geet I had to take tejji to the neighbouring village … he had work over there …

Geet – is it … then … I think you need to run ….

Maan was wearing his pagdi … rushing towards the balcony … Geet is also behind maan …. Maan opens the balcony door … They both are in the balcony …

Maan – ok … bye geet …. I will meet you later …

Geet – come soon maan …

Maan kissing geet on her forehead … they both hug each other …

These two have not realised that … some one was watching them come out of the room …. It's none other than lachhi … Lachhi was cleaning the floor …. While cleaning the floor lachhi spots maan & geet as she heard voices … Lachhi cannot believe her eyes that maan (i.e. ballu in her eyes) was actually kissing geet … geet was not minding ballu kiss her … & they both were hugging each other …

Lacchi – hey babaji …. What am I watching … geet di di … is hugging ballu the driver … what was he doing in geet di di 's room … was he there all night … OMG … what will happen when every one will find out this truth … maan ji ja ji … geet di di … geet di di ka chakkar balwant ke saath … yeh sach hai ki sapna …

Lachhi pinches her self hard … Maan gets down the balcony & spots that lachhi is near the tree understood that lacchhi saw him with geet as he could make it out from her shocked face … his brain quickly reacts to the situation … decides to use lachhi … to end this drama of balwant driver …

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Maan finishes his work with tejji … comes back … then meets geet in the night as usual … tells her that lachhi spotted them in the morning & decides to use lachhi in addition to mama as the characters to end their drama … maan discusses his plan with geet…

After their SR in jungle … maan & Geet started spending their nights together every day … maan was not sleeping in the outhouse … & whenever lacchi was in front of them they were ignoring her & started romancing in front of her … lachhi was watching them with her mouth with a confused & shocked expression on her face & was scared to share what ever she saw with either masi or pammi or nandini …

Its been over a month …

One fine day … finally along with lachhi Mama ji also spots ballu(maan) & geet romancing … shirtless maan was washing his face … geet pouring water in his hands helping maan to wash his face … maan signals to geet that mamaji is watching them … maan then washes his face … then after washing his face geet gives him a towel … instead of taking the towel maan gets hold of geet's duppatta … he starts cleaning his face with her duppatta … after he finishes wiping his face … he drops the duppatta … both were having an eye lock … lachhi & mama still watching them … lachhi does not see mama & mama does not spot lachhi … geet then takes the duppatta off maan's hands & wiping his neck & his chest … mama's & lachhi's jaw drops …. Maan takes geet's hands & keeps it on his chest … geet then tries to go away from there … he holds her wrist & twirls her around … she comes & hits maan on his chest with her head … both hug each other … geet kisses maan on his heart … there by making lachhi faint …

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Girls let me know how you liked this update … hope you liked it … comments & criticism are welcome …

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