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Posted: 14 years ago
😛😆dev ke saath toh tik hi hua magar jo galti dev ne i thi uski saza toh use pehle hi mil chuki hain geet ka tapad on maan n geet 's engagement then aso i love to see dev ki dulai it will be awesome episodes of confusions n fun n chup chup ke romance but guys i'm worried when actually every one got to knw the truth of maan i mean balwanth singh is maan then wat happens how masi n tejji veerji wil react 😆😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 5:-

Geet & maan on their way back to masiji ki house ….

Geet – maan did you eat any thing or not …

Maan – I know that you did not eat anything since morning …

Geet – what … how do you know that I did not eat anything since morning ….

Maan – well that's because I was watching you since morning …

Geet – you were watching me since morning ….

Maan – yes …

Geet – from where …

Maan – from tree top … in front of your room …

Geet – what … you were sitting on top of a tree ….

Geet bursts into laughter as soon as she hears what maan says & is imagining maan sitting on top of tree ….😆

Maan – geet … stop laughing ….

Geet – sorry …. Sorry … you were on top of tree … to watch me …

Maan – yes ...

Geet - maan since how long were you watching me …

Maan – since morning ….

Geet – since morning … on top of tree ….

Maan – yes …

Geet now has tears in eyes – means … just to know my reaction & see me you were on top of tree … & you too did not have anything since morning … I was right in thinking so …

Maan – yes … I did not not eat anything … but it does not matter …

Geet – then lets stop at a dhaba & eat first …

Maan – I am fine geet … I am not feeling hungry ….

Geet – yes … of course how will you be hungry … because I am sitting beside you & now that we both apologized to each other … you may not feeling hungry … isn' it … your stomach must be full of happiness.

Maan – yes geet … you are right …

Geet – I know I am right … now stop the car at some dhaba ….

Maan & geet are driving back …. They finally spot a dhaba & stop there to have their dinner … & also decide to tell the truth to geet's masi … geet orders the food & then they both sit on the cots & start having their dinner … geet does not allow maan to touch his food … she starts feeding him with his hands ….

Maan – it's been so many days that I had eaten food from oyur hands … looks like it's been ages …

Geet – don't worry maan … from today onwards I will feed you with my hands …

Now maan also takes a piece of roti & dips it in palak paneer & keeps it in geet's mouth …

They both have their dinner & are driving back to masi ka house …

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Tejji in his den … Is now standing in front of dev …. Nandini spots dev … is happy to see him in that position …. Thinking that he got what he deserved …

Tejji – yes mister … now you can speak …

Dev – who are you ? why am I here ? what did I do …

Tejji – oh so you don't know … mahashay …

Dev – no I don't know … I think you abducted the wrong person ….

Tejji – we picked up the right person … Mr. Maan Singh khurana …

Dev – Maan singh khurana ….

Tejji – yes Mr.maan singh khurana … you thought you can torture my sister & you can live a peaceful life …..

Dev – what are you talking … I am not Maan singh khurana ….😕😲😕

Tejji – oh so now you have memory loss 🤣… now you are claiming that you are not Maan singh khurana…🤣🤣🤣

Dev – I am not maan singh khurana … you are mistaken … maan singh khurana is some one else … 😕😲

Tejji shouting at his men - oye … ulloo ke patton 😡… you have beaten him so much that now he does not remember his name🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 … how many times should I tell you all that to be a bit gentle 😳😳😳when you beat any one to pulp🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 … ab wapas dhulai start karo 🤣🤣… till he accepts that he is maan sigh khurana. 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

(Now what will dev do … he thought they will leave him after he tells that he is not maan …. Par idhar tho ulta ho gaya … 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 …)

Tejji's men again start bashing dev 🤣… devil tho gaya kaam se …. Devil cursing his fate that the moment he stepped in to amritsar his bad luck has started 🤣🤣🤣…. Now devil thinking what to do … to accept that he is MSK … or to keep up to the word that he is not MSK ….

Dev – stop stop … I am maan singh khurana … 😡😉

Tejji's men stop after dev tells him that he is MSK & run to inform tejji that he is MSK ….🤣🤣🤣🤣

Tejji comes & informs them that to stop beating dev & that he will take dev home & then orders them to lift dev & make him sit in his car … dev is in the car with tejji … nandini waits till tejji leaves …. After tejji leaves … she too starts home …

Maan … Geet … Tejji … Dev… Nandini … on their way to masiji ka home …

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Depending on the comments … I will decide whether to continue or end this OS / SS … Let me know if you want me to end it or continue … if I continue it will be more like prediction on the current track …

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Edited by dewdropred - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
omg me the frst one
loved it di
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Posted: 14 years ago
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will comment after reading.😃


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wow...i loved it..
poor dev...infact he deserves lot more than thrashing...😆
at least u don't leave this chance like the cv's hima di...
i suggest beat him to death...😡
then we can all attend his funeral WITH PLEASURE...😆
loved maan and geet's convo
maan sitting on top of a tree...🤣
sach mein yeh pyaar logo ko bandar bhi bana sakta hai...😆😆
AWESOME DI...DO CONT FAST...😃
Edited by mansi95 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u jo serial mein woh log na kar paye tumne ss mein kar diay i so much wanted dev ki pitai ho...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Hima ..nice update dear...👍🏼
Dev ki dhulayi was a nice treat & Maaneet at dhaba was awesome..😉Plzz continue & as per new article do predict something about Geet's 'karwa chauth' celebrations too..😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
@asmi
@mansi
@preethia
@bobby
thanks girls ... i love 2 do dev ki dhulai & if i continue ... uski dhulai tho pakki hain ... it will happen for sure ... Dev will regret it for the rest of his life why did he ever say that he is MSK ... I will see to it that he gets royal treatment & I will show u all the actual reason Y maaneet wanted dev to pretend as MSK 😆😈maaneet dev se kam nahin 😆
@bobby - sure ...
I will predict ... karwa chauth ka scene ... def ... i will start my work on it 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely part
Awww loved maaneet moments
Haha dev had 2 admit that he is MSK so the beating wud stop 🤣🤣
cont soon X...
Thx 4 the PM
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it
thnx 4 d pm ...
contnue soon ...😊

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