MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92

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Priya Iyer

@priya_1234

Explorer

Posted: 14 years ago

#341

mehak i loved all the parts today n it was beautiful.. Simply loved it..

Superb.. 👏

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daniella

@daniella05

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#342

amazing n awesome update

thanks 4 the pm

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#343

Part 9:

wow so cute

hehe Sam called at 3 to reject

I knew it

cont soon

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#344

Part 10:

wow

mayank is planning to confess

sweet part

cont soon

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#345

part 9
wow...
finally sam rejectd her, mayu realised his luv 4 her!
MN gonna go out 2gther...
omg.. cant wait 4 d next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!

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Mitali

@...Mitali...

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#346

OMG wow! kinza! it was awesome

each n every update is getting more interesting

hope they confess soon

thnx for the pm

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AWonderfulChaos

@AWonderfulChaos

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#347

res!!!

😍...awesome ya!!🤗 👏😳

love u!

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zarfishanzahid

@zarfishanzahid

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#348

wowww both parts are awesom i hope mayank confess this tym

thx alot for the pm

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Jaee Dev Rathore

@JaeeDevRathore

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#349

edited my comment on page 43 :)

And as far as this update goes, it was the reality of the story - revealing the reality that is stopping the love from blossoming - a very well-written update Di and I especially liked the way you brought out her feelings and the last line of the update was a perfect cliff-hanger ... Amazing this story is and the song you incorporated was just perfect - one of my favourite songs😳

I am loving this story so much ...

God bless you,

Jaee D. Rathore