MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago
res for ch 10!😊 - will unres on Tues! Edit:

Chapter 10

-U've done a great job with describing their gestures, expressing their feelings at this first meeting!👏

-"all vanished seeing that deepness in her eyes, It pricked his heart." – he could read her eyes…

-It seems like though she loves him, she fears talking to him/going out with him...because she feels she is not doing the right thing. To some extent, I understand her and her principle. If u had to hide anything from ur parents then it's wrong…

-"I just can't stop thinking about her"- Aww…he is so cute! 😃

-Mayank is too smart! Always coming up with clever ideas to meet her…lol.

-"her lips curved a bit and mayank thought that living without her now next to impossible." – Awww…😍

-"her feet stopped and so did her heart...he called out her name.. for the first time." – wow, they are alone and he just called her for the first time….looking fwd to the next part! 😍

Edited by Ishita16 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hayeee Kinzuuu

Oye Hoye - it was too good and interesting update...


hmmm i can understand nups awkwardness- poor Nups-She was shocked 2 see mayank. she didnt expect him ... and mayu - he was trying ti figure out NUps

wah wah kya demag paya Mayu ne-----waise gunjan tum hi hamesha apni di ko milne jati ho, wo tu kabhi yahan ayi nahi hai",----very Smart yaar...lol

hey kinzu why u stopped at crucial point...??????:(

ok no prob- ek din aur hesahi- wait kar lungi
i m really excited abt ur next part

take care

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Posted: 14 years ago
Pehlay toh the ghalzal... WWWOOOWWW!! It couldnt have been better! I went into a dreamworld with it...

Ik lamhe main simat aya hai sadiyon ka safr

Zindagi tez, bhota tez chali ho jaise 😍

This was A-MAZING! Like HONESTLYYY!!! I read it twice!
and this was ULTIMATE!
"I just can't stop thinking about her"

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hon mian

Meri her saans terey naam likhi ho jaise 😍

Yaar kya smart 'Mayank' hai... I mean, planning toh aala hai! 😳

even my heart stopped with Nupur's... Kinzuuu there is NO word to describe your talent! 👏 👏 👏

P.S. Nupur is just like you... What are you hiding from em, huh? 😳 😉 🤗

Edited by -Bushra- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
O My God
I am getting So So So much excited
He gonna confess his feeling
Oh Plz plz nupur except him Plz
Really a very Lovely update
ma kya karo gunjan Ki cuteness to mujha pagal kar da gi
Thanks for Pm
cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
gosh stop leaving us at all these interesting cliff-hangers kinza!...wow this story just keeps getting better and better...im so happy mayank is turning out to be a go-getter...i loved how differently you portrayed nupur's emotions...i never thought of it that way...and im sure that when mayank actually gets to know the person she is, he's gonna fall even harder for her...i cant wait til the time when nupur realizes that all of this is NOT wrong...only when she frees herself from these self-imposed burdens and restrictions can she can realize that loving someone and being loved by someone is right...i loved this particular part:

"Di chalo balcony bhi dekh lo, tumhara kamra saaf nazr ata hai"

I'm just trying to imagine her reaction hahahah

naina
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Posted: 14 years ago
age kya hoga!!!!!!!

i wont b able to read tom n day after tom...

uff how i'll w8 till wednesday...

have to say m realy loving dis gunur bond...
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part..!!!
really awesome..!!
can't wait to read next part..
cont soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohh my...mayank is finding ways to c her to talk to her...how sweet...

n BY GOD m simply loving gunjan in dis ff😆😆😆😆😆😆

loved dis update...wow mayank stopped nupur😲 whts gonna happen next 😍

tczzz
loads of love😊

Edited by cutiepie12 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Angelll...why do you always stop it at such a crucial point yaar?????

Anyways the update was awesome blossom...he said her name for the first time and i was so involved in the story that even my heartbeart increased😆😆

And Mayank...he just cant stay away...😳😳Sighhh...what will happen next???/😳😳

P.S: Loved the song...its from Tum Bin😳😳
Edited by AmyArTiMayUr - 14 years ago

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