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Mitali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#251

res

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yipppeee me first

mndblowing update

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jiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#252

reserved

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i loved the way you blended the thoughts of the four ppl

👏

finally mayank has realized his feelings for nupur

i hope things happen for the better now

continue soon kinzu

thnkx for the pm

~jiya~

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Aysha Saxena

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Posted: 14 years ago

#253

Haayeee...Mehak...such a wonderful update😳...You are truly the queen of words👏...I loved the prosess of thoughts going on in the minds of the four...and Mayank finally confessing to himself that he loves her😍

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.SA.

@.SA.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#254

lovely update Kinza.
beautifully worded.
we all felt the turmoil in their hearts through your words.
Mayank accepted what he really felt for Nupur.
he is on first step to finding the solution for the whole situation.
i want him to succeed in untangling the whole situation.
& win over every one.
thanks for the pm.

Edited by shubhie - 14 years ago

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

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Posted: 14 years ago

#255

Res for Ch 8

Edit:

Chapter 8 Sleepless Nights

-I totally love how Mayank keeps looking at her lights at night…it's just a simple gesture but it shows how much he cares for her.

-Totally loved how u kept going back and forth between the four of them!

-"The feelings which were blossoming in his heart wanted freedom, but his mind was caging them and subsequently he was feeling suffocated." – One can't keep their feelings in themselves for too long without feeling suffocated.

-"Both of them saw each other, through the veil of falling raindrops" – How romantic!

I totally loved the rain sequence, it reminded me of Khuda Jaane!

-"alright mayank..u love this girl.." – Finally Mayank has admitted to himself that he loves her!! Yay! Looking forward to more!

-Great job! 👏

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Supriya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#256

aww... kinza
dat ws an beautiful update!👏
luvd d way u showd all of deir's emotions racing in deir minds...😳
OMG ... MN drench in rain... KJ!!!😍
luvd it 2 d bits!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗

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ginny munjal

@ginny09

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Posted: 14 years ago

#257

yes dey r totally in love wid each oder

n meant to be mayur :)

wowww !

the part was super :)

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umaima

@cutiepie12

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Posted: 14 years ago

#258

alright mayank..u love this girl.. 😆 i jus simply adore dis line

n i love da way u mix da feelings of all four of dem...da contrast ws beyong perfect...hats off to u for such a masterpiece

loved dis update alot...finally mayur confessed to demselves da feelings dey had for each other

tczzz

loads of love😊

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#259

you know i also read this without even blinking my eyes...

it was just amazing

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vasantha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#260

sigh sigghhh!! 😍 😍

A-W-E-S-O-M-E!

Loved each bit of it.. 😳 ❤️ finally they took a step ahead of letting their emotions come out!

ps.. hw cum u make me wrong with every part of urs! i told 6th part was my fav.. bt u make me go aww! with every part! 😳 😳

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