MayUr FF - The Blossoming Magic || Part 18 - Pg 92

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_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

i finished off reading all previous 8 parts in one go,and must say its gonna b another milestone in writing career,and wil add another feather to ur success 4 sure...amazing concept with an all in all different presentation...the best thing about ur writing is that ur each n every story brings in a different charm all together,which has never been tasted b4...great job yaar!!n plzzz continue soon...bcos as always...the updates r getting more n more interesting,and i just cant wait to read the very next part after mayank's realization..😳so make it fast dear...

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Sanzy|Sanz

@felicitysmoak.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

Awesome update

loved it loadzz

cant wait 4 da next part

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

Muahhh

Xxx

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

wow!!!!!!!!!!wat a update kinza

wonderful

amazing

the process of thoughts going in the minds of 4 were mindblowing...finally mayank confessed to himself dat he love her

looking forward

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Wings-of-Fire

@Wings-of-Fire

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

yo boy... he understood his love!!!party time!

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#275

nice update kinza.

finally mayank understood his love.

shayad ab wo kuch kare.

update soon.

thanks for the pm.

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#276

na hai ye panaaa...

na khonaaa hi hai.

tera na hona

jane kyuuu

honnaaa hi hai.

tumse hi din hota...

yumse hi rat aati hai...

tum se hi tum se hi...

har khushi saaath aati hai.

zindagi kehlati hai.

tum se hi tumse hi..."

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Shafy_Kaira_MN

@Shafy_Kaira_MN

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya..

palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya

dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya..

palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya

jab.. bole..vo.. jab bole...

uski aankh mein .. rab bole...

jab.. bole..vo.. jab bole...

uski aankh mein .. rab bole...

aas.. pass hi rehna tum..

ankh ankh. mein kehna .. tum...

dekha tumhe. to aaram aaya...

dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya..

palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya

roz hi dil.. ki aag uthakr.. haath mein.. le k chalna hai...

tere bina tere..bond bond.. aab..

raat raat bhar.. jalna hai...

tu mile.. na mile...

ye hassen.. silsile.waqt k ...

sakth.. hai.. ab ye mitte nahi...

tere bina ssans bhi chalti hu...

tere bina dil bhi dhadakta.. hai...

yaad nahi tha yaad aaya...

dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya

din ki tarh tum sir pe.. aana..

shaam k jaise dhalna tum..

khawab bucha rakhe hai..raah mein.. soch samajh kr chalna tum...

neend ki cchaaon mein...

tum dabe .. paun se..yu.. gaye..

vo nishaan ab to mitte nahi...

tere liye chand bhi rukta hai,...

tere liye ooss.. thereti hai...

yaad nahi.. tha yaad.. aaya...

dabi dabi saansoon.. se suna tha mene. bole bina mera.. naam.. aya.. palke jhuki.. aur .. uthne.. lagi.. to... hule.. se uska..salaam..aaya...

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Mou.

@Mou.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

exceptionally beautiful the way u wrote their meeting at terrace kinza...so dreamy😍 rain & mayank -nupur are always connected.& i love the way u put it here again!
now its time to c some confession from mayank as he finally realized what he feel for her...can't wait more! update soon kinza!

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459718

Suspended

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

alright mayank..u love this girl.." ..awww mayank realized his feelings...and finally they spoke to each other...lol..if you count saying each others names|😆 but i loved how you blended their thoughts it was beautifulll😳 thank you for the pm.