MG SS:Pyaar Kareoge Mujhse! ***Will Update Soon*** - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
nice title,
awesome start. loved it.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it..do continue son...plzzz add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome!
loved it!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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interesting storyline... pls add me to yr pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
y so short...
thoda toh aage baadaathee...geet hai yeh ladki...
conti soon.. and its nice... me liked ur story.. gud job deeps...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2:

Girl: What did you just say...
Maan: can u be my girl friend
Girl looks at him awed...What! Are you mad? App kaun ho...
Maan: Main Maan Singh Khurana hoon
Girl:to main kya karu...
Maan: maine kaha na.. aap mere mangetar banoge...

Girl: please go out. i dont know you! and I dont want to become your girl friend who are you. why cant you find your own girlfriend!.. Please go away.
Girl turns away from him and takes the children in a line towards the class...without looking at Maan...

Maa calls out: Hey!!! think about it and let me know... i will come tom he smirks..
She turns and give him a angry glare...

Maan smiles and goes away and as he reaches his car.. he smiles... think why did he say something like that to a girl.. a beautiful girl with such beautiful eyes...
he smiles and calls himself.. Maan sambalao apne aapko...suddenly he remembers Mamaji's talk regarding the marriage and gets angry. He loves his mamaji a lot and doesnt want to hurt him by saying that he will not marry but he said... now he wants to do something to make mamaji not keep on rant about this topic again and again!!!!

He thinks... if this girl ( whatever her name is ) becomes my girl friend for sometime... this can make mamaji quiet for sometime. She is a compassionate girl.. i am sure.. but whats her name and who is she in this school??? I have to find out and convince her. Only she can convince mamaji that i am thinking about my future... !!!!! He smirks... i will come tom again!

He goes back to the office. Suddenly Mamaji comes in front of him and asks... paise de diye?.. Maan: kya kaunse paise...
Mamaji: What Maan!... tumhe jo maine 5 lakhs ka charity cheque diye the... de diye...
Maan: oh that!! i coulndt meet the principal so i couldnt give the money.. I will go tom!..
Mamaji ( surprised): you are going tom... how did u find the place maan? do you thin k some changes are required...
Maan( suddenly thinking about that girl): yes i need to meet her again!!!
Mamaji: her again? kaun her...
Maan: sorry woh principal hai na... I have some work.. see you later... aur maan wahan se chale jaathe hai...
Mamaji laughs... kya hua is ladke ko?

Later that day... Maan was working but the whole time the face of teh girl comes to his mind!.. he keeps thinking about her...
He couldnt work anymore and gets angry and closes his work and start to leave for the day.
Mamaji comes out and sees him leaving at 5 pm... Mamamji: Maan where are u going? Maan: home?
Mamaji: what?
Maan: suddenly looks at him and says...i am not feeling well and need to go home and rest!.
mamaji: aise hi hotha hai.. jab tum sote nahi ho, khana time pe khate nahi ho... tho savithri hote tho khoob daant milthi tum ko...
Maan suddenly thinks about his mom like maami.. who died 2 years ago... and smiles... and says... lagtha hai mami ishara kar rahe hai.. mujhko sirdard dekar.. and smiles... Mamaji: wohi honge...

Maan gets into his car and starts the radio and the song plays on a channel!:
Do Dill Mile Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke
Sabko Ho Rahi Hai
Haan Sabko Ho Rahi Hai
Khabar Chupke Chupke
Do Dil Mile Rahe Hain
Magar Chupke Chupke...

Suddenly he sees Girl on her scooty.. going along the opposite way... Maan sees and follows her...
He sees her going to a group of boys and scolds the gang... and dragging a kid from between and asks him to sit behind her scooty and drives off with a angry face!!!
Maan puzzled who is this kid...
drives behind Girl goes to a chawl..Maan stops his car and gets out sees Girl dragging the kid towards a house...
Maan goes behind and hears her shouting at the kid:
Girl: what the hell were u going gautam? u are just 16 years old.. have u ever thought what will i feel. the kinds face is down.
He sees two more small girls around the age staying staring at this girl shouting at the kid...
The kid has his face down.
Girl: speak to me.. Gautam... come one why were u drinking why werent u in class...have u got any idea how do i feel when u do that? I want you to study and get a good job so that you can hgelp me run this family and u are doing all this...
Why are u skipping classes... suddenly her eyes were all teary... the kid seeing this... Geet didi... please dont cry... i cant see u crying...
Maan: ( Geet... beautiful name...)
Geet: Gautam... please dont talk to me...
the other kids started crying too Geet did please dont cry...

Geet leaves for her room and closes her door...
Maan looks at other kids...
The kid is crying too... and he keeps saying why doenst we have enough money!!. i want to make money.. I dont want to study...
Maan sees them and keeps looking at them

Suddenly geet comes outside and takes her bag suddenly realising he has forgotten her key... she opens the door and sees Maan standing there...

Geet: you... why are u following me!
Maan: I can help you Geet!!!!
Geet looks at him stares at him!!!!!!!!...

Precap: Maan meets with an accident

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Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
OMG... deeps..u wrote it so well yar...
hye rabba.. who are those kids.. is she runnin a orphanage...
too gud deeps,,, me liking the track.. conti soon,,, samjhi..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
brilliant update do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey i jus came across ur fanfic... Great update... Continue soon... Do add me to ur pm list if u have

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