MG SS:Pyaar Kareoge Mujhse! ***Will Update Soon***

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Hello Maanitians...

I am Deepti.

I have written couple of OSs on Maaneet and thought and wanted to try out something different!!!!

This is a actually a SS...and my first SS...

I have read this concept somewhere not sure where.. and i loved the story to bits...

so i am enacting this in our Maaneet way!!!

Here it goes:


On one day morning 7.00 am... the phone rings...he looks at the time and says... what the hell!!!!! and takes the phone...

On the other side.. a strong voice.. Maan...uto aahi! i need to talk to you!... Yes mamaji... main tho 5 minute mein Ut jaaunga... I came in very late... yesterday..
Mamaji: I told you to go home early didnt I...
Maan: but mamaji...
Mamaji: No Maan this is the limit...
Maan: Sorry Mamaji I will be there for the Meeting within half an hour...
Mamaji: Ok so meet you there...

Mamaji (thinking): I have do something for this boy! this is the limit.. he is just wasting his life... It is high time i do something!
He calls some one on phone...
hello
hello Adi this is Viren.
Adi: yes Mr Khurana...
Viren: I need a help!
Adi: Yes Sir
Viren: I know Maan is your best friend and your boss. I need a big help from you which i need you to do urgently.
Adi: yes SIr, aap boliye
Viren: Find out the details of this school Kadambari Shiksha Mission!
Adi: But SIr why!
Viren: tum jaao tho sahi

After half an hour Maan reaches for the meeting. Viren is his mother brother, the only living relative he has, who has been a friend, a father and a mentor for him. Viren is a widower. They have no kids. So he and his wife had loved Maan from the age of 8 after Maan's parents died in an accident with his baby sister.

Maan: Good morning Mamaji
Viren: aagaje janab.. breakfast kiya... chalo have some with me. ( maan took his cup of coffee)
Maan: mamji you wnated me to discuss the bangalore project rt. I have studied the whole thing. I think it the budget will match ours. It will be a good leap I am sure!
mamaji aap sun rahe ho na..
Mamaji: Maan i wanted to talk to you about something very serious. I want you to get married as soon as possible.
Maan: what! NO I dont want to marry! what is with you. I have already told you didnt i.
Mamaji: But Maan.. Savithri bhi yahi chahthi thi...
Maan: please mamaji
Mamaji: Maan i dont want to hear anything looking at your life style, If you maary, you will start living a life. tum kisi ko chahthe ho.. U like someone..
Maan looks down.!!! Maan I am arranging a party next sunday in my farm house for the successful competion of our gurgaon project!
I have some friends who will be coming with their family. you understood what i mean rt.. just meet them and see if you like any of them...

Maan was so fuming in anger he didnt know what to do.. He was sipping cofee. SuddenlyAdi coems in with the details of school.
Thanks Adi. main khud ki jaakar donation dekar aathi hoon.
Adi: Sir, i have heard that they are not getting enough grants too.
Viren: I know i will go.
Maan: no mamaji i will go. I will ahve to go that way anyhow!!!!!!!!!
Viren: Ok thanks Maan! ( Maan thinks i have to get out of this place soon!!!)
Maan takes the cheque from Viren and says bye to Adi and Viren and leaves... Viren smiles.. and then turns towards Adi and says... thanks Adi.

Adi: Sir par main kya kiya...
Viren: U have paved the way!..

Maan so frustrated... maan didnt ahve to go that way.. he wanted to burst out his anger on something better his own car... he drove very fast.. murmuring something to himself and saying i dont want to get hurt again!!!!...

Maan reaches the school and sees a undeveloped school with not much facilities. he walks towards and sees deaf and dumb students studying something or the other. It looked like school was esp for poor people... he felt bad.. and he wanted to talkt o the principal. they say she has not come in today. Maan smiles at them and moves forward... hearing a laughter..

Maan sees a girl in a simple white anarkali salwar... playing with the kids each time laughing with them making them laugh...
He cant see his face. he can hear her talking to each child. doing something with sign language... smiling at them. then he saw the face.. beautiful round face without nay makeup, big eyes hazel eyes... sweet rosebud lips... he was suddenly feeling attracted to her... he kept looking at her... and when he started smiling even he doesnt know...

she sees him and comes towards him and ask... hello... and she smiled at him... she actually smiled at him... hello hello app ko kisi se milna hai. She keeps saying something... what i cant understand.. I cant hear... suddenly she calls him dusht .. he wakes from his dream and asks what????

Girl: I kep asking you aapko kisi se milna hai ki nahi... aap ho ki jawab nahi de rahe the... bas ghoor rahe the... aapko kissse milna hai...
Maan: tumse
Girl: mujhse... main tho aapko nahi jaanthi...
Maan: aap meri Girl friend banoge...
Girl: what???????

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Since this is my first attempt... Please ignore any errors

Please like and comment if you likeit!!

If u want the updates.. please add me as ur buddy!!!



Regards,
Deepz


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Posted: 14 years ago
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kamini itna chota kyu😡😡😡

bas story shuru hui aur tune khatm kiya😡😡😡
mamaji is smart...he actuaally wanted maan to meet geet only..isliye game khela na??😆😆😆
Edited by aashluvsmaan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i like it please continu soon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey deepti..
loved the concept...!!
update soon...plz pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely start Deepz...
do continue...😳
P.S. I love the title...😃
Edited by -jia- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashluvsmaan

kamini itna chota kyu😡😡😡

bas story shuru hui aur tune khatm kiya😡😡😡
mamaji is smart...he actuaally wanted maan to meet geet only..isliye game khela na??😆😆😆



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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: mansijani21

hey deepti..
loved the concept...!!
update soon...plz pm me


thank you.... please add me as ur buddy!!!! i will PM u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it dear sounds interesting keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: tater

i like it please continu soon😊


tthanks dear... will soon update the next part!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loveeeeeeee the concept!!!!
Interestingggg starting!!
Continue sooonn!!
Can u plzzz add me in ur pm list?



Fatima

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