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just a bit of shaping up the story so that i can give u full on maaneet from next update onwards...
here you go...
Part 4:
Maan: bahu!
Geet: bahu...!
Mamaji looking at her lovingly and takes her hand and makes her sit in the bed...near to maan...
Geet keeps looking at Maan and Maan Geet...
Mamaji looks at that and sees and says... kab laa rahi hai tu bahu ko? aur kyun chupa rahe the...
Savithri hote tho tum sir pe chadathe beti... usko itni cute si bahu jo mili hai...
Mamaji: sunte ho savithri... dekha na apne maan ne kitne sone kudi se shaadi ki hai...
Maan and Geet were gazing at each other with lots of questions...
the word 'shaadi' brought both of them out of their senses...
Maan: mamaji.. yeh kya bol rahe ho aap... shaadi.. maine Geet se shaadi nahi ki hai...
Mamaji: kya... lekin phir Geet ne mujhse yeh kyun bola ki.. woh tumhari patni hai...
Geet went all red... Maan looked at Geet.. ( sees her going all red)...
Geet: woh uncleji.. main to inki operation keliye kaha tha warna yeh nurse wale delay karthe aur inhe kuch ho gaya tho?
Mamaji: oh acha tumhari mangetar hai kya. Maan yeh kya hai.. maan mujhe bata tho sakthe ho.. har baat tho share karthe ho mujhese itni badi baat share nahi ki...
Maan keeps looking at her and Geet feels his glare on her afraid to look into his eyes she doesnt turn..
Mamaji: acha beta...to bolo... shaadi kab karne ka iraada hai... Geet... tum kaho tho main tumhare mummy papa se miltha hoon...
Maan: woh nahi.. aisa kuch nahi hai...
Mamaji (angry): kya aisi baat nahi... ladki ghumathe ho aur waqt aane pe chod dete ho.. Maan i am dissapointed...
Geet: nahi uncleji... woh..
Mamaji: chup dono.. Geet bolo tum kahan rahthi ho... main tumhare papa se miltha hoon
Geet: woh my parents are no more... I live with my brother and sisters...
Mamaji: to unse milthe hai...
Geet: woh chote hai mujhse..
Mamaji: kya bola... tu dekhbal karthi hai.. looks at Maan with all anger.. and says... acha.. beta tumhe ghar chod denge... chalo..
Geet: nahi main chali jaaungi...mujhe apni scooty bhi leni hai.. woh itne hospital laane keliye scooty wohi park ki thi...
Mamaji doesnt agree and nods his head with a no and tells.. woh ho jayega... tum chalo mere saath
acha Maan hum chalthe hai... bye tc beta... Geet looks at Maan and says chalthi hoon... Maan looks at her and smiles thinking.. ek din main uske paas agaya that itna ghatiya plan lekar..
lekin yeh kya ho gaya woh tho meri patni banthe banthe mangetha rho gayi... and looks up and says mami.. yeh sab aapka kiya hai na.. and smiles
Mamaji and geet in car asks her about her job, her siblings and excited that she has two small sisters and asks about them, tells her that savi ( as mama used to calls his wife lovingly) wanted two girls.. one boy, pata hai woh kehthi thi mera beta apni behnon ko sambhalega...
bhagwan ne aisa tho kuch diya nahi leking bahut pyaar mila use maan se... aur maan ko bhi..
Geet's eyes all wet, mamaji pats her cheek and says.. ab tum aagayi ho na.. tum bhar dena apni ghar bachon se...
Geet goes all crimson...
and looks out and asks driver to stop and tries to get out saying bye to mamaji... he stops her and says... tum utro aur aage baito maine kaha na main chod doongi.. bachon and asks his driver to follow them...
they go inside that gali and says bye to mamaji and he tells.. chalo main bhi aathi hoon tere saath do gudiyon se mil loongi aur tere chote bhai se bhi
Geet takes him to her house and mamaji sees a very small house ( looks like a chawl) looks at geet's face and sees her smiling...rings the bells and opens the door...two kids come and hug her tightly asking her why she was late, that they were very afraid and complainng bhaiyya didnt come home last night all.. geet hugs them back and tells her every thing is all right and she has come back...introduces them to meet uncleji... mama looks at two mini geets and opens his hand and asks them to come and hug him..
two pair of hazel eyes looking at her and them him and she nods and they go and hug him Geet looks ta that and smiles... calls her brother and gets that his fone is switched off..
Mamaji says Geet beta... main tumse kuch kaho tho bura tho nahi manogi? nahi uncleji boliye... aap bachon se saath humare ghar pe rahiya na...
itna bada ghar hai jaha do bring insaan rahthe hai... ek insaan aur ek machine rahthe hai...Maan tho machine hai.. kab sotha hai kab jaagtha hai kab khatha hai use bhi nagi pata...aur itne kamre khali pada hai...tum sab aaoge tho
Geet all confused ...woh main nahi uncleji main nahi aa sakthi aoh woh tikh nahi hoga...
Mamaji gets angry and says.. nahi beta.. waise bhi maine soch liya tha... jab tum aur maan shaadi karne wale hon tho deri kis baat ki.. aur maan ki dekhbaal bhi kar sakthe ho tum kyun mujhe pata hai tumhe acha lagega maan ki dekhbaal karna...
geet just smiles not knowing what to do...
She doesnt have maan's number to call and tell him suddenly rem him giving his card...
Mamaji says... acha beta tum sochke batao...aur . kal kab aarahi ho beti hospital mein.
Geet: ji 10 baje tak aa jaungi...
Geet closes the door go and searches her bag cursing where have i kept that khadoos;s card... bhek tho nahi kiya na..she searches and searches and finds it on her table... thinks. nhey bhagwaan yahan pe hai...checks its written Mr Maan Singh Khurana.. she feels a jolt in her stomach... and remembers his beautiful eyes... and his smirks.. and she starts bluching, suddenly thinks.. hey bhagwan mujhe kya hua hai.. itni badi problem aayi hai tho...
ok dails the number and presses the green button... the phone rings and she feels her heartbeat running in 1 mile/sec...
suddenly phone gets picked up and says yes Maan singh khurana...
geet's voice gets stumped there and she cant speak anything an cuts the call...
Maan on the other hand gets irritated seeing someone giving him blank calls... and puts the mobile oin the side table and closes his eyes and sees the white angel he saw the other day... and he smiles...
suddenly the fone rings again... and he takes it and sees the same number... and before he says anything...
ji main geet hoon, aap kaise ho.. tikh tho ho na.. yeh kya ho gaya... unlceji galat samjhe gaye.. aap bolenge unhe humare beech aise kuch nahi hai...
main nahi bol payi.. unhone aapke baare mein bahut kuch kaha... aur yeh ki aunty ji chahthe the ki aapke shaadi jaldi ho...
aur yeh bhi shahthe hai ki hum dono shaadi kare.. yeh kaise ho saktha hai... mujhe us din bahut gussa aaya jab aapne kaha hi main apki mangetha banu.. main socha yeh kaisa aadmi hai dusht danav (maan smiles)... aur ab hum kya kare aap boliye na kuch aap kuch bolthe kyun nahi.. hey bhagwann...
acha aap kuch bhi nahi bologe.. main uncle ji ko kya jawab doongi.. hai bhagwaan.. aap kuch bolthe kyun nahi...
acha main phone rakhti hoon... and she cuts the call...
Maan for one min thinks 'what was that'... and smiles... and a nurse sees that and asks yes sir... maan nods his head in a no and smiles lying on the bed...
geet on the othrside thinks kyun kuch nahi bola usne...
suddenly rem she talking and talking and not giving him space to talk... and pats his head.. suddenly all embarresed...'oh god'... and goes to the bathroom...
Maan keeps looking ath the phone and the conversation and tries to rem what she ssaid... but he was in awe hearing her speak like a super fast express... ms. hoshiapur express... and he smirks
she changes and comes and looks at her fone.. and waits for a call from him as she is so embarresed to call.. back...
maan looks and waits for her call...
suddenly maan calls her.. and she takes up the fone and says: sorry main e kuch zyaada hi bola na.. sorry...
Maan in his sexy voice says Geet...and geet stops.. talking... maan calls again Geettt
she cuts the call... maan gets angry and says.. bahut ghamandi ladki hai.. and smiles. seeing the effect of him on her...and sleep off
geet feeling bad that she cut his call waits for his call and sleeps off...
Next day...
Geet reaches hospital alittle early to talk to him before uncleji comes.
geet enters the room and sees maan sleeping very peacefully looking like a small boy. with both his hands under his head.. on the pillow... she keeps looking at him
she moves towards the bed and brings her hand to his hair... and suddenly he wakes up.. and looks at her .. geet shocked moves up and says Good morning...
mujhe aase baat karni hai...
bolo na kuch.. maan looks at geet and says.. ek minute and goes to the bathroom and geet looks around and sees the nurse coming with medicine and food.. and geet says i have brought the food.. aap medicine yeh pe chod dijiye i will give him... maan coming out of bathroom hears that..
you have brought food for me.. why?
Geet: woh...aise hi... shayad aapko hospital ka khana acha na lage tho...
Maan: leking geet yeh 5 star hospital hai... yahan acha khana hi miltha hai...
Geet pouts...
ok main aapse kuch baat karne aayi hoon aap bolo na kya kare hum aap baat karenge uncleji se...
Maan: Geet suno... main baat karungi mamaji se... kuch der keliye please do what he says...i will talk to him
Geet shows him a disapproving look
Mamaji enters... kya baat karenge mujhse... both Maan and Geet shocked seeing him early...
are Geet beta... aap aagaye aapne tho kaha tha 10 baje tak hi aaungi... geet doesnt know what to do and smiles... hmm mujhe pata hai tum dono love birds to baat karni hai na..
lekin baaten baad mein.. shaadi ke baad,... batein hi karthe rahna..
he laughs.. and says.. mujhe pandit ji se baat karni hai.. tumhari kundali hai kya beta... Geet looks at maan
and says no and he asks her time and date of birth and says ok isse kaam chalenge...
tumhe nahi pata main kitni khush hoon...kjal savi aayi thi sapne main... aur boli... ki uski bahu ko rajkumari ki tarah rakhna... jo woh nahi kar paayi mujhe karna... ab yeh saadi jaldi se jaldi hogi...
Geet looks at and Maan and viceversa...
and asks.. tumhe school nahi jana hai kya?
chalo main drop karthi hoon tumhe... Geet goes with mamaji...
Maan thinks yeh mamaji bhi na... humesha galat time pe aate hai...open the tiffin geet has brought and sees chole batura.. and some sweet too...
he gets hungry and eats everything and smiles says yeh geet to achi cook hai
Geet goes to the school and mamaji to office...
mamaji calls up geet and says.. beta panditji se October ki date fix ki hai shaadi keliye aur iska matlab hai... 3 mahine baaki hai..
aur jo maine kal bola tha us par tumne socha beta... wiase bhi un sab ko shaadi ke baad humare ghar pe hi tho rahna hai.. tum aarahi ho.. aj hi shift karlo..
kuch help chahiye tho bol dena...
aur aaj maan bhi laut rahe hai hospital se.. tum ghar mein hogi to use bhi acha legega... ok...
Geet in a flow hearing all this in awe says yes..
acha i will send some people.. 4 baje tak ghar pe aana ok?
Geet: ok uncleji...
all the movers come and take all the luggage, photos etc etc.. ( Geet: thinking what i am doing.. oh god.. what will he think seeing me at home)...
verything is happening so fast...mamaji is not giving any space...
she doesnt see gautam and calls him... tells the movers to go and seeing a car for her... asks them to wait for her and goes to search for gautam... doesnt see him...
she come home and sees him sitting in the back of th house crying...
Geet runs to him and asks what happened bacha?
he hugs his sister hard and says... are u doing this for me?
geet shocked : what? what are u saying?
gautam: did aisa mat karo.. main parson kuch zyaada bola pata hai.. main apni saari habits chod doongi... aapko etne bade aadmi se shaadi mat karo jo aapko pyaar na karthaho...
geet hugs him tight with love, wipes his tears and says... bahut acha family hai.. wahan uncleji hai jo papa ki tarah hai...
maan hi jo...
Gautam: jo...
geet smiles and says tumhe pyaar karega guide karega...
ab chalo.. uncleji intezaar kar raha haoga... aur ache bache ki tarah rahna.. ok?
Gautam hugs him feeling bad for her and makes up his mind and thinks.. main apni didi ko bachaungi...
All four get in the car and leave...
as soon as they reach the Khurana house, she sees a palace... a beautiful palace...
She gets in and there was a welcome board for her... she smiles and mamaji comes and hugs her, hugs gunn and gauri and pats Gautam...
sab keliye kamra hai...
she sees the house...
looks like no one actually lived here... Mamaji senses that and says... bilkul savi pe gayi ho.. jab savi pehle baar ghar pe aaya tha yahi expression tha... usne ghar banaya tha is makan ko... ab tumhe banana hai...
goes around and sees a big photo of savi near to the mandir...
geet goes and prays and says sorry to her for telling lies to mamaji...
Mamaji takes her to maan's room... she looks around and sees a dry room with just one photo not even his... mama aur mami ka..
Geet looks at mamaji.. he pats her and says this is his life... now u have to colour it beta karoge na...
Geet looks at him and hugs him(she didnt know what she did that) she hugs him and says ji mamaji...
Mamaji smiles...
Geet gets ready makes gunn aur gauri ready too...and they are playing with mamaji... mamaji is all laughing aloud..
she wears a saree, goes to maan's room and cleans up everthing and opens his drawer and sees an album with pics od his childhood days, mama and mami's photo...
Geet understands this is a grieving house... grieving for love...
Suddenly the room opens and Maan comes in and Geet turns around...
Maan looks at Geet in awe.. ( she was looking just out of the world).. so sexy.. maan glares at her curves... her face deviod of all makeup but still glowing...
Maan comes near to her.. and looks around his face... feast his eyes on her hazel eyes, her beautiful face and finnaly to her rosebud lips...
Geet looks dosn blushing...
Maan slowly touches her face with one hand (as other hand is bandaged)...
pulls her chin up looks at her lips... brings her lips near to his and...
MAAAN and the door opens..
Precap: Geet feeding Maan...
love deepz
xxx
Edited by maneet1985 - 14 years ago
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