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Posted: 14 years ago
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-Ehtesaab-
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Dev started his Mehra Technologies working in the garage of their rented house & grown to such level now. He put his heart & soul into this company. She never thought about anything else but her family.

Typical morning at dev & Geet 's house. Dev rushing to his office as early as 7am. Geet in kitchen getting ready with breakfast, his lunch bag. He takes the toast in hand & kisses her & rushes out..
she pulls his tie & pulls him back in
dev - umm..still munching his sandwich
aaj tho breakfast saat karloo
aaj kya hain
she rolls her eyes & turns around. He hugs her from behind..kisses her cheek
happy anniversary jaan & makes her wear a necklace.
Aap ko yaad tha..she turned into his arms
how can I forget jaan.. 2yrs ago aaj hi ki din tum meri hui thi..sirf meri
his lips seals hers into a passionate one. She smiles blushingly.
Aacha need to rush now.. bye..
she bites her lower lip ..bye..jaldi aana
umm

she gets back to the kitchen to finish her work. She completes her work every day by 9am. Then nothing much for her to do. Even the servant leaves the place by 9am. She walks around the house checks if every thing is in place. She leaves to her gym at 9.15am. Attends some classes on yoga, some day Pilates, someday music class & then home latest by 12 noon. she freshens up & has her lunch. Next one hr of the day she spends on calling mama, papa & in-laws.

By 2-2.230pm.. she doses off watching TV. She wakes up around 4pm when the servant comes in the evening to do her usual work. & then the endless wait for Dev... there was no fixed time when he came back. Some times parties, sometimes office work.. something or other... she used to accompany him to parties but he was not comfortable the way peers looked at her. He was a possessive husband. Really in love with her. So was she.. really possessive wife.

She waited it was 10pm.. he was not back yet.. she wanted to call but was not sure..
another hr passed he finally made it by 11pm. She dossed off on the couch waiting for him.
She woke up suddenly hearing the door bell ringing continuously.
She checked her pallo & rushed to open the door..aa rahi hoon baba
how long do u take to open the door
aapke paas tho key hain na..why don't u open with that
u know I hate it.. I like u opening the door for me...
she blushed...kitni der kardi..
sorry jaan.. u know client parties
aaj ke din bhi
aab unhe tho pata nahi na..aaj humre liya kitna special hain
aapne dinner kiya
he reluctantly nodded..
aaj tho mera saat dinner karten
itne saaren log the I couldn't refuse
.

She puts the food back in the fridge.
Jaan tum nahi khaavoo ghi
nahi I am feeling full

he went & changed. She sensuously hugged him from behind. He turned & kissed her. Jaan I am really tired.. tum aaj kal bahut tired hoten ho.. she pulled off his tie. She opens his shirt & kisses his neck unbuttoning him..
dev I was thinking hume baby plan karna chahiyen
umm..
still kissing her lovingly. Making their way to passion filled night.


Next morning
dev was rushing to office at 7.00am..
dev woh..baby wali baat?
Yah sweetheart we will talk about it..aabhi mujhe late ho raha hain
but u never talk
aaj raat ko paka..
kissed her forehead & rushed off.

she rolled her eyes continued with her daily routine.
It has been 3 months since their anniversary. Dev has still not got time to talk to her.


Maan typical day.. starts his day as early as 5am. Starts his day with gym. He freshens up & attends the family puja at 8am. He being the eldest son, he leads a role model life. Yet has his unique style in every thing. May it be his business or personal life.

He takes blessings from Daadi, mama, papa..waks virat & anni for coming late to puja. He is at breakfast table at sharp 8.45am. There is nothing unplanned in his life. Systematic, organized. He leaves home at 9.15am, every day his car stops at a signal at around 9.30am. Strangely he every day notices a girl walk pass..in her tracks, with head phones. He has never seen her closely. But strangely mon-sat every single day she crosses the road exactly at this time & it has become a norm for him to see her. Not that he wants to see her but it is just that, he sees her. Its been over year now. A routine.


Precap
the girl didn't cross the road today

-NEXT PART 2-
Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Heyyy!!!! U are updating..... Im waiting eagerly!!!!
Why do I feel as if Dev is gonna die in this FF???? Is sumthing like this gonna happen?????

BTW wen are U gonna update Deewangi????? Evry1 on D's thread is waitiing infact they are dieing for the next part.....Pleeez answer my question.....

Wowwww!!!!!! Im the 1st one to comment on the 1st part of ur new FF 😳 😳 😳 Im so happy 😆 😆 😆
Update was nice.... But I just hated Dev n Geet together 😡 😡 😡 but dat girl seemed to be so cute n sweet...... I wonder who she is n if she ever noticed Maan..... Intrsting precap..... Cont sooon
Edited by Sameenaas - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
Awesome amazing update
Thank you
Dev seems to be a typical super busy IT guy
Geet the typical house wife
MSK the typical disciplined doting family guy.
Wow now how are Maaneet going to get close.
That is for us to guess right
Atleast Maaneet have one connection
She crosses his path daily.
Oops she didnt today.
I will keep guessing Maan's reaction till the next update
waiting to see the story unfold.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Great going, everything seems so perfect yet feeling like something is missing. Kudos to u for making an interesting story right from the start. Please continue 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#35
Muski, to be honest... me not liking dev calling geet Jaan 😭
Only maan has the right to call her Jaan... but i knw u'll somehow lead one thing to the other....
Something's really fishy abt dev... he seems toooo busy with his business n doesnt seem to care abt geet anymore... making bahanas like tired, parties, office etc etc....
Well precap: maan doesnt see geet walking to her gym.. he'll somehow get worried ( not actually worried but something in his heart will kinda worry him but he won't understand the meaning of tht worry)... thtz just my thinking...

pls continue soon...

-Shraddha
Edited by Maaneet_Deewani - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
beautiful part. pls add me to ur pm list. waiting for the next part eagerly:)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
oye!!!!!!!!!!!!!
muski... u started the new FF... and i didn't got the PM.....
anyways.....
awesome as usual!.....
but.. um.. ahm.. ahm.. dev-geet track 🤢
though it was romantic one.. but only if maan would hav replaced dev..😉🤣
muskan.. update soon...........
till now.. maan is not much revealed ....😳
update soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Thanks for a quick update.👏
Introduction of 2 poles was awesome.......
Maan being systematic in life For him values are his first priority
Dev being over ambitious... for him his career takes up first ....
Geet being a good devoted housewife wants to start their family....
Now beginning of a twist
Maan watches Geet everyday.... its been a year ......
Precap
he does not see her one day.....
Gosh what to comment now ....... very eager to know more about this triangular dimention of the story.
Continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
⭐️congrates for new ff⭐️
different concept
precap sounds interesting
that girl is geet, i think
Edited by -memorable- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
OMG Muskan New FF
Just saw the link on Fb.
Congrats dear and Thanks a lot......

Story looks interesting... But like everybody i also don't like Geet with Dev.. It just doesn't suit...

But i know at the end ..... Maan ke Geet..
Waiting for story to unfold....

Muskan Deewangi kab update karogi???? dear pls bahot din hogaye.... Pls one update plsssssssssss
Edited by PoojaMishty - 14 years ago

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