-Ehtesaab- SS maaneet THREAD 1 - Page 12

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow a new FF !!!loved it yaar !!
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow... new concept. Geet married to Dev and loves him to death!.. umm hard to digest...this silly heart just doesnt want Maan and Geet to ever belong to anyone else😆...

but with you at the helm.. things will be interesting to say the least..all the best for this new story👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMGGG!!!!!
just came across ur new FF!
got to say i am liking where it is heading...
that girl is geet....and maan will be anxious about not seeing her that one morning....
update soon i think i might be already hooked to this FF...hehe
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Posted: 14 years ago
great ff
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
LUVED IT DO CONTINUE SOON
N CONGRATS ON D NEW FF
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadzzz
Cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhhhhhhhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing start.....though it's a bit weird to hav geet n dev 2gether.......geet seems to really love her hubby n so does dev......i wonder how maaneet will b 2gether......omg....maan sees geet everyday.....bt 2day he didnt.....i wonder wat he will feel like.....continue soon n thnx for the pm......
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Posted: 14 years ago
PRESS LIKE BUTTON & COMMENT MOTIVATES ME😳
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But strangely mon-sat every single day she crosses the road exactly at this time & it has become a norm for him to see her. Not that he wants to see her but it is just that, he sees her. Its been over year now. A routine.

Next morning dev rushed to his office after a soft peck on her cheek. Geet smiled & carried on with her work. She was dressed in her tracks it was 9am. She checked the room if every thing was fine. Then she noticed dev had left his black suit for dry cleaning. She called the servant & told her to give the suit for dry clean. She checked the pocket to find some papers. She glanced it before throwing them to be sure if it was impt. It was some restaurant receipt. She crushed it & threw it. Immediately picked up & read the date again.. it was same date as their anniversary. She checked the time it was 9pm. She checked the bill amount was 1500/-.

she sat down to think.. nahi kisi aur ka bill hoga.. but it had his credit card detail on it.
if he payed the bill at 9pm.. why did he come back home at 11pm. The restaurant was just 30mins drive, she doubly checked the bill. Then the thought.. he said there were so many of the clients.. then how come the bill is only 1500!!.. she knew the place very well. This was dev fav restaurant in delhi. For two people 1500/- is normal. She was not comfortable with all this silly thoughts in her mind.

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Maan's car stopped at the signal. He unknowingly looked up at the signal. That girl was not there. He checked the time, it was their usual time... may be she is late..or early. The whole day he was disturbed, wondered why he was. But something bothered him, he didn't even know it was because of not seeing her. But Maan Singh khurana had a real tough day.

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The whole day she sat there numb wondering every other option possible. She was not dumb to put one & one together. She stayed at home.. because he loved it that way, actually she loved it too being a house wife. No complains ..but well she was not dumb!!! she was well aware of her surroundings. She couldn't take this frustration any more..

it was 8pm.. & she was still in those tracks. She just took a chance & went to the restaurant. The people looked at her strangely as she wore a track at this hr to the restaurant. She actually didn't care. She scanned the place, her heart was shattered at the sight it met with. She stood their looking at him blankly. His hand on a girls lap, she knew they were working together, but why hand on her. They were still having the laptop in front, she knew they were discussing something official. But then why in such indecent manner. She understands the attraction that could creep in if u r working together for 2yrs day in & day out. Lekin he loved her, they were happily married..that too..love marriage.. !!! attraction ok.. may be, she scanned her top to bottom..knew she looked attractive, typical bomb shell in devs college time terms. How could he do this to our relationship. Least she expects from him was being loyal to her, forget having meals together.

He straighten himself. By looking her in tracks he knew, wat she has been through since morning. He came across to her & walked her outside. He turned at the girl & said.. clear the bill, I will see u in the morning. Geet didn't say a word as they drew to their house.. now it felt like a jail to her. Where she was caged for 2yrs. Self sentenced imprisonment !!! since she didn't seem to say or ask anything he cleared his throat - we are good friends
she looked into his eyes - how long???
her eyes had pain.. pain of betrayal...pain of being let down by her own self..her love her better half.. her every thing
how long she repeated still looking into his eyes..
a year now.. he said bluntly
tears rolled down her eyes.. as she turned & went to her room. She cuddled up in the bed holding herself rather in a protective manner. She didn't know wat to think or do. She couldn't imagine a life without him. She never thought the truth would be like a sword piercing through her heart. She kept weeping..alone in the darkness, not knowing wat will she do. He came & slipped next to her. He hugged, her & rested his cheek o hers.. jaan I love u ...I really do!!
she could simply melt into those words, but the pain of betrayal she felt. Hurt ripped her within. The pain was unbearable.

Next day in the morning, he was rushing to office. She was preparing the breakfast
she handed over the lunch box - why did u do this?
Dev was a straight forward person, no playing games, no hide & seek. He knew she had a right to know the truth - jaan it was just that we work together..phir
main bhi tho aapke saath kaam kar sakti thi na
u know it is nothing like that
she broke down in tears.. why did u do this dev? Humare pyar main kya kami rah gayen thi?
Geet sweetheart there is nothing about all that. Please try to understand
wat do u want me to understand dev? I did every thing as u pleased..every thing
he snapped back ...we did it because thats wat we also wanted..we love each other.
She shook him helplessly then why all this?? why??
wat do u want me do jaan?
She kept quiet... she didn't know wat she wanted him to do anymore
I love u a lot, he hugged her. She stood there not knowing wat to feel.

7yrs they have been in love..2yrsof marriage. Every thing was fine..nothing was ever a problem. Their families did have little bit of opposition but finally they all agreed. They were happily married..she had not thought about herself separate from him. Her day started with him & ended on him.. there was nothing else for her to think about. She was wanting a baby so that they could be a complete family. From 1st year of college she has only lived a life that he planned. She never could have imagine a sec without him. Her plans, her trips, her movies, her outings everything has been in accordance to him..not now.. ever since they met. Did she give in easily..no actually she loved it that way.. there was never a dominance of any kind it was simply ..her complete surrender, not because he demanded but that was Geet.
She never complained or cribbed about spending quality time was because she knew how much he was struggling to come up in life, make it big in life. She was there for him when ever, where ever he wanted her to be.. then why this betrayal..did she lack in any way.. Even when they didn't have s** for long time she would take initiatives..even though he had been turning her down. More frequently past few months.. may be she know why now!!! she sat there lost in a world that seemed so alien now, life in ruined and bare. trust seems only like a folktale in this empty world that surrounded her filled with darkness and pain.

Precap
wat does Geet want???

-PREV PART 1 NEXT PART 3-
Thanxs for all the beautiful comments
it really motivates me & helps me to write more
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
awwww Muski that was awesome part as always.👏
BTW I just loved the concept of this FF....😉
So I can sense some trouble brewing in Geet and Dev's realtionship...so Dev is cheating on her...so Maan missed seeing Geet and had a rough day..wondering how will you bring Maaneet together....can't wait for the next part..update soon.
Edited by namita25 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Muski for the brilliant and the most amazing and astonishing update of all time.
I just cannot believe it that I am reading this which truly and exactaly happened with a friend of mine ...........
They were high school buddies he was a senior and belonged to a filthy rich family with a strong business background and my friend was the sweetheart of the school ...their extremely hot affair lasted for further 2 more yrs and they got happily married.After her marrige she left the school and became an active house wife ......They were blessed with two kids within 2 years of their marriage.This guy got into a franchise business of restaurant which is very famous in USA...Third year of marriage she found out about the infidelity of her husband.He had the affair with his co-worker. ........the shock,mental agony and the betrayal was too much for her........
...........I as afriend have witness what she has gone through and still going through...............
Geet has Maan to pull her out from her mental truma ,but people don't find such people in their real life.
Sorry Muski I am simply numb to give any comment about this FF today.😭I am in a trance of my own thoughts,so please forgive me...........
Edited by Dilsay - 14 years ago

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