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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soniaraheja

guyss who is updating...????

u😆😆😆😆😆😆
i am not kidding😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice parts dear
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

u😆

i am not kidding😳

🤣 🤣
no no no me not...
after ridas hot part... 😳 😳how can i write...
i m so much confused...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soniaraheja

🤣 🤣

no no no me not...
after ridas hot part... 😳 😳how can i write...
i m so much confused...

tch tch tch..u shd have thought b4 making ur last part so amazing...chup chap go and write
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

tch tch tch..u shd have thought b4 making ur last part so amazing...chup chap go and write

lol tch tch my fault...😆
but i'll try...
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Posted: 14 years ago
try try itna try karte ho kaika..itna darte ho kaiko...sodha likhti nahin kaiko????
write now!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

try try itna try karte ho kaika..itna darte ho kaiko...sodha likhti nahin kaiko????

write now!!!!!

😳 😳 hmmm not today...have to go bahar with di... so tomorrow...pakkka...
will be ready with ma update...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: soniaraheja

😳 😳 hmmm not today...have to go bahar with di... so tomorrow...pakkka...

will be ready with ma update...😃

okies ..i have pmed u sth do check
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Posted: 14 years ago

simply amazing..

n very passionate n sexy part rida..

loved it alot yaar..

Edited by anumeha_rajat - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

ok guys...

i guess no one is updating rite now..so i'll do it...

The knock on the door...n Ridhimaa's voice...brought them back from the world they were in...Shilpa was feeling she has got her live back...wid his touch...

his hands were on her shoulder...but he removed them back as current passed through him...

Armaan: 'he thought' no i cant do this...i love Ridhimaa...my basket...how can i come close to Shilpa...who is just my friend...n Ridhimaa...im gonna spend my whole life wid her...than how can i feel something for Shilpa...i cant betray Ridhimaa...i can broke her trust..

Shilpa who was in her own world of love...seeing him soo close to her after soo many months..was back down on earth...seeing him removing his hands roughly from her shoulders...she saw him fighting wid his own thoughts..n then she heard him..

Armaan: im really sorry Shilpa...jo kuch bhi hua...uske liye im really sorry...it was just a weak moment..mein kuch samay ke behak gaya tha...i cant betray Ridhimaa's trust...i love her...i cant do this to her... im sorry...im sorry... 'saying this..he jumped down from the balcony n left..'

leaving her completely shattered...all her woven dreams wee broken once again...hearing him saying all this...made her heart blead...she dont knw wat to do...she sooo want that her life get ends her only...wat life it is...when her Armaan is not wid her...she is like a body widout a soul...n Armaan..he even didnt remember her...His Shona...

again a loud thud on the door...n she moved to open the door...n saw Ridhimaa dressed in a beautiful pink lehngha looking as beautiful as she is...

Ridhimaa looked in her eyes n came to knew something happened...

Ridz: Shilpa kya hua...u were calling me first n then didnt open the door...kya hua bolo na... 'when she didnt said anything...Ridhimaa looked at her..n only one word escaped from her mouth... ' Armaan...

Hearing his name...Shilpa broked down...as all wat happpened earlier...all the moments came rushing back in her mind...

Ridz: Shilpa kya hua...bolo na...

Shilpa: Di...aj karwachauth hai...ek suhagan ke liye sab se bara khushi ka din..jab woh pati ke liye wraath rakhti hai...uski lambhi ayu[life] ke liye bhagwan se prathna [ pray] karte hain...aaj ka din sab ke liye unki zindagi ka sabse khass din hota hai,...aur meri bad kismati dekho...mera pehle karwa chauth hi adoora hoga di...mera wraath khulwane ke liye...Armaan nahi hoga di...mera waarth adoora hoga di...

'n she cried more n more...hearing her..even Ridhimaa got tears in her eyes...n wid determination in her voice said...'

Ridz: tumhara waarth adoora nahin hoga Shilpa...bhagwan ko usey pura karna hi hoga...aur mujhe pura yakeen hai...ke tumhara yeh wraath...Armaan ke hatton se hi purra hoga... 'she wiped her own n Shilpa tears...n hugged her again...'

on the other side...all were ready for this beautiful occasion...gals dressed in beautiful lehngha's of different colors...n guys in sherwani's...

*im not posting any pics...so think urself how u wanna see them dressed for this occasion...*

Armaan also came there...'Gupta house guys...'

he was still thinking abt wat happened b/w Shilpa n him...but he dont knnow y he didnt feel odd...but felt very nice...n felt it happened before also...

he remembered he never gone this much to Ridhimaa also..like the way he did wid Shilpa...but he never feels sooo much special n longing wid Ridhimaa...like the way its wid Shilpa...

he looked up n saw Shilpa coming dressed in the same beautiful yellow dress...looking enchanted...n he couldnt took his eyes away from her...

Rahul: Sid kuch socha...Armaan Shilpa ka wraath kaise khulwae gae...

Sid: nahin yaar..kuch samajh nahin araha...Shilpa se tu wada kar diya...lekin usey pora kaise karoon...

Atul: yaar..kuch tu karna parega...woh bechari kis tarah toot gaye hai...

Muski: oye khooton tum se ek plan anhin banta...

Anji: Muski hum Armaan se yeh tu nahin keh sakte na...ke jao aur Shilpa ka wraath khulwao...woh hazar sawal poche ga..jinka jwab humare pass nahin hoga...

Ridz: ab kuch nahi ho sakta...bas ab sab kuch bhagwan pe chor do...

All of them were sitting n discussing..hw to make Armaan ready to compelte Shilpa's fast...

JP: chand agaya...chand agaya... 'he came running from the terrace...' arey sab flowers ji...chalo chand nikal aya...

n heairing him all went towards the terrace...

Shilpa was the last one to enter...she was feeling really week...wid no strength to go up...but she has to complete her fast...n she will do it...

she thought 'agar bhagwan ki marzi ismein hai...tu mera wraath Armaan hi khole ga...'

All were completing the rituals wid their respective partners...Armaan also stood in front of Ridhimaa...who was feeling kind of odd...n looked at Sid...

who blinked his eyes n assured her..to go wid it...Shilpa was standing in the corner...seeing this...n tears ran down her cheeks...

she cant see him doing this...she moved from their...n going towards the stairs...

when she felt the world around her moving fast...she cant focus on anything...she cant see...n suddenly all went black..n she fell down...

Armaan who was abt to make Ridz drink water...ran towards her...Shilpa...n kept her head in his lap...

all others also moved towards them...Armaan quickly made her drink after...n also splash some on her face...to make her conscious...

all of them had a smile on their face...in one way or the other...Armaan completed her fast...

Shilpa opened her eyes n smiled slightly...thnxing God...

armaan picked her up n moved down..widout saying anything to others...whereas everyone else...completed their fast...n Sid made Ridz drink water...

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i know not upto the mark...

hope u like...sorry for any mistakes...didnt recheck...

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