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nightstar

@nightstar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#681

Originally posted by: meeru_s_armaan

hey very nice...u all r going gr8...

but just one request to all writers that plz dont run the story so fast...make it a bit gradual so that we can feel each and every moment...like armaan's blooming feelings and all...

love meeru

we hardly have much updates here...writers are all so busy..on top of that..if the story sticks to one theme, no one wd update...cz being an updater here myself, i knw that when it comes to writing any part..everyone wants to write a full on romantic one...if we have blooming love, no onw wd want to update...

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 14 years ago

#682

OH MY GOD MERE BECHRE COMMENT KO KITNA SERIOUS LE LIYA YAAR MAINE TO DEKH HI NAHI. I AM REALY SORRY IF I HERAT ANY BODY. I LOVE SHILPA YAAR AUR WHEN EVER I THINK ABOUT RIDDHIMA JUST HER FACE COME IN MY MIND. SO I LOVE READING ARSH FF.COZ SHILPA WILL ALWAYS MY RIDDIMA. SORRY YAAR I LOVE ALL ARSH FF. BAS ARMAA KE RIDDHIMA KO CHOR DENE SE PROBLEM THI. SORRY FOR THOUSAND TIMES YAAR. I WILL NEVER EVER COMMENT LIKE THIS.

MERI CUTE PROFILE PIC DEKH KAR MUJHYE MAFF KAR DENA PLZ ALL OF U.

😭😭😭😭😭

Edited by ishkavirani - 14 years ago

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ishka virani

@LilApple

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Posted: 14 years ago

#683

Originally posted by: neha-rockss

well ye ARSH ff hai...

nd yahaan ARSH hi saath honge😛😛😛😛

AR ko dekhna ho to...AR ff padho😳 i m sure yu ll enjoy

nd great dat yu found it intrestng ...😳

SORRY BY HOLDING MY EARS. I DIDN'T WROTE THIS TO HEART ANY ONE.

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ishka virani

@LilApple

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#684

Originally posted by: sacred shrine

i second that..the title itself shows its an arsh ff...so if u dnt agree to the concept of this ff u are most welcome to ignore...its not mandatory for anyone to read...

SORRY .

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fri42911

@fri42911

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#685

Originally posted by: ishkavirani
OH MY GOD MERE BECHRE COMMENT KO KITNA SERIOUS LE LIYA YAAR MAINE TO DEKH HI NAHI. I AM REALY SORRY IF I HERAT ANY BODY. I LOVE SHILPA YAAR AUR WHEN
EVER I THINK ABOUT RIDDHIMA JUST HER FACE COME IN MY MIND.
SO I LOVE READING ARSH FF.COZ SHILPA WILL ALWAYS MY RIDDIMA. SORRY YAAR I LOVE ALL ARSH FF. BAS ARMAA KE RIDDHIMA KO CHOR DENE SE PROBLEM THI. SORRY FOR THOUSAND TIMES YAAR. I WILL NEVER EVER COMMENT LIKE THIS.
MERI CUTE PROFILE PIC DEKH KAR MUJHYE MAFF KAR DENA PLZ ALL OF U.

😭😭😭😭😭

hey dear, don't get sad. please don't cry. we know what you were trying to say. for me too, Shilpa is/will always be Riddhima and Shilpa. I love KASH as AR/ARSH. i am crazy about ARSH. i love to read all the ffs written on them. hoping to see KASH soon together on screen. crossing my fingers.

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#686

Its been a hectic day for Shilpa and on top of that JP had been eating her head since morning..
In locker room
Jp-arey flowerji apko pata hai humre yahan pe to sab is festival ko aise tarike se manaate hai ke poochiye mat...ab to humko bhi intezaar hai ke kab aisa waqt ayega jab koi humre liye bhi woh rakhegi
shilpa-woh matlab...
Just then armaan,sid,anjali,ridhima entered...
armaan-kaun kiske liye kya rakh raha haiyeh...armaan came to where jp and shilpa were sitting and shilpa got conscious although armaan now considers shilpa as one of his good friends,shilpa never tried to cross her limits...she always maintained a distance with armaan which made him more curious...
jp-arey armaan bhayiya apko pata nahi kal ky ahai
anjie-aisa ky ahai kal...
ridhima was discussing something with shilpa..
jp-arey aap log bhi na flowerji kal to bohot hi beautiful day hai specially jo pyaar karne wale hai n aunke liye...
kal uu ka keht ehai karwachauth hai...
sid-kiska chautha..
lol
armaan-oye chautha nahi..karwachauth wahii jismein(he was saying this with a dreamy smile on his face)
sab ladkiaan woh wht do they say yeah apne husban ya phir boyfriends ke liye vrat rakhti hai...
jiggy-arey baap re phir to sara din bina khaaye rehna hota hoga
ridhima-haan aur phir shaam ko chand ke nikal pe woh apne pati ke haaton se paani ka pehla ghoot peeti hai...(she was staring at Sid)
armaan saw this and sensed something diff
armaan-yo basket i think tum kuch bhool rahi ho
arey humari shaadi thori hui hai ab tak so correction it shld be hone wala pati haan
Sid gt wht ridhima was trying to say..he knw it tht it was a nightmare for him to see all this infront of his own eyes,still he was ready to do all this only for the sake of armaan...he was his bestest buddy how can he leave him in such a situtaion and abt ridhima then he was confident that her love was with him so nothing can seperate them...
Shilpa was lost in her own thoughts..karwachauth...its a blissful day for all married women but wht luck she has...this will be her first karwachauth after her marriage nad here her husband ds not even remember her..or say he ds nt remember tht he got married...a drop of tear trickled down her cheek...
before it can fall someone caught it in his hands...
armaan-yo bracelet ur tears are really precious so ineh aise waste mat karo...(he whispered it to her)
all were aware wht shilpa must be feeling now...jigy cursed jp for mentioning abt it thre...
sid-aahh guyz listen ab jab humein pata hii hai ke kal ka din kitna special hai so we must do smthng na...
jiggy-exactly party rakhte hai
sid-abey bewakuf karwachauth ke din party
armaan-no fear when armaan is here...kal sab mere wahan pe hoga u knw karwachauth preparations and all...after all is baar basket aur main ek saath jo hai...
he stared at ridhima and she gave him a faint smile...
armaan,jp and jiggy left frm there to mke preparations...
shilpa also left...
ridz-sid...mujhse yeh sab nahii hogaa..main..main yeh kaise kar sakti hun...mere pat tum ho...aur shilpa uske baare mein socha hai...nahi sid tumhe yeh sab bolna hi nahi chaiye tha
sid-ridhimaaa...yahan dekho
he made her face her...
sid-u trust me na...then just wait and watch kyun is baar humara pehla karwachauth hum ek saath manayenge aur armaan aur shilpa bhi
ridhima-pagal ho gaye ho kya tum...armaan to yeh janta bhi nahi ke uski aur shilpa ki shaadi..phir yeh sab kaise hoga
sid-woh sab tum mujhpe chor do...tumhara kaam bas itna hi hoga ke tum shilpa ko tayiyar karke kal armaan ke ghar leke ao...uske baad leave it to me...he winked at her...
armaan mallik iss baar to aap apne haaton se shilpa ko paani ka pehla ghoot pilayenge...

Ok first of all hatts off to all the writers here awesome parts...ridu,anu and sonia great job:) specially the twist thanks for bringing it:|
and whoever continues plz keep it in mind tht abhi-nikki and ananya billy already left they r nt in the picture anymore as i dont wanna mess up everything by bringing soo many characters:(hpe u agree with me and yeah rahul-muski and atul-angie r still here...hpe u liked the part although i knw its nt good:(
-laddoo

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Maria Ahmed

@Maria151994

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#687

hey hi
nice part
felt bad for shilpa
so riidhima is gonna do something to make arsh together
lov
ria

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anusha

@Laddoo.Phaddoo

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#688

ATTENTION ALL THE WRITERS AND READERS HERE!

First of all i would like to thank each and everyone of you who made this fic reach more than 100 pages thanks alot guyz its ur love for ArSh that made it possible:) and now coming to the point i want you all to go through the above points-

1.Whoever writes any part on this fic or comments plz do make sure you dont bash any character as i dont want this place to get a warning..iam saying this coz earlier i have seen something like thi shope the same thing wont be repeated.Whther u make Ridhima positive or negative character here there is simply no need to use offensive words for her or bash her.

2.Strictly refrain yourself from chatting here please.Its an earnest request.

3.If any reader comments here saying something like ishikavirani did plz dont jump onto her in this manner.I know u all love ArSh and thats why we all are here but we must know what the truth is...so before replying to him or her try to behave politely with her...

4.Lastly i want to kno wif all of you want me to make anoder thread for this fic or not:( coz i hardly see any writers contributing here..trust me this place is open for all so i expect those who love arsh will write parts here even if its a small scene:( do let me know what u all feel...

Thank sfor listening to my banter:|love ya all
-laddoo(anu)

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nightstar

@nightstar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#689

oi laddoo great part...

regarding new thread...i wd love to read this story further, but i cant promise any parts...so now decide..and u r ryt, we hardly get much updates here

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Neha

@neha-rockss

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#690

momma...🤗 d part ws good yaar...dont always underestimate yurself 😛 nd by d way...all d writer here r awesome ...👏 ritu...meru...anu...rida...mirchi(rofl)...neha...nd my dear lazy momma ... well i wud do a detail comment as nd wen time permits :P but i luv dis FF... ARSH was my fav couple...so dis is evry dear to me 😳😳😳 nd congrats on passing 100pgs ...yu guyzz rock nd so does ARSH 😎 i want ander thread too...🥱🥱🥱 @ishika...heyy sorry i didnt mean to be rude but yur words were very twisted 4 ne1 to react ...i appologise if yu felt bad dear... PS...DERS A OS COMPETITION HELD BY TT ON FB Y DONT YU PPL PARTICIPATE IN IT??? ITS A AWESOME OPPURTUNITY ND YU GUYZZ R GOOD WRITERS ...SO GO 4 IT 😳😳😳