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Posted: 14 years ago
PART: 4

After giving big frown
SHE started drinking……….there was no escape………at least not from this THREE………SHE had no choice but to finish the juice………once SHE was done
SHE put down glass on table which was on center and turn around giving NOWITSMYTURN look……..while crossing HER hands……… These when TWINS finally realize that THEY WERE IN BIG BIG……I MEAN VERY BIG TROUBLE……… Mansi and Meet both look at each other and then back to their MOM……waiting for HER to expose………and they were right

SHE
open her mouth to say something………but before words could come out SHE heard a motherly voice calling HER……n…….SHE turn…….finding the one person for whom SHE did and still would do anything to keep single most tear away from HER……..was standing in front of HER…….crying like small child

SHE
couldn't see the person in tears…..how could SHE…….after all THE person was on one else but her DM……. yes She was Her DM ……. Nothing could broke that relationship SHE share with DM…….nothing…..not even HIM

This is when…..i saw HIM……our eyes met…….i felt connect a strong pull toward HIM…….i wanted to look away I couldn't……….i could hear my heart skip a beat…….strange I thought…… after TEN long years……..He had same affect on Me….. How could that be possible……..i try to read HIS face, expression to see HIS reaction on seeing ME ……… I could see none………it was blank…….there was no emotions…..not anger…not annoyance……..definitely not happy. …. I smile inward……of course….. WHY would HE be happy to see ME……. But HE was clam……while others were had shock expression………. I know WE hadn't seen each other for decade but there was always chance 1 in million to run into each other……after all its small world…... it least HE would have been surprise……even after with blank face…….

Those brown eyes were piercing through me…..touching my heart and soul ……bringing out emotions that were long buried or should I say HE killed them himself by those words ……I wanted to run to HIM……hug Him...KISS him………… but next second past voice echoed…….
I DON'T LOVE YOU……SUNA TUM NE………NAHI KARTA TUMSE PYAAR ……..and the pain of past come along with it……….and that's what cause me to look away from HIM……. Which I would have never even imagined to do before ……I ignore HIS present….

GEET self talk
: nahi GEET……..HE made HIM self clear ……..HE DOESN'T LOVE YOU……..DUS saal pehle…….bhol gayi woh DIN……..when YOU were bagging…..screaming ……..your lungs out ……..telling everyone YOU can't live without him……….bhol gayi woh takleefe……who aanssoh..…kesse bhol sakti hai…woh saab..….woh raate when you crave to be in HIS arm……..woh lamhe when YOU needed HIM the most……HE wasn't there….…how could you GEET…….how could you forget those TEN long years of pain, suffering, loneliness……….nahi kuch nahi bhuli MEIN……. . As I turn I saw DM waiting for ME with tears in

DM:
GEET………said while walking toward ME
I smile hearing DM say my name……. with love and motherly affection exactly same way she use to say before……….DM……I said as i run to her hugging her🤗………I wanted her to stop crying as I was about say something……..i heard her talk

DM:
bhagwan ka lakh lakh sukhriya……..ke aap Zinda hai……..aap ko pata nahi……..hume kitne khushi huve……….aapko yaha dekh ke……hume toh laga ke aap---- she pause as if she didn't want to even say what she was thinking…..thank you bhangwan…….. as WE broke out from hug and she kiss my forehead…… I was still confused as why was DM saying all this…….. but before i ask….. I wanted her to stop crying……..as she shouldn't be taking too much stress it was not good for her health…….i wipe her tears and made her sit down on nearby sofa……. Placing myself next to her

GEET:
ssshhh DM……Please stop crying………Please its not good for ur health……stress is not good for you…….after hearing me say this…….she gave out small chuckle

DM:
tum nahi badli GEET…….itne saalo baad bhi aap ko yaad hai……she said while taking my hand into her hands

GEET:
smiled weakly…….and said …….AAP bhi toh nahi badli na…….and place my other hand on top of her hands……we both smiled

DM:
hum aapse naraz hai GEET……. Uss din aap bina bataye kyun chaligaye…….humne kaha tha na aapse hum sab thik kardege…….. aapko humpe vishwas nahi tha kya

GEET:
aisa nahi hai DM……. par uss din ke baad mera yaha reha bhi toh thik nahi tha……. Kiss rishte sai rehti main yaha

DM:
humari beti ke rishte sai……..kya humare sirf wohi rishta tha GEET 😔

GEET:
par ab iss sab ka koi faida nahi DM……I give her assuring smile….. to make her understand that it was not her fault…..what ever happen was written in her destiny …….and …….she had accepted that……yes it wasn't easy……it was really painful…..it hurt a lot……it was unbearable….it killed her…. to accept that everything she thought was her wasn't her…….HE who gave her family, love , relations…..and..…took everything away from her……HE took away her identity…….her reason to live…..broke all the promises ……..leaving her all alone…..and she still don't know what her fault was……..this is one thing that made it really hard for her to accept loneliness……...yes it wasn't easy to live alone...… but she had for her ANGELS……..she had to accept her destiny …….. Can anyone fight their destiny????….. maybe there are some who can but SHE wasn't one of them…….. Her thoughts were once again interrupted

Voice:
GEET……..she heard

GEET:
VICKY…….. I just just stood up to walk to him……..but next thing I know was…….vicky was hugging me literally chocking me……..i couldn't breathe 🤢

GEET:
Vicky …….relax…….i can't breath 🤢……I manage to say don't know how
He let me go…..that was must better I thought…….before I could breath normally again…….i found myself again in vicky's arm………thank god this time he didn't chock me to death

Vicky:
I can't believe this……its like I'm dreaming seeing you alive and talking……I missed you…... I m so happy….. From his voice I could see he was so happy to see me………but wait a minute…….. whats up with zinda and alive thing……..i need to know

GEET:
I'm so happy to see you to Vicky…..i also miss you…….par why are you taking like I was supposed to be dead……..and you all are seeing me alive……..it's like you all are more shock then surprise to see me……. Im confuse 😕

VOICE:
because hum sab ko laga tha ke tum khair---- 🤔

That was differentially DJ……..n I was right……..

DJ:
he came forward and gave me warm hug🤗…….and said…….. Miss you………. You don't know how happy we are to see you

GEET:
not everyone…… I murmur looking straight to HIS eyes……..i could tell HE did read my expression when I said that…….but now I could see some emotions……it was pain……like HE was hurt but……..WHY would he be……..after all wasn't HE the one who didn't want me in His life……He should be happy………that I accepted truth…….then WHY is HE hurt
I heard cry………..ohhh nooo Pariii

GEET:
hug Pari and says…….. Pari……..tum roh kyun rahi ho 🤔

Pari:
getting out of hug……..ab main roh bhi nahi sakti……..nahiii 😭

GEET:
give her URSODRAMAQUEEN look……..tum na bilkul nahi badli……

Pari:
what do u mean?...ha sirf tum badal gayi ho 😡

GEET:
take a deep breath……she knew Pari very well……..n said……Pari sweet heart mera matlab voh nahi tha

Pari:
still crying……..toh phir 😕

GEET:
main----………then she notice something and says Ofcourse……hai babaji…...why didn't I see that before

GEET:
OK baba ………IM SORRY……. Thik hai………Please muje maaf kardo……holding her both ears

Pari:
Nahi …….. turns her head other side n continue her crying session 😭

Geet looks at Vicky for help but he gives her don't look at me look……(poor Geet)

GEET:
fine…..tell me what did I do wrong? That ur so angry at me😕

Pari:

GEET:
Pari ………Please ……ur my sweet little cousin na…….toh bolo PLZ……..makes baby face😳

Pari:
APNEMERISHADIMISSKARDI………said while crying

GEET:
KYA?????😕

PARI:
yeah……..still nowhere near stopping crying

GEET:
Pari…. yeh I didn't get a word vala "KYA" tha🤪

Mansi and Meet giggles……but were soon stop by geet stare 😡

Pari:
oh…….forgot that she was crying😆

GEET:
yeap…….so what were u saying?...this remind Pari that she was still crying

Pari:
woh…..n……cries 😭

GEET was losing her patience and looks at Vicky again for help but was greeted with disappointed as He refuse to help her…….. of course why would HE help her…….. who wants to get on wrong side of his wife…..not just wife… its PREGNANT WIFE... we are talking about

GEET:
Pari ……PLZ stop crying…….sweetheart ……..its not good for U and BABY's health………n……make her sit on sofa…….once they get settle……..geet continues……..AB bolo what did I do wrong?

Pari:
AP ne meri shadi miss kardi 😳……..said innocently

Everyone:
WHAT😲

Vicky:
tum iss liye itna roh rahi thi 😡…….(poor guy couldn't digest what he just heard)

Pari:
tume woh itni si baat lag rahi hai…….n……..start crying again 😭

GEET thinks no not again…….. …….she already had enough…..she can't take this anymore….. (poor geet has no idea……ke abhi toh yeh suruat hai……..just a trailer …….picture abhi baki hai….woh bhi kafi hours ki)😆

GEET:
Vicky …….yeh bahut badi baat hai…..tum chup raho………giving him please keep-quit-and-let-me- handle-look

GEET:
I'm really really SORRY……….ki……. maine tumhari shadi miss kardi……..(controlling her laugh)……aur tum joh saza doh woh muje manjur hai…… thik hai……khush

Pari:
(weeps her tears and says)………SORRY accepted……..aur aapko shadi ka video dekhna padega aur usspe comments bhi dene padege………. Woh aapki saza hai…….agar manjur hai toh SORRY is fully accepted

GEET thinks Pari bilkul nahi badli……..pagal…….but innocent si meri cousin…….. khud bachi hai aur ab usse baccha honevala hai………. Babaji Vicky ki madat karna

GEET:
ok ……..muje saza manjur hai….. happy 😃

Pari:
more than anything DI 🤗……….n hug geet happily…….everyone smiles but there is still someone that was waiting to meet geet with her share of complains

GEET:
Meera DI……..she walks toward her and hug her

Meera:
Muje bhi tumse baat nahi karni………chod muje…..mein hu kon teri 😡…….gets out of hug

GEET:
smiles……. AP meri DI ho 😳…….giving her side hug

Meera:
itne saal baad DI ki yaad aye 😡

GEET:
aisa nahi hai DI 😳

Meera:
toh phir kessa hai geet……bol 😡

GEET:
I did miss you…….trust me I really did…….n…..cries 😭

Meera:
I'm sorry geet mein mazak kar rahi thi……..Please don't cry……warna mein bhi roh dugi ……..n…..weeps her tears………both sisters hug each-other and Pari also joins in soon…..they share warm big sisterly hug and everyone smiles looking at their love……even after decade there are still the same

Meera:
GEET yeh kaun hai 🤔……..pointing to young man standing next to Mansi and Meet

Precap:
Who Is HE? 🤔
Edited by komlika - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow so pari meera & geet
are sis cousin interesting
pari pregg
me wonder why they think
she was dead another mystery
love dadi & geet conv its like
mother & daughter talk
so sweet of dadi
love inner talk of geet
it sounds like maan didnt love her
but let me wait for flashback
what happen to them
its sounds like geet was so
close to all khurana family
she won there heart
the man can be her friend
love it each part
lovely character
ur damn good at suspense
my pyari beti
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thank yu my beti
keep the good work
i miss my two adorable twin
i'll wait next part
Edited by simi91 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very eager to know who is he????????????????
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesomeee mystery queen
gud job
luved ittt
n waiting as 2 who is HE n hw meet n maansi knows geet n HE whn all think geet is dead
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Posted: 14 years ago
just finished reading all the parts...pls add me to ur pm list...
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Posted: 14 years ago
gr8 update...
some things got clear/...
like they were thinking she was dead...n she has no idea y they were thinking that...
n the mystery behind twins knowing her is still there...
n of course ...who is he??
continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
brilliant part. loved it. again suspense.
loved geet- dadi conversation and scene.
loved geet- meera and pari bonding.
pari is pregnant.
now who is he?
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!...
loving the suspense u r forming!...
BTW congrats.. u became Rockerz🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
priyaaa
I loved it i loved it i loved it🤗
it ws lovelyyy 👏
waiting for next paart
cont sooon😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

great update

Suspense,suspense,suspense!!!!

it sounds really mystery!!!

Y they were thinking Geet is dead???

How come Geet and Meet-Maansi are related???

How is he???

itna suspense,chakkar arahe ahi!!!

but love the update,lovely!!!!

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