(MG) Two Angels FF Part: 6: 11/25/11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Disclaimer: I have read n still read many FFs on Maaneet'' if my story
does reflect any of others writers work(s)''... "It would only be UNINTENDED''.. I NEVER NOR I WISH TO COPY ANYONE WORKS'.. BUT IF IT DOES PLEASE
LET ME KNOW BEFORE TAKING ANY STEPS''.. THANK YOU 😳


FOR MUSKAN (MUSKANp):'.. DON'T SUE ME FOR USING NAMES (MANSI AND MEET)''..
IM JUST INSPIRED BY YOU''..😆

Part: 1

KHURANA MANSION

Morning at 8:30

A smartly dress man walk over to dining table where his family was
waiting for him


Man: good morning
everyone 'N'.. Walk toward two
particular chair n bend kissing their forehead one after another''.n'.said

good morning sweethearts


Girls (unison): good
morning Papa'' with big smile 😃


Man walk over and takes his seat across from two beautiful angels'.yes
thts what he called them Angels'. HIS ANGELS''. Wait a minute Maan thought''
where did "HIS" came from... kash yeh MERE ANGELS hote''..par woh''.his
thoughts were broken when he heard his DADI called him


DM: Maan bte'..kya hova''..kaha
khoye hai aap 😕


Maan comes back to reality


Maan: kuch nahi dadi''.aap
kuch keh rahe the''.he ask changing topic


DM: ha'.woh aap ko yaad
hai na ''.hum picnic pe ja rahe hai aaj?


Girl 1: really DM


Girl 2: nahi DM '''bas
aveye hi keh rahi hai'''hai ki nahi''said
sarcastically


Tht sentence remind everyone of HER'' the exact words''.she would have
said if she was-


Girl 1: very funny MEET 😡


Girl 2: I know tht MANSI 😈


Mansi: don't get me
started on that 😡


Meet: like u need anything
to start on 🤪


Mansi: Meet😡


Meet: Mansi😡


Mansi: give me some
respect''..Im older than YOU''.stretching
word YOU'..to make her point


Meet: yeah''. N'..looks
at her watch ''.saying exactly 3 Minutes''.now
she stretched "3 MINUTES" ''. To make her point


N everyone on table gave them'''.there they go again look 🤪


When nothing (not DADI, not VICKY, nor DEV, nor MEERA, PARI didn't even
try) could make them stop''so finally'MAAN decided to intervene


Maan: girls


Mansi and Meet didn't stop 😆


Maan: girls


Nothing 😆


Finally he lost it n yelled ''.GIRLS


Mansi and Meet: WHAT''.they
snap back unintentionally


Hearing girls snap back at Maan ''..everyone look shock''..including
MAAN himself 😲


The silence took over until they heard guards yelling at someone to
stop''. More like running after intruder to stop from entering Mansion without
permission'''but the intruder was screaming more like calling out loud some
names and in no sense to hear anything'..
and definitely not in sense to stop from entering into Mansion regardless who
was chasing''.As intruder approach closer the names became clear''.


Intruder: MANSI ''..MEET''.almost scream entering dining hall area'''
giving everyone shock of their life'''


Mansi and Meet: OOOHHH''.NOOO'''MOMMM
🤢'''.THERE COMES ANOTHER SHOCK for
everyone 😲

Please leave comments... if u want me to continue or not...feel free to say anything and everything ...bc everything is Welcome 🤗

Any suggestions or requests are also welcome 😃

Part: 2---- Page 4
Part: 3---- Page 10
Part: 4---- Page 17 + PM list + CS Pics
Part: 5---- Page 21
Part: 6----- Page 26

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sanu3108 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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priya ... give it a title .
mchopra thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priya: lo ji ek mystery solve nnahi hui ek aur suljhao..i will be waiting for more..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4
Awesome start.
loved it.
continue soon priya .
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Posted: 14 years ago
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fabulous Start
Haha luv the twins
Du PM me plz
Cont soon Xx...





Edited by MaaneetLuverr - 14 years ago
nan_10 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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intersting start
pls do PM me
continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Congratulations on the FF
The start was amazing.
I loved the way u asked Muskan not to sue.😆
Maansi and Meet
Cute names and girls.
The whole family is there
They are not able to control the twins
They must be cutie pies.
Missing Mom
But you gave her a grand entry tooo
and stopped.
We will keeep guessing till you
update next.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Loveeee the starting!!!
Mystery hi mystery hai!!
Continue soonnn.
Add me in ur pm list!



Fatima
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Posted: 14 years ago
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well I am sueing u!!!
how dare u😡😡😡
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
ok joke apart
as far as maansi & meet are not negative I am sparing u😳
lekin lag tha nahi hain..so be ready to face the ANJAAM😡
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
teehk hain teehk hain...
coming back to the update...
wonderful work dear.. lovingg the use of simplies..
BTW.. I used to do it in PKE...😲
ok woh mera patened nahi hain.. I remember geet.a 's FF used to have it..
loved her work...
looks like I am talking every thing but the FF
i am too much drunk on Maan today..kusty fight has taken over my senses😳
☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️
wonderful work
👏👏👏👏👏

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Priya.. NICE!!!
Ek aur mystery...main kal se muski ki mystery par apna maatha peet rahi hoon aur tune dusri shuru kar di....
But lovely start...add me to ur pm list 😳

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