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Posted: 14 years ago
loved the update...
wow maaneet doing combination of all oops that wud set the stage on fire dear...
glad that geet knows abt his past and didnt make it an issue...
oops he slipped it abt double dates...
cant wait to c more maaneet moments
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ritzy09

Chapter 22 ' Dinner

Four of them reached the disc at 10:00 PM. They first settled for some light dinner. They ordered pasta with mocktails for ladies. Adi was on call so took coke whereas Maan decided to take a Beer to enjoy odd day of freedom.

After dinner, Adi and Pinky went for dance while Maan and Geet still sipped on their drinks.

Maan - "They have hit off really well. I am glad as this will avoid any awkwardness on our double dates'I mean outings"

Geet got a shiver hearing the word date but she chose to let it slip for now' "I know'you know Maan it's a good idea'frankly speaking Pinky is a very nice girl but I am also little worried. She is very innocent and this is the first time I am seeing her so comfortable with a guy"

Maan ' "Don't worry'Adi is also a very nice guy and a perfect gentleman'he is quite reserved and shy when it comes to girls. Take it from someone who has known him pretty much whole life'if it happens, Pinky will be his first girlfriend"

"Sachi"

"Muchi'meri tarah nahi hai woh" Maan joked.

Geet could see through his joke and understood his apprehension. She kept her hand on his - "Kyon un baton ko yaad karte ho'bhul jao'waise bhi you never lied and cheated'you had fun but the important part is all the parties involved knew what it was. I know you are very responsible and you always were. I trust you and waise bhi you don't look nice with that khadoos expression on your face"

Maan was really happy to hear this from Geet. Her hand on his felt like the most assuring touch in the world. Her words were like a medicine assuaging the guilt and insecurities he felt because of his past. It meant a lot that she trusted him to this extent and he promised himself that he will never break her trust. He will break himself but never her trust.

"Main khadoos hoon"

"Aur nahin to kya'lekin ache wale khadoos"

"Yeh kya hota hai"

"Bas hota hai'mere ache khadoos dusht danav"

Maan smiled inwardly at the antics of his lady love. He just wanted to take her up in his arms and feel her close. He finally gave into his urges.

"Hmmm'.how about a dance"

"Sure"

(Guys don't be disappointed'but please this is a disc and disc usually plays peppy numbers and not slow romantic ones'who bhi hoga'pakka'bas abhi nahin"

Maan held Geet's hand and moved on the dance floor. A new number started ' "Do you love me" by contours and used in dirty dancing movie. (Guys if you haven't seen the video please click this link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aCioEEHmHA0

You will get what I mean'sorry I don't know how to embed videos. If some one can tell me I will edit the post and do it)

Maan and Geet looked at each other.

"What do you think senorita'can you do justice to this song"

"Are you challenging me'I am a very accomplished Salsa and Tango dancer"

"Achaa'to let's groove baby"

Saying this Maan held Geet and they started a really fast paced couple dance mixing tango, salsa, foxtrot and swing dance moves. Maan twirled Geet and then placed his hands on her waist doing a twist. Geet felt the current flowing through her body. She felt sensations she had never felt before. His mere touch was melting and molding her like putty. She looked up to meet Maan's eyes which were totally lost in the heat of the moment. He was as affected if not more.

He then bent her backwards and she slowly slipped in between his legs. Now she was behind him. Man turned and jerked her again so that she was almost bent on his thigh. Maan was on a new high and he felt as if he was on a drug. They continued with the complex moves which allowed them to feel each other's passion. They touched each other with so much vigor that both could feel each others every curve and muscles. (Guys please see the video and imagine a little less wild form)

By now, a small gathering had collected including Adi and Pinky watching them dance in perfect harmony. When the dance completed, Geet was flushed with passion. She just hoped that it will be attributed to the high energy dance they had just finished. Her cheeks were red. Maan had a slight sweat on his forehead and people hooted and clapped.

They took a slight bow and moved back to the seats. Maan steadied his thunderous heartbeat which was soon replaced with concern "I hope that was ok'I mean you are still recovering"

"I am perfectly fine'as a matter of fact after a long time I feel so alive'Thanks Maan'it was really good and you are a very good dancer yourself"

"You are most welcome madam'I am at your service. Music used to be my life and I should thank you for bringing it back"

It was quite late so they called a night. They dropped Pinky first. Adi walked her to the door. After 20 minutes, Maan had to honk ' "Saari baatein aaj hi kar loge kya"

Pinky blushed. Adi wished her good night one more time and walked back to the car.

They reached home and Adi left soon. Geet started going upstairs to her room. Maan held her hand. Geet looked at him with questioning eyes. Maan slowly brought her hand to his lips and placed a small kiss.

"Good Night senorita"

"Good Night" Geet replied shyly.

Maan reluctantly let go off her hand and watched her till she went inside her bedroom and closed the door.

Maan sighed and thanked the light breeze which he faced towards walking KH.

Four people lay in their own beds dreaming new life full of love and hope.


Hmmm...loved it 😊 Still imagining them dancing together 😍 The next kiss has got to be more romantic please 😉 Please update soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update
luved it
do continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing part...i could imagine them dancing on that song...its so erotic n sensual,,,,,continue soon n thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow lov it...
do continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Ritzy thanx for PM...net was not working...so I read all parts from 19 to 22 today...

Maan and parents shifted...and what a wonderful surprise every body got...u have portrayed Geet's character in ur story as Maan's character in GHSP.

Both are not sure about each others feelings...and Maan to Delhi aate hi badal gaya...khadoos se despo ban gaya...good promotion.

Ab jaldi se love confession kara kar kuch passionate scenes le aao.

Very beautiful updates..👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome, beautiful, brilliant part.
loved it.
loved maaneet scene.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
really cute... especially adi and pinky...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome job!!! thanks for the pm! plz update soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome ... superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...

kya yaar .. they are not staying in the same house ...

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