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Durga

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Posted: 14 years ago

#631

wow awsome one yaar...loved the ending

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#632

I loved the ending. Hm...ideas...

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Sabmeratu.

@Sabmeratu.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#633

awesome ending

luvd this FF

glad dat maasi-ji finally forgave maan

gud dat nandini spoke against the family

finally maaneet hav became one

Thx 4 the PM Xx...

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Deepa

@spvd

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#634

part 20
wow very nice...
all is well...
they are now one...
liked the story...

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Nazma 'Imran Khan' Majeed

@Nazmaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#635

aww i'm going to sooo miss this FF...
i was confused as to seeing this FF finshed...

but it ended in a good way...
i think its was sooo cute theyt way nandini stuck up for maan...
maan nd geet started of as a plan but we are glad to see that this is a plan 4life and they will stick toegther forlife...
glad you ended this before GRUBBY DEV could come back...

Ideas...
erm i got an idea was going to use it for my FF but i think you can use it as i still have two ff's going on... :)
you could do a ff with geet having a twin sister...
both go to high school...
geet being the quiet one and her identical twin Muskann or whatever name you choose beeing the loud outgoing one...
geet's twin was with maan
she was supposed to go to the prom with him but didnt go because they had a fight so she sent geet to go as muskaann...the story can go ahead from there...
you can use this...
dont have an idea for a title... :)
let me know if you do use it xxx

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libra25

@libra25

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Posted: 14 years ago

#636

awesome...
congratulations for successfully completing this one...
all the best for the next one

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RageOfAnAngel

@RageOfAnAngel

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#637

Hey that was really nice 👍🏼

The story flow was good , nice mix of romance , revenge & drama ⭐️

Loved it & you ended it smoothly 👍🏼

for giving a wonderful story 🤗

Ideas 🤔 you could go for a college life story with Geet & Maan unable to tolerate each other due to their egos & huge opinionated differences & they meet after few years but as completely different & changed persons ...

What happened to them & now that they've met they feel something weird for each other 😉 ... that's 1 idea I just had while writing my comments ... would post more if I get anything else 😊

Thanks for the pm ...

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SOLACEofEYES

@SOLACEofEYES

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#638

Awesome part. Y the other half dicontinued by writers block.
Thanx 4 pm

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zaara2212

@zaara2212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#639

lovely ending 😛
sad you are ending though...tx for the wonderful ff...

if you write something new pls drop a pm..

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seemamary

@seemamary

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Posted: 14 years ago

#640

Fabulous Ending. As far as with your new maaneet ff you can start showing maand and geet married to each other for a 2 or 3 years and have a small cute baby girl called suhana and they are a happy family with dadi, dev and vicky but their lifes take a turn when they come to know that suhan is having some serious disease and wont be able to live for more than a year after coming to know about it maaneet are very depressed but actually they dont know that suhana does not have a problem but one of their enemy had planned all this to ruin them . I hope you like my suggestion.