ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

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seshatree

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Posted: 14 years ago

#441

that was simply superb and mindblowing...i cried...

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Papon Tabassum

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Posted: 14 years ago

#442

he looked surprised to see him, and she tried to hide the tears - but the knowing look in his eyes negated the need for that. His arms were around her before she knew it, soothing her, hugging her, giving her relief in his arms. She shed more tears, not finding the need to hide them anymore.👍🏼

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basicquestion1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#443

nicely done.

i've alot of catching up to do.

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Simran Kaur

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Posted: 14 years ago

#444

WOW. Loved it.
Plz dont take more time to update d nxt part. Thanks 4 pm.

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ruslana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#445

👏super

Edited by ruslana - 14 years ago

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#446

Marvellous ...simplr awesome ..have brilliantli penned down Geet's pain ...I'm really speechless ...It was really perfect one.

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mechantefille

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#447

Originally posted by: jyoti_l
awesome...

loved the way u portrayed her dance...one could actually feel the pain she was going through...

beautifully depicted...👏

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

Thanks Jyoti!!

Amruta 🤗...Happy Friendship Day !!...thank u for the lovely update and PM...it was so emotinal...felt so bad for Geet...could feel her pain 😭...and Maan's regret for his behaviour was touching...love the way u describe all the performances and the practice behind them...the poem was simply awesome 👍🏼...hoping to see a happier Geet soon...plz continue...TC

Thanks Ratna -that was sweet of u. it feels like ages since we've spoken. The poem was actually a song! LOL - but I love it.

Link for a maneet VM on that song!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PGqdqvAA-B4&playnext=1&list=PL245C657897609A02

Originally posted by: ninand
That dance, was so well written.. Maan's sensitivity in creating a genius performance like that.. ohmygod I have fallen completely for him..

Could feel a rock lodged in my throat while reading it💔.. simply beautiful.

oh n yeh.. my screen name is an acronym of sorts but you can call me by that.. it sounds pretty legit😉.. or simply G, Gee.. the kind..😃

Ninooo 🤗

Thanks...but Maan's reasons for that bit were a bit ulterior - if i may be honest. Fall away for Maan...!!

I cried a little too. *sniff sniff*

That. Was. Beautiful! Amazing. I've no other words for the update. *deep breath* the way you described Geet's pain was amazing. Breath-taking. This chapter sounds like a turning point. Can't wait to read more! :)

Thanks Krishna - am swamped with work so shall try my best to update soon.

Originally posted by: undisclosed
amru...i think this is the most touching description of a dance i have ever read...it was so beautiful...i could imagine it completely...and i loved the idea...thanks so much for the pm of the translation of the song...i totaly understood the meaning...and that vid of the dance group "silhouette" was stunning...it almost moved me to tears...i think you have written one of the most original FF's i have ever read on GF/FF...🤗

Syl, I can't tell you how much those words meant to me. Thank you ever so much. Where is the super-hug emoticon when u need it!

Only if I had read it yesterday, I would have had a sleep that was peaceful and calm.

It was beautiful! The song, the dance. The symbolic support, the unwitting acceptance of the same.

I am tongue-tied!

I can only keep on repeating this...it was beautiful!!

Jazzz...thanks so much. I kept thinking it could've been done better - but...but!!

Originally posted by: -dia-
Marvellous ...simplr awesome ..have brilliantli penned down Geet's pain ...I'm really speechless ...It was really perfect one.

thanks Dia - 🤗

Originally posted by: ruslana
👏super

Originally posted by: DDbiggestfan
WOW. Loved it.
Plz dont take more time to update d nxt part. Thanks 4 pm.

Originally posted by: MSgayatri
super update
simply luved it

Originally posted by: basicquestion1
nicely done.
i've alot of catching up to do.

Originally posted by: paponecon
.👍🏼

Originally posted by: seshatree
that was simply superb and mindblowing...i cried...

Originally posted by: Krishnaluv94
I cried a little too. *sniff sniff*

That. Was. Beautiful! Amazing. I've no other words for the update. *deep breath* the way you described Geet's pain was amazing. Breath-taking. This chapter sounds like a turning point. Can't wait to read more! :)

Yep it is indeed a turning point...wait n watch!!

Originally posted by: -Nilam-
wonderful update...totally emotional...
please continue soon...

Originally posted by: sowmyadharini
nice..

Originally posted by: nazsij
awesome...wow h much i cried,i don't know.oh my poor geet... She is suffering so much pain.no one is with her,alone.i can't ctrl my tears.sob sob...that last part where she was crying with nik's blanket ohh that was really painful.she deserve some happiness. happy friendship day.

Naz...thanks so much. Yes she does deserve happiness.

Thanks all of you so much. Me overwhelmed!! Shall try n update sooner!

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Water

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Posted: 14 years ago

#448

I loved the update...

love the care and concern that Maan shows...

Love his respect towards her and Vicky and how he described their pain too personal...

He was there for her in the shadows...in her shadows...

I loved how he took her in the arms in the end...and let her cry...and m so glad Geet has found someone to share her grief and pain...

Cannot wait for the next udpate...

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#449

Originally posted by: Water.
I loved the update...
love the care and concern that Maan shows...

Love his respect towards her and Vicky and how he described their pain too personal...

He was there for her in the shadows...in her shadows...

I loved how he took her in the arms in the end...and let her cry...and m so glad Geet has found someone to share her grief and pain...

Cannot wait for the next udpate...

Rachana,,,,,,🤗

thanks...why so late??

Shall try updating soon.

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

Trailblazer

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Posted: 14 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: undisclosed

amru...i think this is the most touching description of a dance i have ever read...it was so beautiful...i could imagine it completely...and i loved the idea...thanks so much for the pm of the translation of the song...i totaly understood the meaning...and that vid of the dance group "silhouette" was stunning...it almost moved me to tears...i think you have written one of the most original FF's i have ever read on GF/FF...🤗

Syl, I can't tell you how much those words meant to me. Thank you ever so much. Where is the super-hug emoticon when u need it!

leave it to my ex to come up with crazy algorithms...but no super-hug emoticon😆