ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146 - Page 39

Originally posted by: --Shika--

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Originally posted by: mechantefille

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Originally posted by: jazzerette

I love reading. Or rather being completely honest, I am obsessed by reading. So much so that many a times I would list reading as a talent when asked by someone.

And when I get to read something real good, worth-full, exceptionally brilliant, it makes me feel loved, blessed and not simply happy!! Does it make sense??

And thank you for making me feel so today.

It was awesome devoting a whole sunday to catch up with this story. The point where the story started, the past as splendid as any tale could be, having a life of its own and then the present and the promise to where it will head...wonderful!! Really well written amruta!!

At about chapter 15 I was already taken in by this story, so much so that the season finale made me wonder if Maan would ever measure up to Nik. The love she had was so complete it was cruel to have it snatched from her. Does it leave any scope for Maan to come in? He may fill the void of a companion but for the story to be Maaneet's his love has to be stronger, bigger and much more unique than Nik's and is that even possible? Or Maan will always remain in Nik's shadow.

I am really eager to see how you take this ahead.

Originally posted by: --Shika--

to read when am free obviously! :D

Originally posted by: mechantefille

Wow Jazz, I'm overwhelmed. Thanks so much. it means a lot coming from you.

You know when I read the stuff u n Deejay write, I feel like I'm the biggest novice that existed. I know I'm not that gr8 at it - but I have had this notion of a story in my head for so long now, I just have to get it out of my system.

I know the fans don't like the idea of Maan and Geet not together, but that's OK.

There are times when I'm lost in the world I've created, n I come up with the perfect words and the best possible lines to write, but by the time I get access to a pen or a computer, they're gone with the titular ashes...and I have to work my way through again with shallow replicas. So much for Wordsworth!! 😆

Yes Nik's love was deep - It was the perfect love - he was the perfect guy.

But such stuff doesn't exist in real life does it? And, even though I am the creator, I still feel Nik's existence in her life had a purpose. He had seen so much of life in his twenty odd years, that mentally he almost seemed like a wise Old Man. To me he did and he refused to behave in any other way.

I love Geet for being the human that she is and Maan as the guy trying to be better at every step of his life. The next update and the subsequent ones will be where the challenge rises - for me.

You know what - if reading is a talent - I say I have it too. I can read day in and out - spend sleepless nights pondering over a book and re-reading it. I've read a lot of FFs just to be lost in them and do it over again.

Wow - we should start a reading club on IF!! Or is there one already?

Anyway, I'm digressing - It remains to be seen how Maan's love comes into play. Neither is he like Nik, nor does he strive to be , nor will he ever try. The life Geet has with Maan - will be one of growth - not only hers - but his too.

The chapter titled - the bet had a deeper meaning - shall be explained in the further chapters. I hope I carry it off well.

Love

Amruta

amru...wedded life is full of shocks and surprises😆...oooh! i can't wait for the next update...i want to read your translation😉...