ManeetFF Dancing Frm The Ashes link on pg146

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#321

Great update! The way you described Geet's emotions was amazing. Can't wait for more! Thanks for the update!

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undisclosed

@undisclosed

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Posted: 14 years ago

#322

i loved the update amru...you paint such a clear picture with your words...geet's desperation...maans tenderness towards vicky while he took off his shoes and undid his tie...and i loved the teaser...meera and ajay's relationship i am eager to read more about too...can't wait for the next part😳

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Downhill

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Posted: 14 years ago

#323

hey amru...
finally the update ...it was damn good...
so geet is getting on to the nerves of maan with her indifferent attitude...
geet still pining for nik and finding solace in nik's belongings and his room...that ws damn sad...
meera and ajay...so now we kno that ajay is an urchin prob adopted by meera...
the precap is interesting...
keep writing
love u and ur ff
reva

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#324

Wow awesome so vicky is finally taking business seriously n Lund maans efforts to relax a bit n awesome tht geet is atleast dancing for nik bt missing nik vey much

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 14 years ago

#325

Amru great update again. Poor Geet still hurting for Nik but glad you showed that the room was taken away so maybe Geet will now move ahead slowly.

How nice of Maan to wanna learn sign language so he can communicate well.

I'm looking forward to reading Meera's story and most of all waiting for the Maaneet romance to begin 😍

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Tyro

@Tyro

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Posted: 14 years ago

#326

lovely part...

she finally broke down...crying ...

maan will now learn a new language...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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Teju

@--Zehnaseeb--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#327

Nice update Amruta.😊

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disha

@Conqueror212

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Posted: 14 years ago

#328

just came across ur ff... really interesting
plz do pm me... sent u buddy req...

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evasumi

@evasumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#329

Hey Amruta.

Thanks for the update..

Loved the way you made Geet break down with the tie breaking of Nick with apartment gone.. Yes she needed that. To cry and scream at the cruel hand of fate in her life... I think that will start her healing process..

love the Maan with his brotherly touch with Vicky..

expecting to see more of Vicky/Meera..

Meera and Ajay going to be too much for Vicky to handle..

Is Vicky going to talk to Maan about Geet and the tragedy striking her so that Maan would understand her better or Maan is going to find it on his own... or could we expect the show down between Maan and Geet pretty soon..

Let's see how you role that out... love eva