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nazsij

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Posted: 14 years ago

#201

so nik met an accident...ohh poor geet...maan and geet ko ek saath dekhna chahthi hu pur ithna selfish nehi ki ye soche nik mar jaaye and maaneet ek ho jaaye...nik kithna acha hai me nehi chahthi nik ko kuch ho jaaye...painful update...nik is a wonderful person...he is really calm person but where did he got this wild passion?now i hate this bike race...

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#202

Originally posted by: nazsij
so nik met an accident...ohh poor geet...maan and geet ko ek saath dekhna chahthi hu pur ithna selfish nehi ki ye soche nik mar jaaye and maaneet ek ho jaaye...nik kithna acha hai me nehi chahthi nik ko kuch ho jaaye...painful update...nik is a wonderful person...he is really calm person but where did he got this wild passion?now i hate this bike race...

Hmmm probably his upbringing by his uncle...who belongs to the Army...he raised Nik to live fearlessly.

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ninand

@ninand

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Posted: 14 years ago

#203

that was ... felt choked. utterly choked.

thanks for the pm. PLease post the next part soon.

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roopali

@rsroopali

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Posted: 14 years ago

#204

omg i was like wt d helll

no it cnt happen yaar

every time geet thinks she is finally setttleing with life

smthing tragic happens yaar

im feeling sooo bad for geet

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mechantefille

@mechantefille

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Posted: 14 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: rsroopali
omg i was like wt d helll
no it cnt happen yaar
every time geet thinks she is finally setttleing with life
smthing tragic happens yaar
im feeling sooo bad for geet

Hain naaa??!?!?!?!

And this time around it's a little too much!!

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Eva Shah

@maanujaanu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#206

so Nik's gonna die

n Geet gonna become sad again

sad update

do continue soon

luved d update

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evasumi

@evasumi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#207

Now Amruta... loved the update and your creativity... but yar...

Poor Geet she just came out of the guilt trip of loosing her mom and got reconciled with daddy..

Now Nick met with an accident... oh gosh!! what a turn of event...

I am sure you are not going to take Nick that easily out and bring Maan in.. You definitely have different plans... Well the story is getting more intrigue now..

emotional Geet... injured her love nick... lonely Maan... and desperate Dadima... hmmm let's see the next chapter... :))

Edited by evasumi - 14 years ago

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Hahaha! As if I'm going to tell you that!

@rahmona_pakswe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#208

OMG! What will happen now? Will Nik die or is there another twist? But poor Geet. She has already seen so much pain in her life; yet again she has to through troublesome time.

Great update Amru and I really like your writing style.

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Krishna

@Krishnaluv94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#209

I don't hate you! I feel sorry for Geet and Nik, but it's for the better, Maan and Geet. Waiting to see how you make this all work! :)

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Dee (Daisy)

@drdee142

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Posted: 14 years ago

#210

OMG Amru, this was such a dramatic update, I'm just still amazed at how beautifully you write. Your characterization and the trouble you take in detailing every situation and every emotion is just awesome.

Loved the update and no we don't hate you but I can guess the outcome of this and hopefully it would bring about something more wonderful in future.

Waiting impatiently for the Season Final 🤗

Love You 🤗