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Posted: 14 years ago
luved all d parts from 15 to 17 were just superb
excellent updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet dear... when will you start understanding Maan??? bechare ka yeh haalat nahi dekhi jaati😒
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh poor geet she is so much in problem how she will manage it

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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow one more update.
Thanks a lot dear.
Ani and Avantika are trying to get Maaneet closer
Talli still getting in between.
She must be feeling so bad getting snapped by Maan.
Geet's feelings are so true,It is very difficult to her to
imagine some body in shoria's place.
Maan would be the last person as she always treated him like her kid.
Maan's love also looks very intense I am sure he
is not going to give up and will keep persuading her.
Hope talli picks up the clues and leaves them alone.
Maan has to do a lot of hard work to get to Geet.
Hope he achieves what he wants.
Waiting as always for the next one.

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Posted: 14 years ago
wooow keya its barish of ur updates...loved all update...haayee i love diz maan...uff geet is jalli y she didnt understand his feeling 4 him bt frm her pov she's true she loves maan but not at that way..she still think dat maan is kid...n always want to maan n talli together uff...bt i know it will never happen...n all bcoz of our munda maan...maaneet r going to together...ani tell talli to go away frm maaneet lyf...bichara maan kya kya kar raha hai pyaar k chakkar me...hope geet will also feel sumthing 4 maan...n maan can win her heart...
waiting 4 nxt part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great updates. Loved it 😳
uff! Maan😆 im loving it 😈 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
KOSH
PART 18

sorry for mistakes
xxx



Geet "what type of behavior is this! We just came back!"
Maan "you have brought nothing!"
Geet "I don't need anything! Thaw why!"
Maan "I don't care!"
Geet "well don't! Drop me home maan! Now!"
Maan "I won't! Let's see what you do! & why you behaving so rude with me? What's my fault exCtly!" geet kept quit. Thinking what exactly to answer.
Geet "I am not! Tujce ho la gya?"
Maan "what's wrong with me? What's wrong with! In everything you trying to push talli in me! What do you think! I don't understand what she is trying to say! Why you doing this?"
Geet "I don't know what you are talking about!"
Maan "you know exactly what I am talking about!"
Geet "no I don't!"
Maan "geet... " he wispeared slowly. She refuged to look at him... "you are my wife! Then why you..." geet gave him one angry glare...
Geet "DROP ME HOME!" she said once in extreme cold voice!

Geet snapped out. Banging shut the door. Maan left confused in the car!
Talli ran to him...
Talli "where did you go!" maan was already angry enough with gets behavior.
Maan "what did geet tell you?"
Talli "what do you mean!"
Maan "about us!" talli felt touch with the word us. She blushed.
Talli "that we will get married!" she sighed & looked down...
Maan "& you believed the words from my wife's mouth!"
Talli looked at him instantly. Shocked.
Maan "what makes you think I like you! What made you think I don't love my wife." taalis tears was fighting to come out.
Maan jumped off from the jeep, holding Tallis hand firmly dragging him upstairs to his room. He took put his luggage again..
Maan "look! For past 10 years I have been writing letters to her... Each day!" he showed her... "gifts! Everything I have seen! Everything that I liked... I loved is always for her!..." he brought out bangles...
Maan "everything that is my is hers!... Everything...
Then how could you possibly think I will have any attraction towards you!"
Talli started to cry. Maan closed his eyes in frustration.
Maan "talli! You are my best friend! Not my love! I always loved geet. The day I even understood the word love it's always been geet. It's always her! She is my wife! I don't know what she thinks... But I believe she is my wife!"
Talli managed to get the courage to stand up & was about to leve.. "what if geet does not love you back?"
Maan "like she waits for bro! I will wait for her forever!"

Talli ran off...

Next day... The engagement day of ani. Everyone was happy while geet kept busy! Avoiding maan much as possible. While he took every opportunity to come close! The anger she just build inside him... It's only becoming wars.

Maan "muje tuche bohot bath karni hi!"


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Posted: 14 years ago

wow,i am the first
thank you very much
it was lovely👏👏👏
to be honest ,it was something that i didn't expect but as you are a wonderful writer,i will wait to see what you have planed for this beautiful story😉
waiting for the next part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i hope you'll update your other ffs too😳

Edited by bahane - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
finally maan told talli i am happy now...
r u updating again
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Posted: 14 years ago
KOSH/Aagosh
Part 19



Next day... The engagement day of ani. Everyone was happy while geet kept busy! Avoiding maan much as possible. While he took every opportunity to come close! The anger she just build inside him... It's only becoming wars.

Maan "muje tuche bohot bath karni hi!"
Geet "I am busy!"
Maan "now! Before I force you!"
Geet "enough! I have said not now!"
Maan "now!" geet gets irritated & leaves... While maan had his own plan to set. He dropped big tub of haldi on his white kurti! Everyone jumped as the steel tub touched the floor.
Maan "GEET! I need help!" everyone giggled as he did not ask for any one except her! At least how long she could ignore the fact he have some strong feeling for her! She is not blind! She is capable of understanding what he exactly want to say!
Geet smiles at arjun who was eying her to take maan way before he could create some hassle. She takes maan to his room.
Geet "what is it?"
Maan "mane kha na tujse bath karni hi!"
Geet "maan! Try to understand!"
Maan "no! I won't!" he hold gets arm tightly. She was shocked with his sudden anger & reaction!
Geet "leave me! What are you doing?"
Maan "what exactly you trying to say? & how long will you hide?"
Geet "I am not hiding from anything! What's wrong with you!" she snaps free her hand! "how could you think me as your wife! What's wrong with you!"
Maan looks at her in shock.
Geet "you are sick! How could you! We share a strong bond but not husband & wife! How could you possibly think like this!" a disgusting thought cover her face. "you have hurt me allot maan! You have given me allot of pain today! & you just lost the bond we share to! "I feel sick round you! How could you take me as your wife! I know you since childhood... I looked at you as shorias younger brother! I tool care of you as your guardian! & you think of me like that! How could you?"
Every word teared maans Hert apart.
Geet "how could you possibly think I would take you as my husband!"
Maan "you m..."
Geet "I had to! I had no other option! I was given one option merry someone in this family or leave! So tell me how can I leave shoria! How could I leave every second! Every moment I have spend with him! How could I. Yes I was selfish! But I did not want to merry dushant! I had to merry you!" geet had tears yet it failed to drop.

Maan "in your selfish reason you have forgotten that a heart falling for you!" maans word came back with same strength. No weakness. Like nun of her word have any effect. "what's my fault? Hu! What's my fault that the day I realize the meaning of wife... I only looked for your face! The day I understand the real word of love I only found your name!"
Geet left speechless! She could not believe he would say such words!
Maan "what's my fault that every second, every moment I only dream of you... Every letter! Every gift... Every object only reminded me of you!"
Geet did not utter a word!
Maan "what's my fault that a 14 years old boy lives in a hostel with the thought worry, he have a wife back home! His every thought... His every second passed by worrying how well you be! What you must be doing! That fact he have a wife-... Left him with a hope... Left him on a dilemma yet he fought to find his heart. Which only love you!"

Geet could never imagined this. She never thought about this at all! She done this to save her self yet she involved some one els as well...

Maan came close cupping her face... "I know you love shoria! I am not telling you to stop it! But you have you to move on with me!..." she just couldn't digest his world. Nun was making sense... Nun went in. He was dying for her... Only thing he could possibly think is her! No one els! But here geet barely could think any thing through!





Maan "love bro! Always do! I can live a life with you lost in his thought but I can't live a life you being lonely... With someone els!... I can't see my life without you." his lips was nearly there... Wanted to kiss her... But geet pushed him off & slapped him tight!
Geet "how dare you! How dare you maan! What are you thinking! I am your big brother wife!" maan did not like the slap or her word. He pushed her to the wall...
Maan "you are my wife! Only my! & the thought you talking about... Why is it disgusting? - why?" he shakes her! "- why is it disgusting? Answer me geet."


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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago

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