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Posted: 14 years ago

KOSH/aagosh
PART 17

precap changed...😛
soxy for mistakes...
xxx


Maan "tu tik toh hi na!" geet nodes in order to free her self. After few second she just walks off with a uncomfortable smile while maan with a blush. He loved there closeness. He loved every second. He flows. Looking at geet. Hiding from her eyes.

Avantika "have you seen maan? everyone will be here soon!"
Geet "oh... Umm... I have seen him up on th..."
Maan "I am here mom!" he came & stood right behind geet. She felt the irritation. She was not sure what but did not like the touch at all! His broad chest was against her back. She moved. The feeling he have grown up & the feeling he holds for her started to disgust somewhere with in.
Maan "what's wrong?"
Avantika "you and geet needs to take ani for shopping!"
Geet "I am busy mom! Umm.. Why don't you take talli maan?"
Maan seems to notice her ignorance towards him. Something he did not approve or something he did not like. He wanted her full attention! Just him.
Maan "why? Why can't you come with me!"
Geet "I have allot of work!"
Avantika "don't worry! There Are so many people!"
Geet "what will I do in a shopping centre? I have nothing to buy!"
Avantika "you are getting home sick! Maan just take her!"
Maan smirks within. What a oputunity he thought. But talli do have to but in.
Talli "mujce bhi jana hi!"
Geet smiles.. "oputanity for her to bring them close!"
Geet "let's go!"

Ani made talli sit next to her at the back who made allot of hassle to sit next maan, but eventually knowing maan he shouted at her once & that was enough to get rid of her. Geet did not like that.

-Shopping-

Maans eyes seems to be only on geet who felt very uncomfortable. The look, the way shoria used to look at her. The touch the way shoria used to touch her! She did not like any. Partly because it's maan! Even in her dream she could not think like that way! & half was she never wanted to give shorias place to anyone!
Dushant changed but that took her long time to change him! If she did not stay in this house dushant had planed to ripe the whole family apart! & society gave her only one option merry someone in this house or leave! What she to do then! Dushant had whole plan to get rid of shorias sibling! Just to win her! Because he was blindly attracted. She had to merry maan! Yes there was her own selfish reason, in this way she would never have to get married or family member wont force her! But now why maan have to be so difficult!

Maan "geet! Look at this one! It will look nice on you." he stood right behind her with a sari. She could feel his breath on her neck... & reflection on the mirror!
Geet "I am ok!"
Maan "buy this!"
Geet "no I am fine!"
Maans observed her each angle lovingly. Like everything about her belongs to him... & her on him!

Talli ran towards them with a cloth... "maan! Look do you think this will look nice on me!"
Geet smiles.
Maan "talli! Ja! Just go!" he became irritated! He did not like any intifear at all.
Talli "ka maan! All the time you tell me to get lost!"
Maan "why can't you!"
Geet understood his rude behaviour...
Geet "why you talking to her like that?"
Maan "ae hamesha mera char kahata hi!"
Talli "if I don't who els will!"
Maan "talli! Last time! Get lost!"
Geet "enough!" geet roles her eyes & walks off! Flowed by maan then talli!

Ani "have you brought everything!" geet smiles...
Maan gives the sari that he brought for geet.
Talli "ae meri liye!"
Maan "why do you think everything I buy is for you!"
Talli "BCs I am the only girl!"
Maan "I am surrounded by two other where do you see your self as only one! & anyway I never brought any gift for you! Why should I now!" maan got p off with Tallis non stop bak bak! While geet & ani held there ground. Heart shocked. Talli would be in tears any moment.

Maan walks off...
Talli "idiot!"
Geet "chor na! He will be fine soon!"
Ani "no he wont! He will never be fine. He does not like you Talli!" geet gave ani a angry glare to shut up! Which works.
Talli "what do you mean! Geet be kha... He will help me!"
Geet "leave it! Let's go!"

As all 4 arrives home, everyone went off as geet was about to come off he started to drive the car & off. Not letting her to come off.
Talli looked confused while ani with a smile.
Talli "where did they go?"
Ani "wife hi... Nun of our business. His wife!"
Talli felt hurt.


Geet "what are you doing maan? Drop me home!"
Maan "no! You will come shopping with me! & in that you have no choci!"
Geet "what type of behavior is this! We just came back!"
Maan "you have brought nothing!"

next-?

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Posted: 14 years ago
wow!...i am the first one to comment and that too for the first time😃...i can't believe it!...yippee!...😃
awesome part!...
i still think that it's useless attepts of geet to unite maan and talli!...maan will never change his decision!...
continue soon!
Edited by sweet scorpio - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey,,,,,,,commenting after two weeks,,,sorry was out on a holiday,read alll the updates n they were tooo gud!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!loved d way the story is moving,,,hp geet also falls for maan pretty soonn,,,n thank u for the pms alsooo,,,continue soon,,,,me waiting
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Posted: 14 years ago
LOVED UR BACK TO BACK UPDATES...LOVED IT...BUT PLZ DO UPDATE ENIGMA...I M MISSING DAT...MADLY...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely updates...👏👏👏👏👏...thanks dear...

waiting for next parts😃of kosh and enigma
Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Lovely updates...👏👏👏👏👏...thanks dear...

waiting for next parts😃of kosh and enigma

plz update enigma too ...😊

Edited by fairyland_1234 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Gr8 update
Love how maan wants to drive away talli from himself
Glad dat ani is supporting maans love for geet
Cont soon Xx...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oh the story is shaping well...

loved Maan's possessiveness, hope Geet understands Maan's love for her
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank you very much
it was lovely and interesting
the geet episode was 😲😕but hoping to see some beautiful moments in your ffs😍
maan is trying and geet is denying ...
maan needs to try more😉
please update your other beautiful ffs( please siski too)😳
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update Safi...Maan now very well knows his feelings towards Geet but Geet still loves her dead husband...it is natural what she feels but she should know the fact that whatever be the reason...now she is Maan's wife and marriage is not a game.Slowly I think she should realize that she have to move-on.

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