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Posted: 14 years ago
THANKS TO ALL THE READERS OF MY SS FOR UR LOVE AND SUPPORT

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Part 28

geet got disappointed as she expected maan to come...she sighed and got into the car...after sitting in car geet closed her eyes thinking about maan...she didn't notice in which way the car was heading...finally car stopped...geet opened her eyes and got down...she got shocked...it was not the mansion...It was a new place where she had not been there before...

geet: ramesh...yeh tune kaha le aaya mujhe?

ramesh: madam maan sir ne hi kaha aap ko yaha le aane keliye

geet looked at ramesh in confusion...

geet: maan ne kaha?

Just then maan car arrived...maan got down and signaled ramesh to leave...maan came near geet...slid his hand around her waist and pulled her closer...geet lost herself in maan's touch...

geet: yeh kya hey maan...aap mujhe yaha lane keliye kyu kaha? (in a low voice)

maan kept his finger over geet's lips to stop her from talking

maan: tumhare saare sawal ka jawab miljayega...lekin pehle andartho aao

geet held maan's arms and went inside along with him...after entering the place...some people came and talked to maan...

maan: Is everything ready?

the people infront of maan answered "yes'...then in a small car like thing maan and geet reached another place...geet still looked at maan in confusion...on reaching the place geet eyes widened in surprise...after seeing ...a private jet...

geet: plane?

maan smiled...

geet: maan aaj thak mein plane ko kabhi bhi ithni nasdeek se nahi dekha

geet was getting excited like a child on seeing the plane...

maan: geet...ab andhar chale...

geet: maan hum kahi jaa rahe hey kya?..

maan: haan geet...kuch urgent kaam hey...

geet: oho maan..pehle batha diya hotha tho...kuch packing karlethi..ab mere paas koi kapde nahin hey

geet's words made maan to think in other way..and he mumbled ...uska zaroorath bhi nahi

geet: maan...aapne kuch kaha?

maan: haan...mein ne kaha ki ...waha jaake khareedhlenge

geet smiled and nodded...

geet: office ka kaam hey?

maan smiled naughtily...hiding from geet...

maan: nahi..kuch personal hey...

geet: personal...matalb..

maan sighed...

maan: geet...tum ladki ho yaa question bank...kithne sawal puchthe ho...ab bahuth hogaya...chalo andhar chalenge...plane mein baitke baaki baath katham karenge...

geet made a baby face and followed maan...on entering the plane...geet stood speechless...maan came near geet...

maan: geet...yaha baitke ke bhi plane ko dekh sakthe hey na...

geet was lost...she was not at all listening to maan...maan dragged her and made to sit...

geet: maan...iss plane mein koi aur kyu nazar nahi aa rahe hey

maan: geet...yeh humari jet hey...sirf hamari...

geet smiled and hugged maan...when plane was ready to take off...geet got scared and held maan's arm tightly closing her eyes...

After few min...still geet was closing her eyes...

maan: geet...geet...ankhe kholo...

geet: nahi maan...mujhe dar lag raha hey

maan: mein hu na geet...aankhe kholo...

geet slowly opened her eyes...maan turned geet's face towards window...after seeing down through the window...geet strated screaming like a child...

geet: maan..dekhiye na...kithne choti choti ghar hey...(in a loud voice)

maan looked at her childishness and smiled...after few hrs they reached their destination...

It was evening when they reached the destination...both maan and geet got down...geet was not having any idea about that place...the people around were also looking different...in her life first time she was outside of india...so she had no much idea of anything...looking at new place geet got scared and held maan's arm...maan slid his hand around her waist and pulled her closer near to him as a sort of assurance that he is there for her...geet felt safe in his arms...

then both geet and maan got into the car which was waiting for them...car stopped at a big hotel which was looking like a palace...geet was too tired to notice ...she felt weak and kept her head over maan's shoulder...

on entering the room...

maan: geet...jao fresh ho jao.. i will order something to eat...

geet: maan...mujhe bahuth neend aarahi hey...

maan smiled...

maan: achcha teek hey...so jao...

maan lifted geet in his arms and made her to lie on the bed...he kept caressing her head until she slept...then maan took his laptop and started working on it...

10 pm

geet woke up and looked around...and saw maan sleeping on the couch itself ..geet sighed and went near him...kept the laptop aside and kissed his forehead...maan slowly opened his eyes...and smiled...

maan: ek aur dedo na?

geet smiled and gave another kiss...

maan: yaha pe...(showing cheek)

geet kissed him on cheek

maan: yaha pe (showing chin)

geet kissed him on chin...

maan: yaha pe (showing lips)

geet came closer to give kiss...then suddenly she kept her hand in between saying..."nahi"

maan: koi baath nahi mein hi le letha hu

said these words he tried to catch hold of geet...but geet ran into washroom and locked it...

maan: geet darwaja kholo

geet: nahi kholungi

maan: achcha...teek hey...math kholo...

maan remained silent for some time...geet was confused...

geet: maan...maan...

but there was no response..

geet (monologue): yeh maan ithna achanak chup kaise hogaya?

geet then slowly opened the door and looked outside...suddenly maan came inside and locked the door...he then started moving towards geet...

maan: ab mein bhi dekhtha hu...tu kaise bach paogi...

geet couldnot look into maan's eyes...his intense looks were making her weak in knees...
she started moving back until she was stopped by wall...maan kept his hands on either side of geet blocking her...


to be continued...

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Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago




thanks 4 pm
cont soonnn
the precap me already
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update!!!
I wonder what maan is planning ?!??
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update. it is really good and geet saying that she didn't pack was 😆😆. omg aise lag raha hai that maan is on mission to finish the distances between them. but we all want that tooo😉

thanks for pm and pls update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update
so Maaneet reached their destination-SR
thanks for pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful update
Geet's first plane trip to her honeymoon was awesome.
i think geet is going to take along time to realize
given the kid she is.
Maan all naughty
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Superb...You gave me the inspiration to write...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome .. superb ...

thnx 4 d pm ...

continue soon ...
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Posted: 14 years ago
oooyeee terei..cliff hanger😉😉😉😉😉 Hmmm can't w8 for the next update😃

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