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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 12

rain was drenching them completely...slowly maans hands started to embrace geet...bringing her closer and closer...untill there is no space left for air...between them...the cold air now not at all bothering them...the warmth they are creating in each other...making them to move closer...closer...and closer...

Suddenly maan realized...he let go geet from him...geet came back to senses...she was about to run...when maan caught hold of her hand...

maan: ab keliye tumhe chod raha hu geet...bas kuch din ka baath hey...uske baad...mein tume nahi chodunga ...aaj ka hissa tho us din mein jaroor lunga...

geet cheeks were turning pink with every word of maan. she could not take anymore...she turned to him...

geet:ab sab kuch aap ke haath mein hey maan...all the best...ab tho andhar chaliye...

maan smirked at his wife naughtiness and followed her into the mansion

geet: eh lijiye...towel...aap change kijiye mein khana laga dethi hu?

maan: geet...raath 1 baj chuki hey...ab kya khayenge...? chodo na..waise bhi...mujhe bhooq nahi lag raha hey? aaj ithna khubsoorathi tho piya hey maine...(giving the same intense looks to geet)

geet blushed...

geet: waise bhi maan...aap kuch jyadha hi poetry boldhiya aaj...eh baathe bandh kijiye...change hoke neeche aayiye...no more argument ...ok...

maan: aapki hukum rani sahiba...(bowing his head)

geet smiled at maan's act and went to her room...

at dinner table

maan started shouting...

maan: geet!!!! aur kithna time lagega ...mein wait karraha..huuu

geet for first time came out of her room in white saree...with hair loose...

geet: oho maan...aap bilkul bachche jaise harkathe kar rahe hey...

maan who saw geet in white saree became speechless...he just kept looking at geet...almost touching her completely with his eyes...


geet felt restless with maan's looks...

geet: maan...plz aisa math dekho mujhe...

maan: kyun ?

geet remained silent...

maan: bolo geet kyun?

geet: kuch nahi...mein change karke atha hun...

said these words geet stood up...maan held her hand and stopped her...

maan: yeh kya hey geet...chuna tho mana kardiya...kya mein mere biwi ko jhee barke dhek bhi nahi saktha kya?

geet felt hurt with maan's words...maan understood hurt in geet eyes...

maan: mujhe lagraha hey ki tum change karna hi teek hoga...kyunki mujhme waise bhi controlling power kam hey...kuch aisa waisa kar baita tho...(giving intense looks)...geet tum jhao...change karke aao

geet was really touched by maan's words...she went to her room to change...

maan: jaldhi aao geet!!!

geet came back after changing...into a night suit...covering totally...

maan: waise bhi geet...tum har dress mein khubsoorath laghthi ho...hmm

geet: maan...ab bas bhi kijiye...

maan: geet aaj kya special hey?

geet: patha nahi maan...maine aaj khana nahi banaya...nakool ne banaya...

maan: oh no...🤢(after seeing the items)

geet: kya hua maan...aap ka chehra kyu uthar gaya?

maan: geet!!!! iss items ko khane ki bina mein bhooki rehjatha...kya hey yeh...karela...sab kuch karela se bana hua hey? kal aane dho nakool ko...daadi jaane ke baad sab kuch apna manmaani karne laga? geet mujhe karela se bahuth naphrath hey bachpan se...nakool ko yeh baath patha hey...phir bhi...aisa kiya...

maan was fuming with anger...

geet: (with a smile on face) maan...aaj nakool ko baahar jaana tha...isliye shayad urgency mein kiya hoga...chodiye na...mein aapke keliye kuch banathi hu...

maan: rehne dho geet...ab tum mere liye karogi...mein bus fruits se kaam chala loonga...

geet: maan...zyada time nahi lagega...boliye kya khana chahthe hey aap...

maan: rehne dho geet...

geet: nahi maan...meri maa kehthi hey ki...raath ko bhooka nahi sona hey...

geet felt sad about her mother...after coming to mansion...she didn't even once called home...due to anger of forced marraige

maan: achcha...(looking at geet)

maan saw hurt in geet eyes...

maan: geet kya hua?

geet: kuch nahi...

maan: ghar ki yaad aaya?

geet simply lowered her head...maan understood her situation

maan: geet! mujhe dekho...bas thni si baath...agar tum chahi ho tho...kal chandigarh chale?

geet felt relieved by soothening words of maan...

geet: nahi maan...uska koi zaroorath nahi...mein teek hu...bas thoda sa yaad aaya tha...ab mein teek hu...

maan: teek hey then...u sit here...i will make food for us today...

geet got shocked with his words...because normally in her family men will never enter kitchen also...and here maan is talking about cooking...

geet: aap khana banayenge?

maan: issme shock hone wali baath kya hey geet? khana hi tho bana raha hu...fikar math karo geet...mujhe khana banana aatha hey...

geet: lekin phir bhi...

maan: chup...ab ek aur shabdh nahi...maan singh khurana aaj apne biwi keliye khana banayega ...that's final...

geet: teek hey mr.maan singh khurana...(smiling)...kya mein aapki madath kar sakthi hu...

maan: zaroor karsakthi ho...khana banaane mein nahi...

geet: khana banane mein nahi? phir?

maan came closer to geet...held her by waist and almost in a whisper...

maan: mere paas rehne mein...


to be continued...






Edited by jwalamukhi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome updates
loved them all loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago

maan shooo sweet

of him
love maaneet scene
love it
brilliant update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thank yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Naughty naughty Maneet😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
awww that was sooo sweet.. keep it up.. ur doin an amazing job!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome...full romantic update...do continue soon
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wow maan very very
naughty kya baat hai .
geet pati jarahi hai
lage raho
pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Haayyyeee mein mar jaawwwaaa the last line was like wow!!!!! Maaneet r surely getting naughty😳 Me like...do continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... cute and naughty maneet

lovely update
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Posted: 14 years ago


Dreamy 😍Maan Singh Khurana , the romantic 😳
I wonder Geet kab tak apne aapko control kar payegi 😆
Nice moments 😛

Loved it & thanks for pm ...😊

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