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Posted: 14 years ago
that was sooo sweet!!!!
continue soon!
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Part 13

maan came closer to geet...held her by waist and almost in a whisper...

maan: mere paas rehne mein...

Geet blushed with maan words...

geet: maan agar hum aise hi waqt bathon se waste karenge na subha hojayega...ab yeh baathe bandh kijiye aur chaliye rasoyi pe

geet pushed maan into the kitchen...

maan: teek hey then...kya khana chahthi ho?

geet: kuch bhi chalega...

maan: pasta?

The word "pasta" created vomiting sensation in geet...she hates italian to the core...

geet: italian?

maan: mera favorite ...!. kyun...tumhe pasand nahi hey kya? (seeing the expression of geet)

geet : pasta...nahi maan...mein nahi kaa sakthi...

maan got disappointed...

maan: mujhe nahi patha ki tumhe kya pasand hey...tum hi bolo na?

geet: maan maine aapse kya kaha...?to make me fall in love with u...so...mujhe kya pasand hey...kya nahi pasand hey...aapko hi patha karna hey...in choti choti cheezo mein tho hi pyaar start hotha hey na? (smiling)

maan smirked at geet words...he came closer to her...holding her by waist...

maan: tho tum nahi bathaogi ki tumhe kya pasand hey...hmmm

geet nodded her head saying "no"


maan: teek hey math bathao...shayad tum bhool rahi ho...mein maan singh khurana hu...within 24 hrs i will find out about ur favorites and hobbies...

geet: dekhlenge!

maan: dekhlo...just 24 hrs...lekin ab keliye...kya khaoge?

geet: pasta

maan: pasta! lekin tune abhi kaha ki tujhe pasta pasandh nahi hey...?

geet: kisko patha...shayad aapke haath se bana hua pastha...achcha hoga...and i may like it..

maan : iss tarah ki baathe karke...why are u making me fall for u again and again...

geet cheeks turning pink with maan words...

geet: aap pastha banayiye...mein dining table saf kardethi hu...

After some time...

maan: Mrs maan singh khurana...lo...aapka pasta ready!!!!!!

geet: hmmm smells good

maan: taste tho karo...

geet: aap bhi ajajiye

Both maan and geet sat close to each other...serving each other...geet took first

maan: geet kaisa laga? (like a student expecting results)

geet for a moment closed her eyes...maan looked at geet confused...

geet: achacha hey maan...bahuth achcha..hey...aaj thak mujhe nahi patha ki pasta ithna achcha bhi hosaktha hey...

with those words of geet maan felt very happy...

geet: aap mujhe italian khana banana sikhana hey?

maan: zaroor sikhaonga...lekin free mein nahi...

geet: tho aapko fees dhena padega...?

maan: haan...waise fees tho mujhe chahiye...but not in the form of money...in form of...(looking at her lips)

geet understood maan intentions...she lowered her head being unable to resist his looks...

Both completed dinner...happily...

maan: tho dinner hogaya,,,mujhe neend nahi araha hey...kyuna hum koi movie dekhe...

geet: kyun kal aapko office nahi jaana hey kya?

maan: jaana hey...kya karu...neend nahi araha hey...pyaari biwi paas mein hey...lekin chu nahi deraha hey...kamse kam puske pass baitke movie dekhneko milrga na...

geet: teek hey...aap jayiye...isko saaf karke mein avunga

maan: mein madath karu?

geet: nahi maan..aap jayiye...bas thodasa kaam hey...mein karlungi

maan: teek hey...jaldhi aana

geet: hmmm

maan smiled and left...meanwhile after completing the work geet too reached hall

maan was sitting on the couch...with lot of DVD's in hand...

maan: kaunsa movie dekhna hey geet?

geet: DDLJ (excited like a child)

maan: DDLJ? mujhe laga ki hum koi english picture dekhenge...

geet: nahi...mujhe sirf DDLJ dekhna hey...(with pouting on face)

maan sighed...smiling at geet

maan: teek hey rani sahiba...aap ki hukum...

They started watching DDLJ...

Maan was looking at geet...who was enjoying like a kid while watching the movie...he was indeed lost in DDLJ...

Suddenly geet started singing loudly..."tujhe dekha tho..." with that maan came back to his senses...geet was so much lost in the movie...that she totally forgot about maan.

maan tried his best...but geet was lost in that movie...

mandira bedi scene came...

maan: wah! kya ladki hey...

geet who was lost in the movie...suddenly came back to senses...

geet: maan aap kuch kaha?

maan pretended that he was lost in beauty of mandira...intentionally he said

maan: kya ladki hey geet...iska naam kya hey?

that's it geet came out of DDLJ magic and was fuming at maan who was drooling (pretending) over mandira...

to be continued...



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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update.. gr8 plan maan.. d jealousy plan always wrk!! keep it up.. update soon!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
God bless Maan ... Geet sherni will not spare him for drooling over other woman 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
Achcha... toh Maan ab jalan wala chaal chal raha hai, par mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hai ki chaal ulta padnewala hai😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update
loved it loadz
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
Muahhh
Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow maan made pastra for geet and she liked it. hmmm like the idea of watching movie and making geet jeoalous😆.

nice update👏 and the way u r writing is very nice
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Posted: 14 years ago
love how the story
shaping up
maaneet moment so
romantic
love it
amazing update
pls cont soonnn
thanks pm
thnak yu so muchhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update!!!
haha maan mandira bedi !!! really?!?! lol
cont soon. . .
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Posted: 14 years ago
Lovely Update!!! Maan is surely getting naughty!!!😳 DDLJ...love that movie..great choice!!!😛 Please continue soon!!

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