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Originally posted by: -Aliya-

Rajeev continues to puzzle me and i am only waiting to see how you unfold this and how it will affect AR..

He is a mystery, and will probably to continue to be for a while. What I am hoping to achieve is that the readers might sympathise with him. Let's see...but for now, I can't reveal much :p


I could literally feel the excitement of the party coursing through the build up to the party. i love how you do that, make us tense to witness another interaction between AR especially since they are sharing fiery sparks between them even in their silence. I personally i agree with what Armaan said: Riddhima being shy and unknown to her own beauty only makes her even more beautiful. The little teasing session when the girls were getting dressed up and complimenting each other was so girly and cute. I particularly enjoyed the part when Muskaan brushed off the teasing about her tryna impress Rahul..yah yah she's good at being nonchalant about it but we know her true intentions. And Rahul definitely took the bait by being left dumbfounded when he saw her..i'm sure Muskan enjoyed seeing Rahul agape hehe.

Aww glad you liked the build up! I thought that sometimes silence can scream a lot of things. And in their instance, it was definitely screaming passion, want and love. I always thought about DMG, and I am glad you picked up on it! She was beautiful, and she never knew it! I think that's what pulled Armaan to her in the first place. She was conservative and completely different. So i am happy that you think I am retaining that in the fiction :)

Hahah that's a complete Muskaan thing to do :D Brush off Rahul and make it seem all nonchalant. Whereas everyone can see that she likes him :D Rahul and Muskaan were definitely another favourite of mine :)

Anjali and Riddhima''s interactions are so wonderful to read. it reminds me too much of their relationship during KaSh times. i love it! i am a huge fan of both Sunaina and Shilpa and so the combo of them in DMG was lovely for me and i love how your continuing that in your FF. I could literally imagine Riddhima's pout when Anjali kept tugging at her dress to emphasise the sexyness of it and Ridhima' nervously pulling at it hehe..cuteness. And then her horror at the thought of her pulling the pin right off if she kept fidgeting with the dress 😆

Awww glad you liked it! Yay! :D

I thought that the sisterly touch disappeared as DMG went on, so I wanted to make sure that it remains in the fic...through the smallest of gestures :)

The whole feminist battle that goes down between Raj and Anjali with Anjali glaring the defenseless man down and biting out her words at him was just hilarious to read. its so Anjali. She always was the feminist. I love how you caught that part of her character and brought it into your FF in such a clever and humouring manner. Atul just adds more to the scene by pitying the man knowing Anjali's temper when she's having her fits. hehe always the one to calm situations..and also save people from Anjali's claws i love how he took Raj away and yet still kinda also humiliated him with the sarcastic comments he made...and Ridhima watching knowingly hehe. Realy entertaining scene ya wrote there.

It is an Anjali thing to do, isn't it? She was always the feminist, not taking any crap from anyone. Which is why I thought it made sense why Ridhima was a bit timid whereas Anjali was a firecracker. They both complemented and completed each other :)

Hahah I loved Atul! I always thought there was more to him than just singing songs and being goofy. There definitely needs to be more to him for him to handle Anjali! Really happy that you thought I did justice to him in that scene :)

That little memory of Riddhima and her father was really heart-touching. Really great input of flashbacks at exactly the right places!

Thank you :)

Now Armaan and Riddhima. I was feeling the same sort of nervous excitement awaiting them to clash and when they did they weren't alone. i wonder what would have happened if they were alone..actually i have a feeling they might have a chance at bumping into each other alone in the next part..am i right in guessing?

Hahaha not revealing anything :p wait and watch :D

Anyway i love how Armaan was rendered speechless in seeing Riddhima in a light he never did - i'm sure he was even more shell-shocked seeing her that way more than the others considering he is the man in love with the woman and ofcourse its the natural tendency to be more fascinated in the man seeing his lady in different lights.

Aww thank you for liking that! I wasn't sure how to describe what he thought...so I am glad you enjoyed it :)

I swear i could feel the electricity between them as you described it. Really great use of description to make us feel the ignited passionate energy between the two even in the company of others, they manage to zone out into just the two of them. They're both so helpless in the attraction they feel towards each other: Armaan though didn't stop himself from appreciating her but the insecure girl in Riddhima managed to make her self believe he was mocking her feelings and so decided to ignore the other part of her thats screaming at the pull she feels towards Armaan. And I have to admit i enjoyed the pang of jealousy Armaan felt, I know most of the issues between AR are due to misunderstandings but the sympathy and understanding the readers have about Ridhima's insecurities (especially being a girl reader) i couldn't help kinda enjoying Armaan also feeling that little insecurity by seeing another man with Ridhima.

Awww thank you! :D

The insecure girl in Ridhima would not go away so quickly though, and I hope that the coming few parts would clarify why.

I love a bit of jealousy, and a tiny bit of jealousy often shows that the person cares about you enough not to lose you. Happy that you enjoyed the jealous Armaan. Might see even more instances of him in the future ;)

Sigh i'm really looking forward to how you decide to turn things in this party, i'm sure it will be an eventful party.

It is most definitely going to be an eventful party! :D

Please update soon!

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