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Tahmina Aliya Begum

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Posted: 12 years ago

#251

i like how this part left us with some answers but more questions as well. plus, you didn't go OTT with the small part that you revealed with Riddhima's POV of the kidnapping..its really easy to just let it slip and reveal too much in that part but you subtly left us with little detail but enough to know that so far she's safe and in a state of awareness where she can try to escape

looking forward to the next part, make it soon =)

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hira

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Posted: 12 years ago

#252

wow im so glad i found this. knw what i use to read it when i was in school and now im in my 2nd year of uni. bt rtil remembrd it. :D plz do complete this story. i've read ur other stuff and lovd all of them. this one is great as usual. i stil cnt tel u how happy i am to find this:D

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Krani

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Posted: 12 years ago

#253

EXCERPT FOR NEXT CHAPTER!

"Abey Saale, batata hain ki tere daant todu?" Rahul snapped as he grabbed the man by his collar, threw him against the wall, his arm pulled back threateningly. A small gasp escaped Muskaan's mouth just as Anjali held her hand to stop her from making a move to stop Rahul.

Armaan and Atul casually leant against he brick wall, while Armaan was looking at his nails, uncaring whether the man was beaten to a pulp to get the information, Atul was alert, and waiting to step in just in case things went out of hand.

"S-s-sir..." The man cowered, his hands in front of his face, trying to protect himself from Rahul's anger, "S-sir, please..."

Rahul tightened his grip, and the man choked a bit. Anjali felt the scowl settle on her face but she tightened her grip on Muskaan's hand as she felt a tremor of fear go through her at seeing this side of Rahul.

"I...Sir, I dropped her. I dropped Dr. Ridhima at the park that's 10 minutes away from the hospital" He finally said, and a silence followed after that as everyone processed the information.