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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 7
Thanks to all my frnds who have encouraged me to write. this chapter is dedicated to all u guys. love u all 🤗
Niru stepped into the cafe and was in all smiles when she saw chandu looking at her. And for chandu, it seemed like God had finally showed a way to seek revenge. And chandu smiled at her as he thought how he would fulfill his promise he made to the dying Shagun...
He glanced at her, she was looking beautiful. Not that she dint look beautiful on the other days, but today she looked WOW. Wearing a white churidaar and her hair left open, she looked stunning. Chandu just kept glancing at her, and Niru felt shy as she felt his strong gaze on her. She shyly looked at the ground and chandu realized that she wasn't comfortable with his staring.
"aaj bahut acchhi lag rahi ho."
He blurted out of the blue, only to notice that his compliment made an already-crimson Niru turn into a scarlet one. She felt butterflies in her tummy when he said that.
"thank you" she mumbled. Soon there was silence between them as both din't know how to continue the conversation. And just to break the silence, Niru spoke up.
"Good morning Sir..." she said inspite of having her heart in her mouth in excitement. Her heart beat so fast that she felt that it would explode.
"Niru, kitni baar kaha hai ke mujhe chandu bulaya karo. Theen mahine ho gaye, baaki sab kaam toh tum itni acchi tarah se karti ho, bas yehi baat tumhe baar baar kyun yaad dilani padthi hai?"
"oh sorry chandu, woh kya hai ki boss ko naam se bulane ki aadat nahi hai na. Isiliye." She said as she giggled.
"accha, woh sab toh thik hai, lekin aaj ke din tum kyun aa gayi? Maine kal kaha tha na ke aaj chutti hai."
Niru fumbled for words. "woh... actually, m .. mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha."
"haan kaho, lekin pehle mere sawaal ka jawab do."
"kaunsa sawal?" "yahi, ke tum aaj, chutti ke din, yahan kya kar rahi ho?"
"woh, mujhe yaad nahi tha ke aaj chutti hai... isiliye aa gayi. Aur waise bhi mujhe aapse kuch kehna tha" she said without meeting his eyes. Ofcourse she knew that it was a holiday. That's why she had come, so that she could talk to him...ALONE...
"hmmm" chandu said as he got up from the seat and went near her. He went close to her ears and whispered "ab bolo bhi, aisi kaunsi baat thi ke tumhe chutti ke din bhi cafe par aana pada..."
Niru's face turned red when she felt him standing so close to her. She felt his breath on her ears and neck as he whispered in her ears. Her throat dried as she was struggling to find some words.
All these reactions did not go unnoticed by chandu... he smiled at her secretly.
Finally Niru found some courage and spoke up "woh main aapse kuch kehna chahti thi..." she said this looking at the ground. Chandu looked at her, she was beautiful indeed. He tucked the strand of hair behind her ear, that was flying on her face. Niru felt goosebumps down her spine as he brushed his finger on her face...
"I love You..."
Niru was shocked. Chandu said the same words what she wanted to say to him...
"i love you niru. Pata nahi kab se, lekin main tumse pyar karne laga hoon. Din mein jab tum mere paas hoti ho, toh itna accha lagta hai, aur raat ko main sirf tumhare sapne dekhta hoon. Niru, kya tumhe bhi yeh mehsoos hota hai? Kya tum mujhse pyar karti ho?"
he paused for a while and said "main jaanta hoon, ke main yeh sab achanak bol raha hoon. Aur tumhe thode waqt ki zarurat hai iss sawal ka jawab dene ke liye. Iss liye, jitna waqt chahiye lelo. Main tumhare jawab ka intezar karunga."
She was still looking at the floor. Chandu looked at her and waited for her reply. But when he felt that she din't want to reply, he turned his back and started walking upto his counter where he was seated earlier.
"i love you"
Chandu turned back when she spoke these words. Though she wasn't looking up at him, she was smiling... infact she was blushing.
"really?" he asked.
She nodded her head in confirmation.
"toh ek baar meri taraf dekhkar yeh baat kaho Niru"
She looked up at him and into his eyes.
"i love you chandu" she said, this time looking into his eyes. Chandu walked upto her and hugged her. He hugged her tightly and she reciprocated by hugging him equally tight with her eyes shut.
His hands were on her back and waist, while she clutched his shirt tightly. He brushed his hand on her long silky hair and tightened his grip on her. She felt his touch burn her skin. Her heart beat hard against her chest as she felt his lips brushing her shoulders. He clutched her hair with his hand and arched her head backwards. She moved her hands round his neck and hung onto him as she grew weak in her knees with his touch.He traced her shoulders, her collar bone, her neck, her throat, her ears and finally, her cheeks with his lips, while his eyes were shut tight, trying to feel every passing moment of passion... He was about to proceed towards her lips. Niru was so lost in the moment that she whispered his name hoarsely.
"Chanduuu..."
Chandu opened his eyes. Soon he realized that they would soon cross their limit and would end up doing something wrong if they dit stop.
Chandu broke the hug, which left Niru a bit disappointed. She had definitely enjoyed this moment and the disappointment was quite evident on her face. She wanted to be loved more, she wanted to feel his touch, she wanted him close to her...
"Mujhe galat mat samajhna Niru, main nahi chahta ke hum shaadi se pehle koi bhi hadh paar karein. Hum jaldh se jaldh shaadi karenge."
No sooner had he uttered these words, Niru felt some strange joy inside her. Her expressions changed. She was extremely happy, but suddenly, she felt sad.
"kya hua?itni sad kyun ho gayi? Ab tumhe itni jaldi hai ke tum shaadi tak intezar nahi kar sakti" he said in a teasing tone.
Niru blushed. She looked at the floor and spoke to him.
"chandu, cheee kya bol rahe ho? Mera woh matlab nahi tha.."
"oh toh, tumhe yeh sab pasand nahi? Im sorry" he said seriously..
"nahi aisa nahi hai, mujhe pasand hai..." she bit her lips as soon as she said these words. She slowly looked up at chandu, only to see him smirking at her... she punched him playfully and shyly hugged him. He hugged her back. They were silent for a while.
"kya hua Niru?"
"mere baba... main shaadi kaise kar sakti hoon? Agar maine shaadi ki, toh mere baba ka khayal kaun rakhega? Mere alawa unka koi nahi hai..."
"shhh... aaj se tumhare baba, mere baba. Aur main apne baba ka poora khayal rakhunga. Main unka damaad nahi, beta banke unka khayal rakhunga."
She looked at him as he stated this. She was glad. Really glad. She hugged him back.
"accha ab romance bahut hua, main tumhe ghar wapas chod deta hoon."
She quietly agreed as she blushed. They sat on his bike and rode off to the place where she stayed. Soon they reached her home and she got off the bike.
"ander chalo na, maushi se mil lo, chai peete jaao..."
"nahi, mujhe wapas cafe jaana hai. Kuch zaruri kaam hai. Phir kabhi aaunga, aur waise bhi, ab toh aana jaana laga hi rahega na... hai na????"
She smiled at him and playfully shut his helmet...
"bye" she waved out to him and turned back to go home...
He pressed the horn of his bike, signalling her to turn back. She turned to him, smiled at him, mouthed him an "i love you", blushed and ran inside the house.
Sarja who was watching this at a distance, felt a sharp pain in his heart. Though he saw Niru only turning back and smiling at the man in the helmet when he pressed the horn, he felt hurt... hurt because he too honestly and secretly liked Niru from day one. Though they had only been friends, sarja actually liked Niru, though he never confessed it to her...
"mujhe Niru se baat karni hogi. Yeh kisse baat kar rahi thi? Aur yeh kaun hai jo ise roz roz usey ghar drop karne aata hai? Aur agar kuch baat hai, toh Niru ne mujhe bataya kyun nahi? Waise toh hum ek doosre se kuch nahi chupate, toh phir yeh baat Niru ne kyun nahi batayi? Aur pata nahi ye helmet wala aadmi kaun hai? Kahin usne Niru ke sath kuch galat kiya toh? Aur yeh banda uss cafe se toh bilkul nahi hoga jahan Niru kaam karti hai, hota toh kya pakkya mujhe nahi batata? Aane do Niru ko, ab wohi mere saare sawalon ka jawab degi..."
Thinking this, he went inside the house into the hall, waiting for Niru to come in...
Niru was just going into the house. Chandu was just about to leave the place when he saw a disturbed sarja in the verandah of the house.
"hmmm, toh Niru ko mere sath dekhkar pareshani ho rahi hai sarja ko... acchha hai, tadapne do usey..." chandu thought to himself and smiled, still with his helmet on...
And as he thought about Niru, he thought "I'm sorry Niru, sarja se badla lene ke liye mujhe tumse yeh pyar ka Natak karna hi hoga... mere iraada sirf sarja ko takleef pahunchaaane ka hai. In sabke beech mein, tumhe takleef pahunchaane ka bilkul iraada nahi hai. Cafe mein humare beech jo kuch bhi hua, woh sab jhoot tha. Maine yeh sab sirf isliye kiya, taaki tumhe mere "pyar" par yakeen ho jaye. Lekin main bilkul nahi chahta tha ke hum ek doosre ke itne kareeb aa jaayein. Main kuch palon ke liye behek gaya tha... I'm sorry, main jaanta hoon ke jab tumhe sacchhai ka pata chalega, toh tumhe bahut takleef hogi. uss sarja se badla lene ke liye, Main tumhare sath bhi galat karne jaa raha hoon. Ho sakey toh mujhe maaf karna. Lekin main yeh sab isiliye kar raha hoon kyunki iske alawa mere paas koi option nahi hai... Kyunki, shagun se kiya hua wada mujhe poora karna hai, yahi mere zinda hone ka maqsath hai, aur wajah bhi... trust me, mera tareeka galat hai, lekin iraada nahi... I'm sorry Niru, really sorry..."
Saying this in his mind, he rode off to the cafe... he decided to keep a distance from Niru since he dint want them to be so physically close. Yes, it did arouse a few decayed nerves when he felt so close to Niru. After all he was a normal man, and he was this close to a female after such a long time. He felt ashamed of how he behaved in the cafe; he himself could not behave that he became so weak and lustful at that moment. But he did not forget his promise of revenge. And as he rode, he thought about his next step. He decided to meet sarja...soon...
so this was it... next part: confrontations, encounters, misunderstandings, love and hatred!!!
silent readers, do press the like tab!!! 😃
Edited by dezma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey dez superb update...i luved d confession scene..and chandu is acting dat he luvs niru just to take revenge wid sarja..but i'm sure he'l start liking her very soon..and who is dis shagun??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lovely update Dez😛... awww felt bad for Sarja💔... his small heart just broke🥺... Gosh what's the matter with Chandu😲... why is he behaving so revengeful... loved the ChandNi moment too😊... but somewhere i'm not liking the fact that he's using poor Niru in this😭... i hope he realises his mistake soon😊...


not fair Dez you didn't let out the fact who is Shagun & what did Sarja do to her that Chandu is revengeful😆... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nikita_David

hey dez superb update...i luved d confession scene..and chandu is acting dat he luvs niru just to take revenge wid sarja..but i'm sure he'l start liking her very soon..and who is dis shagun??

lol thanks niki... ul know abt shagun soon!!! but m sure u can understand n tel that she is someone very close to chandu!!!! 😃
next part, ill update tomo... m tryin to finish the story asap!!! coz its a long one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sujji0609

Lovely update Dez😛... Thanks sujji.. glad u liked it...awww felt bad for Sarja💔... his small heart just broke🥺... Gosh what's the matter with Chandu😲... why is he behaving so revengeful...had to show it, ul know y wen u read the latter updates... loved the ChandNi moment too😊 hehe wrote it on a special request 😳... but somewhere i'm not liking the fact that he's using poor Niru in this😭... i hope he realises his mistake soon😊... aww lets see whether he will realize his mistake... whether he considers his love or his revenge greater, well u ahve to wait n see...😊


not fair Dez you didn't let out the fact who is Shagun & what did Sarja do to her that Chandu is revengeful😆 awww sujji, ul know dear... patience, thats all i can say... ul know soon, but not the next update... continue soon eagerly awaiting your next update...😊 i will i will thanks a lot

Edited by dezma - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omgg 7 parts update kar diye tune? :OO ohhh lemme read and comment on alll...rukkooo
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sshikhaa

omgg 7 parts update kar diye tune? :OO ohhh lemme read and comment on alll...rukkooo

sure, take ur time!!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow dii an amazing update!!!...👏👏👏

(i soo love receiving PMs related to updates)

nice!!!😊😛😊😃

actually had read the update yesterday but sorry couldnot comment

but dii i am confused about chandNi especially chandu!!!!😕😕

what is intriguing the most is definitely chandu's behaviour!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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waise the CHANDNI part was cute!!!😛😊😛😊😉😉

Hoping things will work out fine at the end and completely

trusting you at this!!!😃😃

Continue soon dii...😃😃

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arjun-forever

wow dii an amazing update!!!...👏👏👏

Thanks Hun!!!!! 😃
(i soo love receiving PMs related to updates)

nice!!!😊😛😊😃

actually had read the update yesterday but sorry couldnot comment

thats okie!!! n yeah, just like how J hates "thank you's" i hate "sorry's"... so next time, avoid sorry!!! 😳
but dii i am confused about chandNi especially chandu!!!!😕😕

what is intriguing the most is definitely chandu's behaviour!!!

mishty, ur nt the only one confused!!!! all of them are!!! ill be updating the next part in a while from now!!! n yeah, im completeing, actually rushing, with the flashback part, so that the story proceeds quicker!!!

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