Uncharmed..MG Part 1

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Characters

1. Geet -An Angel
A Beautiful angel, who saves innocent people from death. She saves people who are going to be killed by evil demons and darklighters.She has so many powers as she is angel.
Day time job is that she is a cafe waitress
She falls in Love with Maan and her whole life changes.
2. Maan- A Darklighter
He kills innocents who are a threat to the Evil Demon leader. He kills witches and angels who are a threat to the evil in the world.
His latest assignment is Geet and he sets out to kill her. He has no mercy.
He falls in love with Geet and his life changes
3. Pari- Geet's sister and half Angel half witch
She is able to track locations of innocents. She can move things with her mind. She can freeze time. She helps Geet in her work. She is younger than Geet.
4. Meera- Geet sister, has no powers but the abiity to read minds and see who are evil beings and who are not.
5. Naina Devi-
Grandma of Geet Pari and Meera, whose death unlocked her granddaughters powers and showed them what powers and what duties they have
6. The Evil Leader,
He wants to take over the human world but finds it difficult due to angels and witches so he sends Maan to kill them his most trusted assiliant.
more characters to be introduced later
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---------Prologue--------
Maan walked into the room in anger. He turned to see Geet getting dressed for another day in the Khurana Mansion.
'I warned you not to go' Maan yelled at Geet. Geet turned to face him and said
'You no longer tell me what to do understood' Geet yelled back. Maan grabbed her shoulders and banged her aganist the wall and said hoarsley to her
'For God's sake Geet I'm trying to save you, protect you, I Love You'
Geet schoffed at his remark.
'Save me, yeah right, we both know why I'm here, I've read the prophercy, that the first child born by me and you together will be the most powerful being. You just need me so i can have your child' Maan grabbed Geet closer and store into her eyes.
'Let go of me your hurting me, haven't you hurt me enough' Geet said.
'Hurting you, Geet your hurting me, Can't you see how much I Love you, and the prophercy makes no difference to me, i just want you to love me'
'Love, Love, I loved the Maan who was a normal human being, I loved the Maan who was sweet and caring, I loved the Maan who was not a darklighter' Maan put his head down.
'Geet please listen nothing has changed, I still love you and i know you still love me otherwise you would have left me by now'
'Have you ever let me go?' Geet said.
'Geet its for your own good i can't protect you out there' Maan said.
'We both know why I'm not leaving. Its not because I love you, its because what happened to Meera, i don't want it to happen to Pari'
'so your trying to save your sister'
'yes thats why i'm here otherwise god knows what you would have done'
'Geet, please Pari is like a sister to me'
'Bull shit. your a darklighter, if you found Pari then you would have killed her. I'm only staying here with you for you so you don't hurt Pari'
Maan turned to leave the room then turned back and looked at Geet and asked
'Geet we were so much in love what happened to us' Maan asked. Geet looked at him and Maan at her and then Maan left the room.
'I still Love you Maan, but i can't let you ruin my family' Geet thought to herself.
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***Index***

Prologue -Page 1--ABOVE
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it yaar ...nice concept ....waiting for 20th may !!
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Originally posted by: mrk_1

loved it yaar ...nice concept ....waiting for 20th may !!

So am i.. 19th May is the LAST ever EXAM in my life
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Posted: 14 years ago
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will be waiting for it..
the prologue is interesting dear
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sounds VAMPIRE stories but as Its MAAN n GEET so acceptable .. i love thrilling ones and dis sounds ur another terrific FF
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hmm sounds intresting...
although i felt vampire stories r childish one but maan n geet ve change the spirit...
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Interesting Will be waiting for the update

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