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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
thanks update up today
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: t_areeb

love the love between non-humans, atlast they can live together forever

might be able to live together eh good vs Evil
Toleration.. lets see where the story goes
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Posted: 14 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: amzu32

nice concept ...

cant wait for the update

today will commence the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nahtani88

superb

cont soon
thank u for the pm

wait for next pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: gangesegb

nice concept...loved it...

plz do cont soon...gud luck 4r ur exams...

thanks exams didnt go well though but thanks and wait for update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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THIS FF IS BASED IN UK!

Part 1

Somewhere in Manchester

'Meera' a voice said. A girl turned around. She was working in a busy call centre as the head office manager. She was wearing a white shirt with a black waist coat and and a short skirt. Her hair was tied back into a high pony. She was wearing black heels. She walked towards the person who called her.

'Yes James whats up?' She asked quickly as she had a lot of work today. 'Today' She said impatiently stamping her foot.

'Phone call its from St Mary Hospital in Paddington London' He replied as he handed the phone to her and walked away. Meera picked up the phone and then heard something that shocked her out of her wits.

'I'll be there' She said. She sprinted to her cabin grabbed her keys and phone and rushed out. Her staff was confused at what happened to there boss who was always joyful but strict with work. She stopped at the last office before leaving and quickly stepped in. Sitting there was one of her close friends Jenny.

'Jenny, an emergency has cropped up I have to leave can you take care of everything and lock up.' Meera asked swiftly. Jenny noticed tears in her eyes. She knew the only people who can make Meera weak is her family. 'Go' Jenny said softly putting a hand on her shoulder. Meera ran out to her car and started driving fast towards the M6 Motorway to Birmingham to get the other M40 motorway to London. 'I just hope everything is fine' Meera hoped as she drove like a mad woman down the motorway.

Somewhere in Birmingham

'now that's perfect' Geet said as she put finishing touches on her black forest gateau she made for the caf she worked in. Geet was one of the well known caf waitreses in Caf De Rouge. She put a smile on everyones face. She often sang songs for customers as well who praised her. She also often did cooking as well. Everyone was a fan of her food. Geet's dream was to one day open up her own restaurant and serve her dishes there. But since she still had one more year of University to go, she worked part time to pay for her expenses as she didn't want Meera to toll any trouble for her as Meera already took care of her fees. So Geet would take care of her own spenditure. Geet smiled as she took the cake out to the Mantlepiece placed it down.

'Now that is what you call pefection' Someone said from behind her. Geet turned around to see her best friend Karan. She had known Karan since she started University. They had been best friends since ages, 'Thanks Karuuu Saruuu '

'Geet please not that name again geetu peetu'

'Karannn don't'

'GEEET phone call for you line 2' Joe the owner of the caf said who treated Geet as a daughter. Karan went and sat down. Geet walked to the phone. She heard the other end. Her hand started shaking. Joe and Karan noticed. She dropped the phone.

'What happened Geet?' asked Karan.

'I need to go home back to London now'

'But Geet its night and the trains are on strike today'

'KARAN I DON'T CARE I WILL CATCH A FLIGHT FOR ALL I CARE MY FAMILY NEED ME' Geet shouted. Karan offered to drive her. Joe bid her farewell.

4 Hours later Meera arrived at the hospital. It was very busy. She went to the reception.

'Excuse me' she said. The receptionist was busy on the phone. She signalled to Meera to wait for one minute.

'NO I DON'T have a damn minute. Now you tell me right now where is Mrs Handa!' Meera screamed. Another nurse came running down the hall. She fired the receptionist.

'This is not how you do customer service. This is the 5th time you been on a non official call your fire and you Miss Handa, come with me, your sisters Geet and Pari are already here'

Meera followed the nurse. Geet had arrived one hour earlier.

'Di' Pari said when she saw her. Geet and Meera hugged her. Meera stroked her grandmother's head.

'What happened' asked Meera who sat down with her sisters. Pari lay down on her sisters lap and Geet put her head on Meera's shoulder. For them Meera was the strongest. The best sister. The one who can keep the world afloat if she wished.

'I don't know, But Meera di, grams lied to us' Pari sniffed. Meera looked at her confused. 'what do you mean?'

'She suffered from 2 heart attacks. Those chest pains were causes of that. She lied to us that she was all right' Pari said. Pari being the only college going girl at 18 lived with her grandmother. Geet lived in a student accommodation in Birmingham and Meera worked at the head office in Manchester. Pari explained that Grams (there grandmother which they called her grams )had another stroke. Geet and Pari had fallen asleep.

'Grams please you have to get well' Meera sighed. The machine started bleeping. Grams was having trouble breathing. Meera ran to get the doctor. Pari and Geet had woken up.

'Grams Grams' Pari and Geet cried.

Grams tried to say 'danger, key, box' she said as she opened her fist. The machine died out. Grams had passed away. Pari and Geet and Meera cried. They had lost there grams.

The funeral was arranged two days later. Pari took the key. She wondered what grams meant. She went into grams room after the funeral. Meera and Geet were in the living room, Geet had decided to transfer her university here. Meera had been transferred to London as well. Geet and Meera didn't want to be alone anymore. They all needed eachother.

Meanwhile Pari walked in grams room. She had tears in her eyes. She then saw a box. The key matched the lock on the box. She opened it. Inside was a old book and a letter addressed to all 3 of them.

'Pari, I always knew you would be the one to snoop around my room and find this box and letter. ' Pari smiled and laughed and 'Grams you knew me well'

Girls, my precious girls. I tried all my life to keep you safe. Tried to keep you away from your destiny. But one cannot run from it. If your reading this letter, then it means I'm no longer here with you. Girls, you are not normal girls. Geet you are an angel. The most powerful angel ever. Pari, you are a half witch and half anger. And Meera my darling Meera, you are the strength. You are powerful in itself. Your life is now in danger as now I'm gone your protection is gone. You were protected by a motherly charm so that you could not be found. But alas its gone. You 3 are the worlds most powerful beings. You are there to save innocents and the world from evil. But mind you Evil will come looking for you and your powers, its your duties. Make me proud girls.

Grams.

Pari then opened a book which released there powers. 'Powers of the witches and angels rise calls across that reach the skies come to us and be near come to us and settle here' Pari read. As soon as she read it the whole house shaked. Geet and Meera were in bed. But a white pure light came over them and Pari and then vanished. There destiny had been sealed. A new fate awaited them.

In the other side of town a young witch was getting ready for bed. She just turned the lights off when she heard a noise. She walked towards the noise and was shocked.
He appeared in her room magically not a door nor a knock. With one swift movement and a wave of his hands he locked and boarded all the doors. Shaina a witch with the power to deflect (if someone tries to throw something at her she can put her hand up and it will not touch her and if anyone throws fireballs at her then the fireball will not touch her). Shaina turned scared and saw him standing in front of her.
'we can do this the hard way or the easy way' he another
'i call upon the ancient powers to remove the darklightet from our midst. He will be gone and will turn mist? Shaina said a spell.
'really a spell did you think that would work on me, come on Shaina I thought you were clever than that' he laughed
'Maan' she whispered. The most powerful darklighter. Shaina had read about him. He walked up to her calmly Shaina was rooted to her feet. He stood behind her and put one arm around her waist bringing her back to rest on his back. He took his athame out ( a knife to kill witches and take there powers) He traced the knife from her forehead to her stomach.
'please' she started
'please don't hurt me' he mocked. He laughed he kiss her neck and stabbed her.
'don't worry dying is not hard' He smirked and dissapeared.

UNDERWORLD

The Head Demon's office.

It was a horrible place to be. There were human parts in one corner. They were often used for the Head Demon dinner for organs were needed for demon spells. The Head demon lay at the bed One human girl was under him as the head demon made love to her. She was one of the human girls that the Head Demon captured.. She was a pure human girl originally but the Head Demon had lusted after her and lured her.The head demon would often seek out the best looking human girls to make love to and relish as he had most fun with human girls even though he had a sexy hot queen demon. The girl now was under his clutches. She was stuck there with no escape as the Head Demon made love to her. The head demon would keep the most purest girls with him and torture them with his love making. After which he would drink there blood as this made him stronger as pure blood always did. Love making with them was a hobby and he loved torturing the girls. He had just finished making love to the current girl and was about to drink her blood when a knock disturbed him.

'your lucky sweety, you have a few more seconds alive'

'Sir Maan is here' A minion said. The head demon looked at him and told him to make Maan wait. He walked up to the girl and said,'Now honey where were we?'. He said as he drank her blood. The blood gave him more strength. He then threw the girls body into the fire and walked out.

'So Maan all done' asked The head demon.

'yes Sir, and here is here power' Maan replied giving him a bright ball. 'Thank you Maan. That witch was killing to many demons. If we want to get a hold in the human world then these witches need to die' He said sitting down. 'Sir I understand' Maan smiled.

A telepathic voice then connected to the head demons. Maan wondered what was wrong.

'Maan' The head demon said.

'yes Sir,'

'New news. The old witch, Savitri Handa has popped the clogs. Her daughters have now got there powers. They are the most powerful beings in the world.' The head demon said.

'So what do we do?'

'well they only have come into there powers. I doubt they know anything. But two of the girls are not that powerful anyways. But its that girl.'

'what girl'

'MINION, bring the pictures' The head demon said.

The minion bought the photos. He saw the 3 girls. All were pretty. But one girl stood out the most. Maan looked at her and fell for her at the photo.

'This girl, Maan.' The head demon pointed to Geet photo.

'she is very powerful. She has a protection charm too. So since you are half human, you have to get close to her and then find a way to kill her. It has been said she will be the reason for our doom so work hard'

'yes Sir'

PRECAP:: Geet and Maan meet. Meera and Pari aware about powers. There first demon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#67
Awesome start::
Luvd it
So geet is an angel,pari a witch & meera is the strength & maan is the evil demon
Let's see how maaneet fall in love & will maan be able 2 kill her
Cont soon Xx...
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OMG this is so good! I am loving the concept.
Great first part.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lov it...
interesting upd...
do continue soon...

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